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none101 08-01-2011 09:03 PM

D's strapless & backless day at the water park
 
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This is part one of the story I've been working on is my first attempt at writing. I look forward to some constructive feedback or comments.


Diane and Sarah were in the women's changing room at the local water park. Sera had purchased two new swimming suits for her and her friend, they were a new kind of strapless and backless bathing suit. The suits held on with a type of glue, and were guaranteed to never slip off and provide a perfect Tan. Sera was 5' 8'' with blond hair and a very slender figure so slender in fact she was barely a B cup. This was the one part of her body she was embarrassed of. In order to Compensate for this all of her bra and tops were patted in order to give her a fuller look. She had been doing this so long in fact, that all of her friends except for Diana think she is a natural 36C.

Sera often called Diana "D" not only was it her first initial, but it matched Diana's cup size which sera was very jealous of. Diana was a little shorter with bright curly red hair. Standing at 5'6'' she is only a few inches shorter than sera and "D" had a true woman's body. She not only had the incredible chest but the ass and hips to match and with them being tone and fit she is the object of many men's affection. However because she had always had this unwanted attention she was very shy and rarely showed off her assets.

Sarah had an ingenious plan to change that today. As the girls were getting ready to improve their Tans and enjoy a cool swim on this hot summer day. Sarah failed to mention to "D" that the glue that holds the tanning suit on only works when it's dry...

P.S. this tanning suit really does exist, I think that's my favorite part of the story.

afterthefall 08-01-2011 09:40 PM

Sounds awesome can't wait to read the next parts soon!
 
I wonder if sarahs itty bitty torture will be exposed??

Atf

Nundy 08-02-2011 06:23 PM

Please more!

none101 08-02-2011 10:29 PM

part two is now up,

Sera and D. Were disrobing in the locker room. Sarah unclipped her pink skirt and let it slide to the ground this revealed the bottom half of Sara's new swimsuit. It was a fullback red bottom which tied on either side. D. was undressing as well however she lacked the foresight to change into her swimsuit before coming to the water park. As she peeled away her teal T-shirt she revealed a very plain white cotton bra. Sarah Scoffed "D. when are you going to get some more attractive underwear" as D. finished pulling down her shorts revealing a matching pair of white cotton panties D. replied "what's wrong with these, they matched and their comfortable". Sarah rolled her eyes "you are never going to get a guy wearing stuff like that" D. unsnaps the back of her bra and says "I figured I'd get more lacy stuff once I find the right guy." Sera leans forward getting right in D's face as D drops her bra into her bag sera says "how would you like to take some sexier clothes on a test drive today". Sarah then reaches in to D's bag and pulls out her old black one-piece bathing suit and says "instead of wearing this old thing, how about you try a new two-piece that will give you a much better tan." D. covered her breasts with her left hand and then reach for her old swimsuit "Sara! You know I don't like two pieces. I fallout of more than half of them and I don't like having to constantly check and adjust, it just makes guys stare." D. Said quietly

Sarah continued to hold D's old bathing suit out of reach" Well D. I remembered your unique requirements for swimwear and found something I think you will like." D. stopped for a moment to hear her friend out. Sarah turned around with her back now facing D. and whipped off her shirt. D. Was shocked because it looked like her friend was completely topless in the women's changing Room, although this is normal behavior for most this is very out of the ordinary for Sarah. In order to maintain the illusion of her C cup she never changes in public changing areas. D. leaned into her friend and whispered "Sera, aren't you nervous someone will see" Sarah turned around and said "see what!" she was wearing a strange top, bright red to match her bottom and it appeared to be completely strapless however it didn't wrap around her back. This suit stopped right underneath the arm pit and like the rest of Sara's tops it was fully padded. D. asked " did you make that?" Sara replied "Its new type of swimming suit. It's strapless and backless and gives the best tans. Not to mention because it's glued on you never fall out. And the best part is D.,I got one for you two" then Sera pulled out of her own bag a blue version of the strapless backless suit. She also handed over a handheld size round container "what's this" D. asked "it's the glue just rub a little on your breasts and stick and hold the bra on for about two minutes. Go on at least give it a try in hear, if you don't like it I will give you your old one piece back" Sara replied sarcastically gesturing to the fact they were still in the women's locker room. D. thought for moment and decided she had nothing to lose.

