[ENF] Kitty VS Jane (X-men story)

[whataniceday]

(The characters are taken from the x-men 3 movie. Kitty is Ellen Page and Jane is Famnke Janssen)

It was raining at night. Inside the mansion the mutants were about to go to sleep since it was a good weather for it.

Kitty was in the mansion looking for a backpack she let in a room during the day but she can't remember which one.

Kitty was wearing some baggy pants with a brown belt, a white buttoned shirt with shirt sleeves, black shoes, black hair and cute as she can ever be.

She enters a room and sees that Jane grey is staring at the windows outside she is wearing some blue jean, red long sleeves with a white shirt underneath, brown boots and she has brown hair.

KITTY
Hi Jane

Jane wasn't looking at her

JEAN
Oh hello kitty...

KITTY
Have you seen my...

JEAN
Backpack?

KITTY
...yeah...how'd you...

JEAN
Cause you kind of always loose it, it's routine

KITTY
Ha ha yeah im always getting my head in the clouds

JEAN
Its right on the sofa

Kitty goes and gets her backpack and before she goes outside the room, the door closes
kitty is in suspense, she turns around and sees Jane

JEAN
You know...

Jane turns around with a horny look

JEAN
I''m kinda bored...

Kitty is there confused at her looks

JEAN
It's just another rainy Sunday with nothing else to do...i need some excitement

KITTY
Wha-...what do you mean?

JEAN
Hmmm...take a clue?

KITTY
...are you okay?

JEAN
You look very pretty today

KITTY
Oh...huh...thanks

JEAN
You're really attractive

KITTY
...hmm okay this feels very weird im just gonna go...

Jean
Hmmm Nice belt

Kitty
Huh?

Kitty slowly looks down at her waist and feel her belt move.

The belt is unbuckling by itself slowly and sexy, from the 3rd hole of the bulge.

Kitty raises her eyebrows, not believing she is getting undressed by telekinesis.
The belt gets undone and rests by the hoops

KITTY
What are you doing?

JEAN
...guess you won't be needing this anymore.

Jean raises her right hand and kitty's belt is pulled from her pants really fast. She drops her backpack to catch catch the belt but couldn't

The belt goes to jean's right hand. She examines it

JEAN
You know...i always love the craftsman ship of making clothe.

KITTY
OK can i please get it back?

JEAN
Hmmmm...why? Are your pants loose without it?

Kitty's pants were falling from her waist a little

JEAN
I can see your baby blue underwear

Kitty gasps and grabs her pants from the sides and raised them

JEAN
(Giggles & bites lips) you're so silly.

Jean focuses on the button on kitty's pants
The button starts to move left and right. Kitty watches it afraid of revealing her panties

KITTY
(Whispers) No.

The button pops of from her pants

KITTY
(Whispers) Stop...

Jean then unzips her pants with her mind and it lowers slow and sexy. Then she focuses on the entire zipper and rips it off her pants letting kitty know she owns the situation.

Jean starts to walk towards kitty.

Kitty starts to shake, trying to close the broken gap in front of her pants and begins to blush while biting her lips and closing her eyes from the embarrassing situation.

Jean is on front of kitty

JEAN
(Giggles) so how are you going to hold your pants now?

Kitty stays silent while shaking
Jean approaches really close to kitty's lips

JEAN
You're really cute when you blush.

Jean gives Kate a sexy kiss, slowly touches her hair with her finger

Kitty follows jean's lips with her own
Kitty is still with her eyes closed but her excitement makes her raises her eyebrows.

Kitty starts to heat up uncontrollably.

Jean sticks her tongue in kitty's mouth and kitty opens her eyes wide.

Suddenly kitty's pants trespass her hands. Her pants fall down but then trespasses through her shoes and the floor.

Kitty and jean look down at the floor

KITTY
Huh? What the?
JEAN
Oh...looks like you're loosing control of your powers... you're nervous?

KITTY
Eh-no that's not true

Then kitty's shoes trespass her feet and then the floor
Kitty reacts that her shoes are gone and that she is in her socks, panties and white blouse

JEAN
They don't call you kitty for nothing

Jean looks at her waist and points out at her panties.

