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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11
Yeah, that's why I was thinking of deleting Camp Clearwater, to be able to create a new story.
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Camp Clearwater has some good jumping off points, but I got tired of every character hiding the fact they are using padded bras and other clothes that hide their insecurities about their bodies. I like when it's focused on one character, but reading all the chapters and knowing all of them are hiding something just makes me a little frustrated that they would all accept each other if they just were themselves. Just an opinion.
If you create a new story, I have an idea. A scientist, who has been insecure about her body since she was a kid, develops a special ray that is able to shrink one woman's breasts (and other body parts) in order to enlarge another woman's (preferably her own). The ray must absorb mass in order to enlarge a part of the body. This can have side effects (like age regressing the user if nothing had been absorbed by the ray), or possibly an enemy somehow gets hold of it and wreaks havoc.