D. than unscrewed the container and put a small amount of the glue gel under each arm and on either side of her now erect nipples. This conversation took place in the middle of D. changing so she'd been standing topless in the cold air of the women's locker room for several minutes now. She was very eager to cover-up even if it meant indulging her friend. D. pinch one end of the garment in her left armpit using her right hand she then guided her breasts in to the cups. As she guided the top across her chest it pushed together lifted her D size breasts. As D. stood up straight Sarah couldn't help but be jealous of her friends generous chest. After about a minute sera suggested D. go ahead and put on the bottom two. D. Placed a hand on each hip and slid her panties down to the ground, as D. was bent over her two breasts were pressed firmly together and Sera could see that the top was starting to come off. D. clearly hadn't used enough of that adhesive gel, and the top was barely holding on. D. stood up now with her matching blue bottom on she then turned to her friend said "well what you think?" Sara replied "I think we should test the top" D. looked puzzled and said" why? and how?" Sara walked up putting an arm around D. Shoulder "well would you rather the top falloff in here or in front of all the guys" D. blushed her cheeks turning red she whispered in a quiet voice "no" "well then" Sarah announced "put your arms up like you are going down water slide" D. followed her friend's advice and as her arms when up Sera could see the cups had come loose and the garment was only being held on by the small flaps on either side of the cups. Sarah smirked as a fiendish idea ran through her head "you should try some jumping jacks" D. once again followed the instructions as D started the first jumping Jack Sera watch her friends top very intently.

As D. did the very first jump Sera saw D's breasts rise up in and she landed legs spread hands in the air her breasts came down against the top like a flood hitting a damn. That was all the suit could take the last bits of glue gave way and her breasts came spilling out of the top the top fell to the ground as the breasts bounced and jiggled. Diana's face turned bright red she grabbed covering her now sticky bosom and stare daggers at her friend "you knew this would happen, there's no way I'm wearing the suit out there" Sara still laughing from her friends embarrassment "relax.. I thought you didn't use enough of the gel and I knew it would eventually falloff. How about this time you let me help you put it on" Sara said with a smile as she leaned down and picked up D's top.




I hope you guys like it I apologize that they're still in the changing room.

This has been a fantasy of mind for a long time and it is quite a lengthy story. I've explored several scenarios and I think D's top comes on and off a total 4 times before the stories done.

there are a few alternate ending still picking out my favorite. I'm going to do it in five parts and this is part two I'll have part three up Thursday or Friday.

afterthefall 08-03-2011 03:53 AM

love it!!!
 
the comparisons between the busty well-endowed D. and the slim petite sarah is just great, love the jealous rivalry sarah has too, obviously because shes only barely a B-cup bra size. :) cant wait for part 3!!


ATF

none101 08-03-2011 09:29 PM

After D's show, Sera convinced her friend to give the suit one more chance. She walked over to the small container with the adhesive gel she scooped out a large amount and proceeded to walk behind D. "did you know" Sarah said "that this is the largest size they make this suit in. Apparently the glue isn't strong enough to hold back boobs any larger than yours." D. had a very concerned look on her face "Are you sure this is a good idea Sera? I mean this isn't instilling very much confidence in me" Sera now standing behind D. proceeded to wrap her arms around her and spread the gel over each of her soft yet firm breasts. "Relax D. I told you you just didn't use enough of the gel. I'm sure they wouldn't sell it in your size if it didn't work" as Sera continued to handle every last square inch of D's breasts she couldn't help but imagine what she would do with a chest like D's. There wouldn't be any more hiding, how she could let a guy get two second base, all the new possibilities that would open up to her. "Sera!! I think that's enough.. if you keep playing with them you're going to owe me dinner" Sarah quickly snapped back to reality, ending her fantasy of a fuller chest. "Hey I'm doing it for your benefit D. I was just making sure it wouldn't fall off again" the irony in this statement was that Sera fully intended for it to fall off again. "Let's get the top on before the gel dries" said Sarah as she reached for D's blue top. Sera placed D's left breast in the left cup and then lifted the right breast into the adjacent cup. Sera then got behind D. once again "and before we put the tabs down let's do this" said Sarah as she proceeded to pull the top upwards pushing D's breasts tightly together. D. protested "that's too tight and waayy too much cleavage" Sera smirked and leaned over her friend shoulder to whisper in her ear "relax it will loosen up....... when it dries" Sera of course was thinking of what would happen when D. jumped into the deep end of the pool and would emerge topless. As Sera was thinking of her friends eventual embarrassment she placed both tabs of the top underneath her friends armpits. "Now all we do is wait two minutes for the the gel to dry" Sera said as she began to wipe off the extra gel with the handkerchief. As D. stood there with a massive amount of gel drying on her chest a thought occurred to her "hey Sarah how do we get this thing off?"

