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[SPLOTCH11]

Originally Posted by Z678Vash

Well it's your story so you have every right to do whatever you want with it. If people aren't adding to it then they shouldn't complain if you want to clean it up. That's the main reason why I have my stories rated at 13+ instead of 18+. I also tried to be as clear as I could in the Guidelines page of what I don't want it the story, and if an author doesn't follow them then they shouldn't be surprised when they see it was deleted. Granted at this time I have only ever deleted 5 maybe 6 chapters total. Out of the 598 chapters between Forgetful Lilly and June/Mimi I don't think I have been unreasonable. I hate limiting authors, but I have my guidelines set up a certain way for a reason.

On an annoying note, I have learned that I am unable to create a new Interactive story. I am not paying for the Basic Membership because I have other things I can better spend my hard earned money on. If I want to create a new Interactive story I will have to delete one of my others. I will probably delete Kingdom Hearts ENF because no one seems interested in adding to that one

Yeah, that's why I was thinking of deleting Camp Clearwater, to be able to create a new story.

[ewong247]

Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11

Yeah, that's why I was thinking of deleting Camp Clearwater, to be able to create a new story.

Camp Clearwater has some good jumping off points, but I got tired of every character hiding the fact they are using padded bras and other clothes that hide their insecurities about their bodies. I like when it's focused on one character, but reading all the chapters and knowing all of them are hiding something just makes me a little frustrated that they would all accept each other if they just were themselves. Just an opinion.

If you create a new story, I have an idea. A scientist, who has been insecure about her body since she was a kid, develops a special ray that is able to shrink one woman's breasts (and other body parts) in order to enlarge another woman's (preferably her own). The ray must absorb mass in order to enlarge a part of the body. This can have side effects (like age regressing the user if nothing had been absorbed by the ray), or possibly an enemy somehow gets hold of it and wreaks havoc.

[ewong247]

Originally Posted by Z678Vash

Well it's your story so you have every right to do whatever you want with it. If people aren't adding to it then they shouldn't complain if you want to clean it up. That's the main reason why I have my stories rated at 13+ instead of 18+. I also tried to be as clear as I could in the Guidelines page of what I don't want it the story, and if an author doesn't follow them then they shouldn't be surprised when they see it was deleted. Granted at this time I have only ever deleted 5 maybe 6 chapters total. Out of the 598 chapters between Forgetful Lilly and June/Mimi I don't think I have been unreasonable. I hate limiting authors, but I have my guidelines set up a certain way for a reason.

On an annoying note, I have learned that I am unable to create a new Interactive story. I am not paying for the Basic Membership because I have other things I can better spend my hard earned money on. If I want to create a new Interactive story I will have to delete one of my others. I will probably delete Kingdom Hearts ENF because no one seems interested in adding to that one

I forgot that Writing.com changed their policy recently and only allow a few interactive stories for free accounts. Kingdom Hearts ENF seems like a good choice to replace.

By the way, about the character of Maxine. I thought she made a good counterpoint to Kate's amateur work. Max is basically the Hugh Hefner of ENF, and has an endless army of bikini-clad women to do her bidding. The fact her Achilles heel is her sister, who may or may not be prone to ENF, is an interesting concept. Of course, it's your decision to go with it. Actually, I might be more interested in a story about celebrity ENF scenarios. Don't have any ideas for that though. The ideas you created for your own characters so far are great, so I'm sure whatever you create would be fun!

[Z678Vash]

Originally Posted by ewong247

I forgot that Writing.com changed their policy recently and only allow a few interactive stories for free accounts. Kingdom Hearts ENF seems like a good choice to replace.

By the way, about the character of Maxine. I thought she made a good counterpoint to Kate's amateur work. Max is basically the Hugh Hefner of ENF, and has an endless army of bikini-clad women to do her bidding. The fact her Achilles heel is her sister, who may or may not be prone to ENF, is an interesting concept. Of course, it's your decision to go with it. Actually, I might be more interested in a story about celebrity ENF scenarios. Don't have any ideas for that though. The ideas you created for your own characters so far are great, so I'm sure whatever you create would be fun!

I suppose I could keep Maxine and her sister Mindy, but I'll have to think about it

I think there was an interactive story called Celebrity ENF. It didn't get updated really often, and it wasn't very good if memory serves. I did have some celebrities appear in my June and Mimi story. They were a lot of fun, but they too got kind of convoluted.

