Aj vs lita

[dylandartz]

Ladies and gentleman welcome to wwe Monday night raw the main event aj vs lita bra and panties match aj comes down wearing her love bite t shirt and jean shorts lita comes down wearing her usual attire the start fighting and aj gets the black widow locked in and strips lita to her American flag bra and then starts celebrating while doing this lita hits twist of state and strips aj to her hot pink bra then start at it again lita goes up and hits a moonsault dive and strips her to her matching hot pink thong and lita wins lita takes her pants off to show her orange thong and to make aj more embrassaed lita hangs aj by her thong from the rafters

[smjimmie1348]

Hey could you make the next one a little longer like I am doing and plz put punctuation it because if you do you will get better at writing like me

[DrVillian]

I honestly think your the same person,you both make exactly the same mistakes and it seems like too much of a coincidence.

[MKDude]

I agree with Dr. Villain, you two are almost certainly the same person. Also, I hate to be rude, but this was terrible.One paragraph, zero build up, hopelessly difficult to read, not a good story at all. I could honestly write a criticism longer than the story itself, and that's without going into the idea that you just tried to give yourself tips while still not being able to write.

There are a number of fantastic, well written WWE Diva ENF stories on here. Read them, memorize why they're good, think about what's a good formula and what would be unique and creative. And please, get a spell check. Re-read your own story and ask yourself if you think this is worth posting.

[smjimmie1348]

How would we be the same people if I asked him to do this and he asked me to do a Brie vs kelly saga but dartz plz listen to what they say it will help you progress as a writer and you are going to need it because I want this in a fued like you are asking me to write with Brie bella vs kelly kelly

[Jack_The_Ripper]

Really an instant classic. I thoroughly enjoyed the build up and the depth of the characters in this story. I may be alone here, but I believe that this has the potential to be the best WWE ENF story on the OCC forums, if not already. Keep up the tremendous work, I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens next.

[smjimmie1348]

Hey jack are you ok just wondering because I have a idea for you for your fantasy wrestling show

[dylandartz]

Due To some personal things in my life I will no longer be creating stories

[smjimmie1348]

What's wrong what happened

[DrVillian]

cause your the same person and you realise that people know your the same person, so you have just decided to stop.