Sarah paused, unsure how to answer her friends question. The truth was you showered which dissolved the glue and then the top falls off, but Sera couldn't tell D. that otherwise it would ruin her entire plan. Sera had to come up with a story quick otherwise she would never get D. out of the locker room and into the pool. "Well.... it's the oil in your skin.... It starts to dissolve the glue and the process takes about.... Six hours" Sera explained with a slightly shaky voice. "Oooo that's good" D. said with relief "I was worried you were going to tell me we were going to have to peel it off like a Band-Aid" D. said now admiring herself in the full-length mirror "you know Sarah, this is quite flattering on me" D. then turned around lifted up her hair and examined her bare back in the mirror. "How many guys will think we're topless. Any guesses sera?" D. now sounded excited to be causing an uproar at the swimming pool."They're going to do more than think your topless" Sarah said under her breath "Do you think we can go out yet?" D. asked as she struck a pose in the mirror. "Absolutely" Sara replied as the two girls headed down the hallway into the public pool area.

It was a bright sunny day 92° out and not a cloud in the sky. Sera and D. strutted alongside the pool, Sera was tempted to push her friend in the pool right then however the time wasn't right. Sera's explanation for the suit failure would not work for another couple of hours plus she wanted to be as far away from the changing rooms as possible. Sera's plan was very simple from this point on, Sera and D. would do some sunbathing on the far side of the pool area. A few hours after that they will have attracted some attention with their deceiving topless look. Then with all eyes on them they would go for a swim in the shallow area. Sara not wanting her own top to fall off would stay in the shallow area making share not to get her top wet. Meanwhile D. who enjoys swimming will most likely swim to the deeper area where her swimsuit will come undone and D. will finally get over being self-conscious about her body. While D. puts on a show for all the guys in the crowd, I will get out of the pool without getting my top wet and meet D. with a beach tallow I will then explain to her the glue must have worn off early because she had such a large cups size. Sera smiled as she recounted details of her plan to her self, the girls got to the far side of the pool and set up for a few hours of tanning. Sera's plan was going perfectly they were getting a lot of stairs as they tanned their backs. Sera could hear whispers in the crowd "the two girls with big boobs are topless" "they going for a European tan" even a lifeguard stopped by to inform them to put their tops back on, the crowd was a little disappointed when Sera and D. turned around revealing the top half of their bathing suit. After a few hours and a lot of onlookers Sera decided it was time for the next part of her plan.

"Hay D. why don't we jump in the pool and get away from all of these looking lose" Sarah said gesturing towards the pool. "Sounds good to me" D. sprung up full of energy it seemed like she was enjoying the attention. D. put her arms above her head and stretch, Sarah could hear the crowd whispering "do you think it'll pop off?" "wow! they're huge you think they're real?" Sarah laughed to her self "those guys are about to find out for themselves" Sarah then turned to D who seemed blissfully unaware of the crowd statements "are you ready to go" D.'s reply was to run over kneel down and jump in the pool. D. was waving her arms in the air to flag Sera to come over and join her. Sera was much more careful when getting in the pool she used the latter and made sure to keep her chest above the water line. When Sera was in the pool she looked around trying to find D. she was nowhere to be found. Sera panicked "did D. figure out my plan? Did she get out? Is she back in the locker room? Is she about to ambush me and get me wet? Sera was looking everywhere in a panic. Suddenly D. Popped out of the water about 3 feet in front of her flinging her hair back and hitting Sera with a small amount of water. Suddenly Sera remembers D. always gets her hair wet in order to make her hair straight. Sera looked at D. chest to see the results of her carefully laid out plan. D. noticed her friend was staring and said "what.... is there something wrong with my top?".