Kitty looks down shaking and to her discomfort has revealed her panties.

Her panties has strings on the side with a cute baby blue color a dark blue in the waistband and in the middle it has a cute gray cat logo.

Kitty uses both hand to cover her panties and bend her knees a little

JEAN
Such a cliché pose

Kitty makes a run for it she tries to go through a wall but hits herself and can't get pass it

KITTY
Ouch! What?
She tries a second time

KITTY
What's happening?

JEAN
(Laugh) your powers are gone sweety

KITTY
No no!!

JEAN
you are too unfocused...

Kitty is embarrassed and weak since she can't go through the walls.

She sees the door and runs towards it
Kitty tries to open the door but the door gets locked by itself because of Jane

JEAN
Now imagine if you step out the door, do you want to reveal your childish panties to anyone? That should be fun

Kitty reacts surprise because she wasn't aware of the problems she might face

JEAN
I can imagine they all be talking about those sweet little panties of yours

KITTY
Im gonna tell the professor and everyone how ****y you are.

JEAN
(Laughs) you think that's a threat? OK how about this...you tell anyone and i will rip what's left of your clothe in front of others, i can see you naked in front of the professor

KITTY
(Gasp) you wouldn't dare?

JEAN
Really? You are so stupid...tell me do you feel a little chilly? Must be real cold without your pants.

Jean walks towards kitty

KITTY
Stay back i'm warning you

JEAN
Or what?

KITTY
I...i huh...

JEAN
Tsk tsk tsk poor thing you don't know what to do...i got a suggestion

Jean focuses on kitty's shirt and pops off one button from the bottom of her shirt.
Kitty watches and starts nodding saying no

KITTY
Please...i beg you...

JEAN
Relax sweety. this is gonna be fun

One by one from bottom to top. The buttons keep coming off. Kitty is shaking.

Her tops opens slowly and it reveals matching colors

JEAN
Hmmmm...i love the way you dress, oh your sweating?

Kitty's heavy breathing gives out she's aroused

JEAN
Oh what's this? Your nipples are happy

Her nipples were small but they could still see the tip shown from the cups

KITTY
Stop using your powers to make me horny

JEAN
Who says i am? Your doing it on your own

KITTY
Stop lying

JEAN
You only lie to yourself, but...your body...

Jean puts her right index finger on kitty's boob and starts to lower slowly through her chest and her sweat

Kitty follows the path of jean's finger with her eyes gasping with more heavy breathings

JEAN
...(giggles) your body... shows me...

Jane's finger is on her belly, she begins to lower, plays with the waistband a little bit and stops at the center of her panties

JEAN
(Whispers) The truth...

Kitty looks at her panties and to her surprise her pussy is totally wet, her stain is quite visible from a far.

Kitty is so embarrassed to be exposed in front of someone else involuntarily and she doesn't admit that she likes it

KITTY
Don't...tell...anybody

Jean giggles, she gets in her knees and proceed to ask

JEAN
Have you been masturbated by telekinesis?

KITTY
...no...and don't even...

JEAN
Shhhh...don't be afraid my dear, it feels weird at first but...then it feels just like an extra pair of hands

KITTY
Pair of...Hands?

Jean then focuses on kitty's pussy and her pussy starts to rub itself

Kitty is loitering at the door and sees this magic while seeing Jane smile at her accomplishments. She opens her mouth gasping for air.

JEAN
That was a warm up...Now for the fun part.

Jane puts more power into her mind and Kate's pussy.

Kate begins to cross her eyes, really silly but she can't control it she is enjoying the ride.
After some minutes Jane stops.

JEAN
Now...listen closely

Kate is trying to find her balance

JEAN
How cute...now, i manage to control your climax at the top, one more touch and you will cum an ocean. Even the slightest touch will provoke it

KITTY
I...i''m...not gonna...cum

Jane smiles knowing she can't fight back

JEAN
You think you're tough

Jane starts to get near Kate, slowly moving forward while on her knees

Kate watches in suspense, sweating and trying to concentrate on not having a load in front of her, but she can't focus

Jane looks at Kate in the eyes striking fear and making her shake. She then looks at her panties directly and notices the strings

JEAN
Oh my...you are really asking for it

KITTY
Wha-what do you mean?

