New interactive ENF Story

[jm6379]

I'm actually stuck already mate. I'm not sure how to finish off the "nervous wreck" side. Much easier to tear down an ego b*tch.

Maybe I can use whatever you do to June eventually to add to May's slow breakdown? .

Originally Posted by jimmythehand

I was the one who started the June (May's sister) thread jm. By all means add to it or use her somewhere else. I'm certainly not up to writing a whole thread myself like you did (great work by the way) and I don't claim any ownership just because I wrote the first chapter. Imo one of the best things about these type of stories is that people can just chip in a chapter wherever they want as and when they have the time and inclination.

[jimmythehand]

^^ As I said, you're welcome to use the June character in any way you want, but you may be waiting some time if you wait for me to complete the entire June thread myself. I'm really more of an occasional chapter adder than full on and committed plot line writer - one of the main reasons I tend to gravitate towards these interactive stories when I do write anything. I admire those of you who can and do write full stories and story lines, and will add chapters as and when I can, but I suggest you proceed without me, either by having May react badly to June being exposed or having June find out about May's secret and take a role in stripping her (if you do decide to use June in the finale).

[jm6379]

Hi Jimmy, i like the idea of June getting exposed in the pool. Just want to check with you on who or what you intended the "portly middle aged man" to be?
I'm thinking of using June's exposure to add to May's nervous breakdown.

[jimmythehand]

Sounds good. I look forward to reading. I had no clear intentions on the middle aged man, other than being a senior member of camp staff; possibly the camp owner or manager. That said if that doesn't fit with what you need you can make of him what you please.

[SergeantC]

I have an idea for the character of Britney. I just need to work out the direction it will go in, and how to set it up. I may post in a day or twol

[SergeantC]

I worked out my Britney chapters, and they are now added. I hope you like them.

[jm6379]

Lots of wonderful new chapters!

[JesusDid]

writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933846-Mansion-Mystery <<< My attempt. Let me know what you think, and if it is worth continuing.

[jm6379]

Can see you wrote everything mate. 1 heck of an effort!

Originally Posted by JesusDid

writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933846-Mansion-Mystery <<< My attempt. Let me know what you think, and if it is worth continuing.

[jm6379]

Hi Jimmy, I've set June up nicely to be exposed. If you feel inspired please go ahead and write it. My thoughts are actually already on the chapter after, where May re-acts badly to June's exposure...

Originally Posted by jimmythehand

Sounds good. I look forward to reading. I had no clear intentions on the middle aged man, other than being a senior member of camp staff; possibly the camp owner or manager. That said if that doesn't fit with what you need you can make of him what you please.