afterthefall 08-04-2011 04:36 AM

When's the next chapter??
 
Omg what a cliff hanger!! Can't wait to read the next installment!!

none101 08-04-2011 08:30 PM

Part 4
 
D. was staring across the pool at her friend Sarah who had her eyes locked on D's chest. D. began to look down, her site moving off her blond friend in the red two-piece across the clear blue water as her eyes came to her own bosom. D. was surprised to see nothing was wrong.... her two breasts now wet were still pressed together tightly in the blue top "what are you staring at Sera?" D. asked confused she was now checking the rest of her body to make sure there wasn't a strange mark or something from the pool that had stuck to her. "Oo nothing" Sara replied "I was just spacing , I didn't realize I was staring at you" Sarah stated calmly. Sara's mind was going a mile a minute trying to determine why D. suit seemed to be unaffected by the water. Sara was going over the suits instructions in her mine "it said to get the gel wet and it would dissolve, there wasn't a part two to the instructions. I mean how much more wet could it be, she's in a swimming pool!!!!" "Are you okay sera?" asked D. in a concerned voice "it looks like something is bothering you" Sarah needed a reason for looking concern quickly "well... I was trying to figure out how long is it been since I put my suit on. You know, since the glue only holds for six hours" Sarah was proud of her fabricated story and it worked quite well since she had gotten dressed at home. "Oh that's right" D. replied in a concerned voice "you're on your fourth or fifth hour" sera wasn't really concerned she knew there was no real time limit. D. continued in a soft voice "to be honest, I was very surprised you were wearing such a risky suit. I mean you've worked so hard to convince people" Sarah cut D. off "sshhh you know you're the only one who knows about that and I don't like talking about it in public." Just then a fellow classmate was walking along the side of the pool. It was Alice from English class.

Alice was 5' 9'' with shoulder length hair she changed it to new color every month, this month was her natural brown with blond highlights. She was wearing a green two peace with the white flower print. Then eager D. shot and arm into the air and started calling out to Alice. As D. jumped up and down excitingly in the water with her arm raise Sarah got a clear view of the side of D's blue top. One of the tabs that helps hold the suit on had come loose and was now flapping underneath her stretched arm. With the tab lose her breasts weren't as restricted and were bouncing much higher than they had when the top was fully secured. "It is working" Sarah thought to herself "it's just taking a while to dissolve all of that gel, I guess I did use too much." Sera and D. proceeded to swim over to the side of the pool to greet Alice. "why don't you come in and join us" asked D. in a excited voice. D's breasts were moving a lot more, clearly the other tab had come loose and every bounce from D. or wave from the water would move her breasts up and down & side to side. Alice who now had her legs dangling in the pool leaned over and said "it looks like you two are having a good time but I want to take in some sun before I get in. Plus are you sure you two should be swimming?" On that note D. said "yes!" Pushing off the side wall and started swimming for the deep end of the pool. Alice started laughing as she shook her head. She turned to Sera "so I guess the plan is to get topless in front of the boys, I never knew you two were such expeditionis."

