Aj vs lita
 

Ladies and gentleman welcome to wwe Monday night raw the main event aj vs lita bra and panties match aj comes down wearing her love bite t shirt and jean shorts lita comes down wearing her usual attire the start fighting and aj gets the black widow locked in and strips lita to her American flag bra and then starts celebrating while doing this lita hits twist of state and strips aj to her hot pink bra then start at it again lita goes up and hits a moonsault dive and strips her to her matching hot pink thong and lita wins lita takes her pants off to show her orange thong and to make aj more embrassaed lita hangs aj by her thong from the rafters

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Hey could you make the next one a little longer like I am doing and plz put punctuation it because if you do you will get better at writing like me

I honestly think your the same person,you both make exactly the same mistakes and it seems like too much of a coincidence.

I agree with Dr. Villain, you two are almost certainly the same person. Also, I hate to be rude, but this was terrible.One paragraph, zero build up, hopelessly difficult to read, not a good story at all. I could honestly write a criticism longer than the story itself, and that's without going into the idea that you just tried to give yourself tips while still not being able to write.

There are a number of fantastic, well written WWE Diva ENF stories on here. Read them, memorize why they're good, think about what's a good formula and what would be unique and creative. And please, get a spell check. Re-read your own story and ask yourself if you think this is worth posting.

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How would we be the same people if I asked him to do this and he asked me to do a Brie vs kelly saga but dartz plz listen to what they say it will help you progress as a writer and you are going to need it because I want this in a fued like you are asking me to write with Brie bella vs kelly kelly

Really an instant classic. I thoroughly enjoyed the build up and the depth of the characters in this story. I may be alone here, but I believe that this has the potential to be the best WWE ENF story on the OCC forums, if not already. Keep up the tremendous work, I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens next.

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Hey jack are you ok just wondering because I have a idea for you for your fantasy wrestling show

Due To some personal things in my life I will no longer be creating stories

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What's wrong what happened

cause your the same person and you realise that people know your the same person, so you have just decided to stop.

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We are not the same person look at my recent story it wasn't like anything of his

um fair game you added some punctuation but you were still making silly mistakes,just like the other person did.Your never online at the same time and you all way's seem to comment about 3 or 4 minutes after each other. I am 100% you are the same person.

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Omg we are not the same person go on there and tell me my mistakes and so what I like to keep tabs on here just in case someone posts on my story and I like to post something that they will see before they get off and I can't help that he's not on when I am and what are silly mistakes?

I was joking guys I just not creating right now I will be doing aj vs lita but I have been working a lot and don't have time right now to continue when I find time I will

your a fucking idiot i hope you fucking know everyone knows who you are you little c*nt.

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Are you talking to me or dartz?

This is hilarious.

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What's hilarious

Lets get two thing clear me and Jimmie are not be same person, second who gives a shit if my first story was bad it was my first it was to practice pretty much next story will be better and whoever said I am c*nt, I will beat your ass

LMAO at the ridiculousness of this

stop spamming the board also

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U hear that villain stop spamming

Is anyone else laughing hysterically at the fact that two, pardon me, "three" people are arguing on a porn forum like schoolyard children?

Now I enjoy when Dr. Villain is around, he's hysterical to read. Half the time he's more entertaining than the stories. But something about this situation makes me giggle nonstop. Particularly the author of this....story threatening to beat his ass because he called him a mean name.

I don't even know why I let him annoy me, I'm sorry for even paying attention to him.