yeah but you need full stops dude. I mean come on you commented saying how you use punctuation and didn't put a full stop in it. What MickGessit said is true why should we care if you do not care enough yourself?

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Hey is there a nice part in your body man I've seen things wrong in everybody's story's on here but instead of being mean and hurting them so bad they don't want to continue writing but I say good story keep up the good work why can't u do the same as soon as this story is finished u will get what u want me quitting as a writer on this forum

"You'll get no sympathy from me."

-IkeGesitt

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I'm not asking for your sypamthy

do I have one nice bone in my body no not really. Sorry I won't baby you, I give my honest opinion if you can't handle it then don't ask people for it. It is as simple as that really.

Smjimmie, I see the work you're trying to put into this and that's awesome. But the one thing you shouldn't be doing is arguing with two readers who really want to help you. Mick has gone out of his way to punctuate some of your chapters; if you follow what he did in his examples, we would not have any issues. Don't take this the wrong way, I like your passion for this but it's not quite at the level of publishing.

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Hey doctorohno you are right I will look over his punctuation on the chapters he has rewritten and I'm sorry Mick I hope you can forgive me and I will try my best to make these last few parts of this story awesome and thank you doctor for those kind words

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Here's a update for all of you wondering out there

Birth of a crazy chick part 4- typed and reviewed halfway written

Birth of a crazy chick part 5 - about to start typing later today

Kelly kelly vs Brie Bella ( strip till naked) - typed and reviewed and hopefully I can write it later today and post it tonight as well if not hopefully this weekend

Hey Jimmie I have an idea for your next story a wwe diva past vs present bra and panties wedgie on a pole match after diva gets stripped they get hung by there pantie or thong till they rip Idea for the divas past trish torrie candice lita Stacy Gail Kim and Ashley present the Bella twins rosa natlya Beth Phoenix Kelly Kelly summer Rae aj and Paige

Two more past divas to make 9v9 Michelle mccool Christy hemme or Melina

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In reply to Dylandartz I already told you due to personal reasons I'm afraid I can't do that story now on a important note can you do a story for me it's not that hard or long plz

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Jimmie yeah I know I am trying to see if someone can do that as there next story might try to see if wwe up for it and yeah Jimmie what u want me to make

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Oh ok I can't speak for him but I think
He's too busy right now with the Paige story and real life and how do you feel about a aj lee vs Lita in a bra and panties match and plz go in detail with the colors

Yeah if u make the Kelly vs Brie a fatal four ladder match the Bella twins torrie Wilson and trish make the ladder match with Kelly Kelly hanging by a hot pink thong and that's their prize Kelly Kelly is there slave till wrestlemania

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Hey if you want that match you will have to do another story because the aj vs Lita is for the Brie vs kelly ( strip till naked match) so if you want this next match done I say have maria and ashley team up to face torrie and Candice in a bra and panties dumpster match where the only way to win is by stripping both of your opponents down to their bra and panties and throwing them in the dumpster and shutting the lid

Jimmie can u do the fatal four way first please because I don't when I will have time to write them because I work a lot

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I already written the strip till naked match so until aj vs Lita in a bra and panties match is done I won't even start on that other one and don't you think that me and the rest of us are busy with work and stuff in real life

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Due to a recent mistake I have no choice to finish this story but I will tell you what happens

Part 5 ( summerslam) - aj vs Paige ( evening gown match) Paige wins by using gts and strips aj down to her red and white bra and blue thong

Part 6- raw - aj challenges Paige to a rematch but its strip till naked and aj reluctantly accepts

Part 7 - smackdown - aj and sheamus defeats Cesaro and Paige

Part 8 - raw - aj and Cesaro defeated Paige and sheamus

Part 9 - smackdown - contract signing for night of champions buck naked match

Part 10 - night of champions - aj made Paige pass out due to the pto and then she pulled Paige's black panties off to reveal Paige naked and aj wins her divas title back

So with that said I am done with that and now I have gotten better at writing so if you want I can either do a long story like this again but someone else or a different company or whatever or just have someone request a match and then do that until I get like all of you at writing and start a series that you want to see

Jimmie I gave u a series u can ignore the fatal four and make series rivalry with Brie and Kelly Kelly

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Ok what matches you want in it and how long do you want it to be and are you still working on that story I asked you to write for me

About 9 chapters a wedgie match paddle on a pole match bra and panties match a wedgie on a pole a first to cum match and evening gown paddle on a pole match and yes i am working on how have written a few things thinking about to write u know got that writers block and the couple more matches strip till naked a wedgie till underwear rips match and the last match make it a wedgie over the top rope all diva battle royal include some past and present divas in this match the winner of this match can lead into ur next story idea

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I will do this
1) evening gown
2) bra and panties
3) paddle on the pole
4) stinkface match
5) lingerie match
6) bra and panties dumpster match
7) swimming pool evening gown match
8) bra and panties mud match
9) strip till naked match
10) battle royal but its only after someone has been stripped down to her bra and panties no cumming no fingering nothing like that
And what did you think about the birth of a crazy chick saga and the rest of it that I posted earlier

It was awesome

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So this is all Brie vs kelly until the battle royal and how many girls do you want in that

I going to list some divas I want u add who ever u want I want Nikki Bella Candice Michelle Ashley torrie trish summer Rae Stacy Gail Kim Brooke tessmacher Maria Melina Victoria Michelle mccool Layla aj lee Renee young Jillian hall lita Brooke hogan sunny and christy hemme u add who ever u want that I did not list

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Ok I will work on that first up evening gown and can you try and predict who's gonna win them lol

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Ok what should I name this saga and how far are you away from being done

why don't you focus on one story to try and get better then maybe think about request's ?

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What story do you want me to work on

pick one you was doing this story until a few days ago.Don't listen to that other guy do what you want to do and try your best to get better.

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Ok but this series is over because of what I accidentally said on 1993wwe's story so I posted what happens for the rest of the saga so I have a few ideas so I hope you will like them

So crazy chick no longer going to be a story

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Sadly no it would have but I messed up by telling you what happened on 1993wwe's story when I said I guess we had the same idea about the return match to be buck naked between his story which involved Stephanie vs Paige while mine involved aj vs Paige so it slipped out I'm sry

Jimmie I am confused what u doing first Brie vs Kelly or Brie vs Nikki

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I'm working on Brie vs nikki and I'm done with Brie vs kelly all I need to do is write it down then post it on here

All 9 chapters already done

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No just the strip till naked match you asked me to write when we accepted our match request

So I have to post story of lita vs aj lee first then u start on that

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Start on what

Do I have to post first chapter of my story before u post next chapter of Brie vs Kelly