"What!?" Sera tried to act surprised "you mean, you two don't know" Alice said with a more serious tone in her voice "those aren't swimming suits, they come off when there wet. My cousin had one and ended up topless on a non-topless beach" Sera continued to act ignorant. "We have to tell Diana" Alice said as she stood to her feet. Alice began to call out waving her arms trying to get D's attention. Sara knew that D's top would become completely useless any second now. Sara climbed out of the pool and went to join Alice calling for D. "this will be even better if D. comes back to the far side where Alice and I are waiting she'll basically have to cross the pool area twice".Sarah thought with an smile on her face. D. was under the water swimming towards the deep end of the pool she had no idea her friends were calling out for her. With every stroke her blue top became a little looser. The cups were beginning to pull away from her breasts. It wouldn't be long before her completely white breast that had never seeing the sun would be on full display. Stroke! the left cup loosened ..Stroke! the right cup pulled away from the breasts exposing the nipple... Stroke! the left cup completely falling off now pulling dragging behind the right cup her breasts finely separating and returning to their natural shape. Her lily white skin shining like a beacon against her bronze tan..... Stroke! the suit completely de-attached and slowly floated to the bottom of the deep end. D. stopped unaware of her lack of cover, she heard her friends calling for her she turned around and began to wave. That's when she felt an odd sensation her to breasts were moving independently of each other she looked down and was horrified to see not only had her suit fallen off but her bright white breast and pink nipple was above the water as she waved to her friends.


more to come, possibly a part five and six

nickzilla22 08-05-2011 04:44 AM

Nice
 
Loving this!!!! Lets hope the exposer dose not end there... I think Sarah has an ENF laying in wait for her... And hell, why not Alice too, thats the price for being hot and being in an ENF story...

none101 08-10-2011 12:33 AM

part 5 one more to go!
 
Part five

Splash! After realizing her lack of coverage D's arm quickly retreated to under the water. "Oh my god! what happened? Where's my top?!" D's mind was racing she started to look around to see if anyone had noticed her wardrobe malfunction. It seemed only Alice and Sera had noticed her bright white breast and pink nipple sticking out above the water. D. put one arm over her breasts to hide them as best she could. However her D sized melons were not easily hidden by one arm. one of her pink nipples were sticking above her arm and there's still a large amount of white un-tand skin visible on either side. Needless to say she couldn't hide much without a new bikini top or a towel. To make matters worse she was struggling to tread water with only one arm, her heavy breathing and periodic splashes were starting to attract a lot of attention. She looked over her shoulder to see the lifeguard staring right at her. He had just removed his sunglasses and was leaning forward in his chair. "This is really bad" D. thought to herself "he staring for one of two reasons; he thinks I'm drowning and is going to rescue me. which means he would pull me out of the pool in a huge scene and everyone's eyes would be staring right at my breasts. Or he's trying to get a clear look at my chest where he'll drag me out of the pool in front of everyone and I'll get thrown out for the summer for indecent exposure" the lifeguard started to reach for his whistle. This would start either one of the two scenarios either one of which she would never live down. D. looked around frantically trying to find a solution to her coverage problem, suddenly she saw her blue top sitting at the bottom of the pool.

She took a big breth, releasing her girls and dove under the water. With both arm she swam to the bottom of the deep end. D's breasts were bouncing all over she wasn't used to swimming topless and without support of a bikini top her breasts were free to bounce and jiggle around. D. finally reach the bottom and grabbed her top in her right hand. She swam along the bottom of the pool attempting to reach the shallow end where her friends and her towel was waiting. As D. glided along the bottom of the pool her nipples periodically rubbed against the cold tiles. This was not only making her nipples hard it was getting her excited "this is not the time or the place" she thought to herself trying to fight the urge. She had now reached a shallow section of the pool with both feet now on the bottom of the pool she popped her head up and took a breath. With her back to the lifeguard she once again looked over her shoulder, he was still staring. D. with her arms and shoulders still under the water stretched out her top in front of her and placed it over both breasts. She then tightly clamped the two tabs between her chest and arm and crossed her arm's pushing her breasts up and into the cups. "This should work" D. whispered to herself, she then began to walk forward up the incline. Her shoulders slowly rose out of the water "as long as I don't move my arms I think I can hold the top on" her cleavage line was now coming out of the water "moment of truth" D. held her breath and she lifted her chest out of the water. The small waves and water rushing off her body pulled the cups away from her soft breasts. Two boys watching her come out of water got an eyeful of D's Lily white breasts and pink erect nipples. D. Gasped as the two boys went slack-jawed, with her arm still crossed she pressed her hands against the lowered cups. This quick motion caused a small amount of water trapped in the top to squirt out. The two boys started to laugh at her embarrassing display " Look a strip show and a water show" said the first boy "well that answer the question about them being real or not" the second boy retorted. D. turned around to see if the lifeguard had caught her little display and upon seeing her blue top still in place he moved his attention elsewhere. D. completely red-faced pushed past the boys and headed towards the latter. However upon arriving she realized a flaw in her plan.

