[ENF] The Naked Thief

[Lucerne]

Please forgive me if I do something wrong, this is my first post and I'm fairly new here. I recently got a message saying I don't contribute so this my attempt at doing so. I didn't really know where to put this, but it's just an idea of mine, so it's not real. I figured that makes it a story. I apologize if I am mistaken...

So I have this idea for a movie/video/motion picture:

It's about a woman that goes through various clothing stores stealing outfits. I haven't given her a name, or any other character for that matter. The woman is known as "The Naked Thief" because she leaves behind the clothes she stole from previous stores when she robs a new one. In fact that is the only evidence that she was ever there other than what's been stolen. I don't have too many major details, but this is what I have so far:

The story starts with a newspaper headline about another store being robbed. It turns out that the robberies are getting out of hand and people are losing serious money. So a secret meeting is held to hire a detective or something to catch. This is done secretly as not to alert the thief.

Now we actually get to meet her. An innocent looking woman would be seen walking the street at night. A car or person would pass by and she would wave or smile or something. Once the person or car is gone, she would sneak down alley and pop up near the back of a store. After sneaking her way in she strips down to nothing. I mean nothing nothing. No socks, shoes, jewelry or hair ties. She does so as to hone her skill in stealth, this adds more danger and motivation not to get caught. After she strips she proceeds to sneak about the store trying on this and that until she finds what she wants. After finding an outfit she leaves her old stuff where it is bound to be seen then promptly leaves.

Now I'm not sure whether we should see her do this a few times or if it should go straight to the big scene. The big scene as I call it is where she finally gets caught. She'd be going about her plan as usual, but while she's liking around something begins to feel off. She tries to shrug it off, but the distraction causes her to nearly slip up, not sure how this would be identified. Feeling off her game she decides to just go home. Upon returning to where she snuck in she finds her clothes are gone. For a brief moment she panicks. After recalling her first theft, of which she was naked when she broke in, she remembers she didn't get where she is by panicking. She'll just have get home without getting caught. Then it hits her, just steal something, despite the bad feeling and go home in it.

So she goes back to pick an outfit and escape. She gets a bit picky, but eventually spots one across the store. However when she's halfway there someone jumps from out of one those clothing racks that kids typically hide in and snaps a camera with a bright flash. The flash is important. After being briefly blinded she sees a man or woman doesn't matter standing before. I imagine a man with a curly mustache, trench coat, top hat, and monocle. The person tells her not to bother trying to cover up because he or she has already taken several pictures, with only the last having the flash on as to rub in the moment. The character then tells another to come out of hiding and to wait outside because they can handle it from there.

The thief admits her crimes, but pleads that it will be too humiliating to be brought in naked. The detective character then allows her to put on the outfit she was headed for, but cannot do so until morning when they are about to leave. So they wait until morning. When they step outside there is a crowd waiting, but no police. The detective character then explains that the outfit is made of previously stolen clothes and that is why it appealed to her. The character then says something like "Have at her!" And pushes the thief into the crowd. She stripped completely, once again I stress that she is wearing absolutely nothing. No shoes, no socks, no jewelry, nothing in her hair. The crowd proceeds to parade around the town waking people up and making sure everyone gets a good look at "The Naked Thief".

After parading her around the crowd ties her to something high off the ground by the hands, so she's dangling and gives her a mild whipping. She is eventually taken down when the police finally arrive and driven away. The last scene showing a person pickup a newspaper with the headline: "Caught Naked" under it it would the picture the detective character took, a naked and quite surprised thief.

I was very nervous when I wrote this post, took half an hour just to work up the nerve. I can take out the whipping part if that's not allowed. I read in the rules something about beastiality, but I'm not sure what counts.

I really hope my first post is good, not breaking any rules or put in the wrong section. As for the story feel free to point out holes and such. Also if anyone has the resources to make this a movie/video/motion picture feel free to do so because I would love to see that. I myself am not in the position to do so, but definitely would I could.

Thank you all.

[theking94]

great idea man

[Lucerne]

Thank you. I wasn't sure if anyone was actually interested.

[K.C.Silkwood]

Nice concept, I think you could add some details and work this up into something interesting

[zl00pedragl0ver]

Intriguing idea here!!

[Lucerne]

Thanks for the support guys. My internet is off right now and I have to use my phones data. >.<
If anyone has ideas about improvement I'm eagerly listening. I just might not be able to reply immediately.