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Old 10-25-2009, 06:18 PM
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Default What Some People Will Do (ongoing story)

Some of you may know my ongoing story "What Some People Will Do". For those who don't, there's this link to my free site where you can read it. It's a long one and involves exhibitionism, cheating wife, M/F, F/F, M+/F and light bondage themes.

http://storiesofsirrender.com

But the reason I'm posting here is to settle on an idea for a future chapter. I want to have the main character, Brenda Young who is the star of a cable TV reality sex show, participate in a hypnotist stage show. I'm looking for a post-hypnotic suggestion which the hypnotist will leave with her which will crop up again and again when a certain trigger occurs in her life. This would be like the classic "bark like a dog whenever I touch your hand" kind of thing or the codeword spoken to trigger a brainwashed assassin, but with a sexual edge.

Let me know your thoughts. Thanks in advance.

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Default Some ideas I've been given

I've had a couple of ideas for the post-hypnotic suggestions. Let me know your thoughts. I'm starting to write this part of the story and will need to decide on a good recurring trigger soon.

1. Strip off her top and answer the door topless whenever her doorbell rings.
2. A certain ring tone on Brenda's cell/mobile phone triggers her to strip. The TV crew could use this at various times in future chapters to cause Brenda to get naked in various public places.
2a. Same as above but when Brenda answers the phone she must obey whatever message comes through. Could cause her to do anything from stripping to blow jobs or offering her body for a gang bang. Might also be used to get her into a life of crime if used by the wrong people (naked jewelry store robber, anyone?).
3. Flash any car which honks its horn (only if she's not driving, of course, for her safety). Sending Brenda walking down the street on a busy afternoon would result in a lot of flashing.
4. If one of Brenda's neighbors asks for a cup of sugar, Brenda offers them a blow job instead.

I'm open to more suggestions. If there are enough good ones, then maybe Brenda will get one post-hypnotic suggestion and her mynx friend Wynona will get another.
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I just posted chapters 84-85 today. I have a few more that I'm finishing up and then I'm working on the hypnotism bit. All suggestions for hypnotic suggestions to trigger lewd behavior to Brenda will be considered before I write that bit.
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Default Posted chapters 86-88

I just posted chapters 86-88 on my free stories site. Next up are the hypnotism chapters. I've had a couple more suggestions, but still open to more.

* Using Brenda's mobile/cell ring tone as the trigger to deliver instructions, send her into a garment repair shop to insist that her underwire bra is broken and take it off right in the store and argue with the seamstress who insists there's nothing wrong with her bra.

* Go to a build-a-bear shop after hours which has a big "Stuff Me!" sign and invite the male employee who's cleaning up before closing to do what the sign says.

* Visit a laundromat/laundrette, put all her own clothes into a machine and sit naked while they wash and dry.

Got any other good ideas for a post-hypnotic suggestion which can be triggered at some later date? If so, post away!
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Here's a new question for the group; please respond soon as these chapters are almost ready to be posted.

Can anyone give me a good reason for Brenda's husband to be present during the filming of the hypnotism show but have to leave (go home, wait outside) just before things get really hot?
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Can anyone give me a good reason for Brenda's husband to be present during the filming of the hypnotism show but have to leave (go home, wait outside) just before things get really hot?
He was hypnotised himself; the hypnotist says the code word to get him to leave.

To be honest, I haven't read your story, so I don't know if that works for you.

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Default Hypnotism chapters have been posted

For all interested, the hypnotism show chapters of What Some People Will Do have been posted at my site.
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