How would she get up the ladder if she couldn't use her arms just then Alice came over. "So are you having fun yet?" Alice asked sarcastically, D. did not look amused "this has been mortifying, just help me get out of here!" said D. moving closer to the latter. Even with Alice's help D. was too short to get her foot on the first that and without using her arms to pull her up she was stuck in the pool. "Where's Sera?" D. asked "we could really use an extra set of hands" Alice replied struggling to pull her friend up "she went to get your towel she'll be back in a minute" just then the two boys appeared behind D. "so, we heard you need a hand" the first boy said very smugly "I imagine you are trying to get out of the pool without another accident" second boy said struggling not to laugh. D. was about to refuse their offer when suddenly both boys disappeared under the water. 4 grubby hands suddenly pressed on her ass and thighs and pushed her out of the water Alice grabbed her shoulders and helped guide her up the latter. D. was completely surprised "those rude boys actually helped! I guess that was their way of thinking me for that quick flash". As D. was slightly bent forward getting ready to take a foot out of the pool she felt something wrapped around her ankles. D. looked down to see a blue bikini bottom around her to ankles. "How that get th......! oooo no" D. looked up slightly and saw a un-tand and freshly shaven pussy staring right back at her. Alice and the group of six college guys behind her had a front row view of her most private area. The two boys pushed her above the water and then pulled down the bottom of her two-piece. Not to mention the entire pool area now saw D's wet glistening backside on full display for the entire crowd. D. overwhelmed by the embarrassment let out a scream "NNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!"

The two boys broke out in laughter with all the noise everyone began to stare at the bare-assed girl standing on the latter. Worst yet if D. used her arms to cover up, her top would fall away leaving her completely naked above the water. She lifted one of her legs out of the swimsuit and stepped out onto the edge of the pool the boys attempted to grab at the bikini bottom now hanging from her left foot. The boys climbed out of the pool after D. , D. was now hiding behind her friend Alice. As the boys reached down to grab the bikini bottom off D's ankle a dark shadow appear towering over the two boys. It was the lifeguard that had been eying D. he grabbed both boys by the ear "you too little dudes.. are in so much trouble" D. breathed a sigh of relief at the lifeguard came for the two "Boy Scouts" and not her . Just then a whistle let out behind her the six college guys still had a great view of D's ass. Just then Sera appeared with D's old towel. D. reached out with one of her arms which caused her breasts to pushed the top away exposing more of her cleavage. D. sn*tched the towel and she quickly wrapped it around her body pinning the backless garment in the knot of the towel . D. was so relieved that her nightmare at the water park was over. She began to bend down in order to pull her swimsuit bottom up. However sera wasn't satisfied D. was most bashful about her breasts and really only the two boys had seen them. D. towel was rather old and had several strings unraveling from the sides. Sera stepped on one of the dragging strings and as D. been over she felt the towel come loose.

As the towel came loose so did her top, she felt the towel running down exposing her back inch by inch. It seem like time slowed down and everything that covered her wet naked body was falling away exposing her to everyone's gaze. The towel began to slide off her still exposed ass she's reared back trying to grab the following garment. With both hands behind her back it seemed to lift her D size breasts right out of the top. The top tumbled down her tight borzed stomach fell right past the white triangle which highlighted D's shaven pussy. D. managed to catch her towel by one of the loose threads it swung around to her left side. As she stood up straight and began to straighten out the towel, she noticed the large crown silently staring at her naked figure.

more to come in part six the final chapter


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