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#81
10-15-2014, 12:36 PM
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Hey
Yea if you want but there's only one part between Brie and kelly right now you know what I will do both what was part 1 of the Brie vs kelly fued
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#82
10-15-2014, 02:27 PM
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Strip till naked
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#83
10-15-2014, 02:29 PM
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Name the saga whatever
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#84
10-15-2014, 05:50 PM
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Hey
Ok part 1 is typed and reviewed
And the strip till naked match is typed and reviewed
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#85
10-15-2014, 07:29 PM
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I'm just going to ask bluntly. Is English your first language? Your continuous errors are of those even a ten year old is taught not to make, and even with tutoring you don't improve. By all means if English is not your native tongue I give you props for trying to write, but if you were born and raised in an English country, these issues are just depressingly bad.
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#86
10-15-2014, 07:34 PM
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Hey
What are you talking about just because I post different than in my stories then I do when I post stuff like this and I have improved on the stories I have typed on my phone that I am currently writing on paper as of right now
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#87
10-15-2014, 09:42 PM
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Jimmie yes English is my language this just preview of how good Of story i can do next chapter will be better but I not posting, till u post something of Brie vs Kelly
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#88
10-15-2014, 10:44 PM
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Hey
Just start on it and I will try and post it tommorrow or tommorrow night
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