Home Alone

[LSSno1fan]

Thanks for the positive feedback from everyone.

I've always liked the gradual strippings and the moments when they are almost stripped but save themselves at the last moment. Actually, towards the endof the adventre, when they lose their underwear, is when I start to lose interest but I know that a lot of people prefer ENF to EUF. That's also why I have a slower build up at the beginning.

The Home Alone concept can definitely be expanded and gives you almost the same freedom as doing a Haunted House based story. But not only do you have to think of scenarios for them to get into, you need to consider (relatively) believable reasons for them to end, or to escape them.

A sequel could be done in the future, either by myself or someone else, but I have no plans at the moment. I am not the most consistent or recurrent of contributors.

[duck22]

Wow! That was wicked, I've never red any story like that. Verry creative.

[cerindclvr]

This story was great fun -- excellent premise, nice comedic themes and sexy slapstick. All around enf goodness!

I would definitely love a sequel of some kind, perhaps with a lil more emphasis/description of the naughty bits once they get exposed? I had a lovely, clear image of the lovely main character otherwise..! Please do more!

[improvguy]

Pretty good ENF twist on an old childhood favorite. Like you, I prefer EUF over ENF and I'd love to see an EUF story from you. Regardless of what you decide to write, keep up the good work!

[FLP00]

Originally Posted by LSSno1fan

Thanks for the positive feedback from everyone.

I've always liked the gradual strippings and the moments when they are almost stripped but save themselves at the last moment. Actually, towards the endof the adventre, when they lose their underwear, is when I start to lose interest but I know that a lot of people prefer ENF to EUF. That's also why I have a slower build up at the beginning.

The Home Alone concept can definitely be expanded and gives you almost the same freedom as doing a Haunted House based story. But not only do you have to think of scenarios for them to get into, you need to consider (relatively) believable reasons for them to end, or to escape them.

A sequel could be done in the future, either by myself or someone else, but I have no plans at the moment. I am not the most consistent or recurrent of contributors.

I too prefer EUF to ENF. This story is well written and well paced. Brilliant job. The best part was the one in which Kevin takes off Skyler's pants, dooming her to one of the worst forms of humiliation; depantsing.

Whenever you feel like writing another story, I look forward to read it.