I haven't decided what story I will replace Kingdom Hearts ENF yet. I still need time to think about it

[Zelten]

I'm pretty sure even if you do delete one of your stories, you still won't be able to replace it because interactives are restricted to paying accounts.
Speaking of which, Writing.com made me an open deal to get a good discount on a basic account. I'm considering biting the bullet for the team so I can make more interactives but I'm not sure. The offer expires on June 5th.

[jimmythehand]

Originally Posted by ewong247

Camp Clearwater has some good jumping off points, but I got tired of every character hiding the fact they are using padded bras and other clothes that hide their insecurities about their bodies. I like when it's focused on one character, but reading all the chapters and knowing all of them are hiding something just makes me a little frustrated that they would all accept each other if they just were themselves. Just an opinion.

I respect your opinion on this but, iirc, wasn't the whole concept of Camp Clearwater that each main character had their own hidden, embarrassing (to them at least) body issues? That it to say: it was an artifice exposed story so it stuck to the concept in that regard, though obviously that won't be to everyone's taste.

As someone who's favourite erotic theme is artifice exposed - particularly stuffed/padded bra ENF - and someone who made a very small contribution to the story I personally enjoyed the various story lines, though I agree with Splotch that in several story lines things went a little farther down the sex and/or humiliation road than generally works for this sub-genre (or indeed the ENF genre as a whole). With that in mind, I'd agree (not that Splotch needs my consent) that it would be fine to get rid of Camp Clearwater if its slot is needed. I would request one thing of you though Splotch, if you don't mind: leave it up until you're actually ready to put a new story in there, just so it's available to read until it can't be and so people have an opportunity to save any chapters they want to before it goes.

Enjoyed the ride, looking forward to the next one.

[Ruff Wanderer]

Added a few chapters to the Professor story line if anyone is interested.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...nal-MisConduct

[Z678Vash]

Originally Posted by Zelten

I'm pretty sure even if you do delete one of your stories, you still won't be able to replace it because interactives are restricted to paying accounts.
Speaking of which, Writing.com made me an open deal to get a good discount on a basic account. I'm considering biting the bullet for the team so I can make more interactives but I'm not sure. The offer expires on June 5th.

Will screw Writing.com then. If I have to pay in order to post more stories then I am absolutely positively undeniably not interested. That just makes my blood boil

My suggestion is don't bother wasting your money. What is the point in paying them? So you can post stories?

Ultimately it's your choice, but here's something to keep in mind. You start paying for the basic membership and add a few new interactive stories. At the start they get a whole bunch of chapters added. Then they start coming less often until finally it just stops altogether, and then you have more stories you don't know what to do with. It happened to my stories, and it's happened so many other stories as well. It's depressing

[Derelict]

Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11

I tried to do the same thing with Camp Clearwater ENF. It barely gets updated and most of the story has turned out way too hardcore for my tastes. I've wanted to clean it up, or delete it entirely, but receive massive objection from the writers whenever I touch it.

I say there's nothing wrong with a fresh start, if it's too convoluted to add to anymore.

Splotch, if you truly are unhappy with Camp Clearwater, go ahead and delete it for something you (hopefully) will like better. I was disappointed when it first disappeared, and I did complain at the time. However, new beginnings can be a good thing, so you now have "my blessing" to delete it.

And, I apologize if some of my additions were not in the original spirit of the story. My tastes seem to balance on the edge of a knife; I'm too hardcore to be vanilla, and I'm too vanilla to be hardcore.

If anyone else complains about its deletion, they will get over it.

[SPLOTCH11]

Originally Posted by Derelict

Splotch, if you truly are unhappy with Camp Clearwater, go ahead and delete it for something you (hopefully) will like better. I was disappointed when it first disappeared, and I did complain at the time. However, new beginnings can be a good thing, so you now have "my blessing" to delete it.

And, I apologize if some of my additions were not in the original spirit of the story. My tastes seem to balance on the edge of a knife; I'm too hardcore to be vanilla, and I'm too vanilla to be hardcore.

If anyone else complains about its deletion, they will get over it.

well, the issue is, I don't think I get a new interactive story if I delete it. So, it would probably have to be a massive overhaul or trimming.

Don't worry about posting, always dug your stories and chapters. All my stories are somewhere on the edge, it's risky and you have to pull back sometimes, but it's what I personally like