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Old 01-13-2017, 07:31 PM
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Default Scared the pants off me!

A small series I've been working on. Here is the first one. Let me know what you think!



Tia bit her lip and then released, not wanting to show her anxiety. She stood with her friends in a line that snaked under a massive web of steel, the newest and reportedly most extreme roller coaster on the eastern seaboard. She had no love of roller coasters, nor any ride really, but Jenna and the boys wanted to go to the amusement park and Tia did not want to be left out.

A tomboy by nature, Tia wore her loose cargo pants with a black studded belt and chuck taylors. A black form fitting t-shirt with white characters detailing a band gave hint to her feminine curves, however modest they were. Under all this, she sweat. She cursed herself for not wanting to expose her extraordinarily pale legs on this warm day. Shorts would have at least let her baking legs know that no wind existed to alleviate her plight.

Her eyes wondered over Jenna with more than her normal amount of jealousy. Where Tia was boyish in shape, Jenna was womanly. And where Tia was conservative in dress, Jenna was not. Her figure was well displayed in small white shorts and light blue v-neck. She appeared to be fairing the weather easier under so little. Tia started to absent mindlessly chew her lip again.

Before they got in line Jenna had been eager to point out Tia's fear of adrenaline inducing rides, possibly to show her own fearless and fun loving nature. Another reason to pay attention to Jenna, Tia thought. Not wanting to submit to the accusation that "roller coasters scare that pants off her" Tia had joined them. Now the long wait in line had become a war of attrition against her stubborn nature and her mind was grasping for anything to distract her.

The screams of others above awoke Tia to the loopty loop the machine made over the waiting line. The riders' feet came dangerously close to a few short trees who's shade did nothing to reduce the sun's gaze. Tia quickly stared at her shoes. Jenna scoffed.

One of their male friends tried to reassure Tia that the roller coaster wouldn't be that bad and that the whole experience would be done just as they were starting to enjoy it. She took this as verification not of the speed of the ride, but of her not enjoying it until it was over. She smiled however to appear that she was not that bothered by the prospects.

The line came to it's termination and Tia finally could end her worrying about having to ride the coaster, and instead begin her unabridged dread. The seats were not really seats, more harnesses in rows of two that held the rider with their legs dangling out. Luck had it to place her in the back row so the others would only have to hear her screams, not see her face which she assumed would not be as pretty when gripped in primal fear.. Luck also had it to place Jenna in the rack next to her. The two girls made eye contact and Jenna's face broke into a smirk.

"Are you sure you're up for this?" She asked, perfectly sweet and dripping with sarcasm.

"Keep your shirt on." Is all Tia could respond with as she locked herself in.

Her mind was racing as an attendant checked the restraints, his hand pulling up to make sure no one would slip out.

"I'm sure he'd let you out if you asked." Jenna commented as he came to them.

Fear had robbed Tia of speech by then however and she did not respond, her consciousness retreating further and further into her mind to escape her surroundings. A rough jolt from the overhead chain brought her back however and the horrible ticking of the gears sounded like a timer until her heart would explode.

The climb was slow and painful. Higher they went, above the lines waiting. Higher still, above the trees that gave useless shade. Higher, above all the other rides in the seen direction. Lower Tia's will to fight back against her fear. The first drop was met with the screams of all those aboard, one noticeably more vibrant than the rest. Twists and turns it took, growing faster. Finally it made it to the loopty loop above the waiting crowd and the gust of wind it carried sent the trees' branches flailing wildly. Out of the way they flailed. Into the way. Out of the way. Into the way.

By chance Tia's foot made momentary, painful contact. In that same moment the branch tore into the loose leg of her cargo pants, tangling and pulling. Tia felt the pressure against her belt, her stomach, for an instant, and then release. And then cool air. Had she finally found the breeze she had so longingly sought for earlier?

The roller coaster rushed past. The crowd was divided among a verity of new sights. Some in the crowd pointed to a flag a nearby tree sported; it was shaped like cargo pants. Some merely dropped their jaws. One was unaware of what was happening as he had been blinded by a pair of purple panties that fell from the sky.

Returning to where it had started, the machine rolled slowly into it's station. In the last row hung Tia and Jenna, their hair in messy shapes and their mouths wide open. The overhead chain ticked, ticked, ticked, bouncing the riders and setting a fine sight for those in line and working the controls. It clang to a stop and Tia and Jenna slowly looked down in unison at Tia's lower half.

Below her black shirt she wore her dark chucks and socks, but nothing else. Her slick pale skin glistened in the summer sun, emphasizing her choice to shave her womanly hair into a neat little arrow that pointed at her sex. Tia stared for a moment, realizing what this meant. Her hands left their white knuckled grips on the harness and promptly headed in the direction the arrow had indicated.

Silence.

Jenna pointed at Tia's exposed lower section and managed to produce a single "HA!" before the mechanical releases sent the harnesses up, a jagged sliver of plastic catching on her shirt. The material was pulled up with it and so too were her arms, her voice muffled inside her inverted shirt, exposing her very sheer white lacy bra.

The end.
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That was actually really good
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