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Originally Posted by ewong247
Camp Clearwater has some good jumping off points, but I got tired of every character hiding the fact they are using padded bras and other clothes that hide their insecurities about their bodies. I like when it's focused on one character, but reading all the chapters and knowing all of them are hiding something just makes me a little frustrated that they would all accept each other if they just were themselves. Just an opinion.
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I respect your opinion on this but, iirc, wasn't the whole concept of Camp Clearwater that each main character had their own hidden, embarrassing (to them at least) body issues? That it to say: it was an artifice exposed story so it stuck to the concept in that regard, though obviously that won't be to everyone's taste.
As someone who's favourite erotic theme is artifice exposed - particularly stuffed/padded bra ENF - and someone who made a very small contribution to the story I personally enjoyed the various story lines, though I agree with Splotch that in several story lines things went a little farther down the sex and/or humiliation road than generally works for this sub-genre (or indeed the ENF genre as a whole). With that in mind, I'd agree (not that Splotch needs my consent) that it would be fine to get rid of Camp Clearwater if its slot is needed. I would request one thing of you though Splotch, if you don't mind: leave it up until you're actually ready to put a new story in there, just so it's available to read until it can't be and so people have an opportunity to save any chapters they want to before it goes.
Enjoyed the ride, looking forward to the next one.