JEAN
Panties with strings are the easiest ones to take off

KITTY
No...don't...

Jean bites her lips

JEAN
Is it bushy down there?

KITTY
Tha-That's private

JEAN
Until now...

Kate looks at her panties and the strings from the left side started to move on their own, untying themselves and the last loop was undone it rested on the side of her panties.

KITTY
Ah!!

Kate reacts of fear to show her 'kitty' exposed.

JEAN
What's wrong kitty...cat caught your tongue

Jean does a slow sexual taunt with her tongue. Kate opens her eyes wide since she knows that Jane's tongue will meet her pussy down there
jean

KITTY
I beg...

Jane looks at kitty's bra which a B-cup
and suddenly her left bra strap broke,and kitty looks at her left shoulder

then her right bra strap breaks and she looks at her right shoulder.

Kate looks at jean's face. Showing her true intentions

Kate feels her bra is getting unhooked by itself so she uses both of her hands to reach for the hook

JEAN
So predictable...

Jane does a finger twist to open the bra from the front and it flew rapidly across the room
Kate's B-cups bounces with her fully erect, light pink nipples

JEAN
So pointy

Kate let's out a gasp and covers her chest
Jane continues to undress the final piece of clothing

JEAN
Now...for the grand finale

Kate looks at her panties right string, the only one that's holding it together

The strings are pulled gently making it more erotic. Kate bites her lips. The strings undo the last loop and then her panties hits the ground

JEAN
Oh wow...clean baby shave

Kitty's pussy was white and pink with minor hair but still arousing to look at

Jane's face touches Kate's vagina takes out her tongue and eat her pussy. Savoring it like it's the last meal on earth.

Kitty's red face and her crosses eyes affirmed that she just lost and to her surprise the came a lot
The floor was drooling with her fluids, her legs were shaking and the milk was running between her legs

Jane giggles after kitty's defeat.

She didn't mind to get dirty with cum in her face, mouth and hair.

Kate is breathing heavy, she is really tired no one has ever made her cum like that she has never felt so horny in her entire life.

she was resting on the door but suddenly her powers came back and she trespassed the door.

Kate falls to the hallway she tries to get up and when she turns around she sees him...

professor X

She can't believe she is actually naked in front of him, she is so embarrassed that she feels her body heat and starts to stutter

PROFESSOR X
Kate?

KITTY
Pro-pro-profe...sor...

Kitty's embarrassment and her powerful load made her faint in front of him

She still remembers the incident and tries to not look at Jane in the eyes. But Jane smiles at her and from time to time she undo one or 2 buttons.

[whataniceday]

Hi guys
This is my first time writting enf

I want to make enf content from ghost, magic & telekinesis since i don't see much ofit in the site

Please let me know if it good or not

What should i write next

I will do any suggetion just so get some creative work done

And if there some works i should see send me a link to it

Please and thank you

[booboobooboo]

I liked it. Please use quotations when characters speak. It makes it much easier to read. You should write one where a teacher or something is tied naked spread-eagle on stage

[MickGesitt]

Your characters are Kitty 'Shadow Cat' Pryde and Jean 'Marvel Girl' Grey.

Why do their names keep switching to Kate and Jane?

Is it an autocorrect thing? A couple spelling errors I can understand. But I went through and counted and their names are switched nearly THIRTY times. One of which is in the title! I'm not saying this to be mean but I feel like more effort should have been put into proofreading this before posting. The fact that you - the author - don't seem to care enough to get your characters' names right set a bad tone for your readers.

But that's just the opinion of one nerd on the internet. Take the advice however you wish.

[obo1]

I agree with the the comments above. You have some very good ideas and descriptions, but the format you chose to present them is confusing. I had to re-read several passages to determine if I was reading a quote by one of the characters or a descriptive passage. The changing names is really confusing. I would suggest , in your next work, that you use standard punctuation and formatting. Makes you story much more readable. Please don't be discouraged by these comments. I think you have much potential and I'd like to see more of your ideas.

[whataniceday]

Thanks for the creative feedback
I shall make better use of grammar
I will make better content in the future

Thank you very very much