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Old 08-18-2017, 06:31 AM
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Check out my new three part story!

A Tale of Two Sister's: Vicki Goes Abroad!
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Old 08-19-2017, 01:21 AM
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I will no longer be updating my blog. It has been proven that my passion is not reciprocated by anyone. Maybe I should quit writing or keep it solely to myself because shairing it with people who cannot even show appreciation or give feedback is a waste of my time. Thank you for the boost for 4 whole days while sadly people are more instersted in the quick fix more than anything.
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Old 08-19-2017, 12:19 PM
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Maybe I shouldn't comment on things when I am sick
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Old 08-26-2017, 03:09 AM
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Your fetish isn't quite mine but your stories are good. Your color scheme though is really hard to read for long periods. I had to copy/paste into Word to read more than a few paragraphs, and it's a bit hard to navigate, with your theme, to different stories - there's just the Archives by date which isn't good for finding specific story parts.
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Old 10-01-2017, 11:30 PM
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I have read all of your stories. my favorite was when you had Vicki in the Gym and her outfit kept coming apart on all the different exercise equipment.

I think you don't get a lot of comments because your stories are so long. People don't feel like commenting on something they haven't finished. It's hard for them to give you critiques for feedback when they don't know the ending or if they skip to the ending and I didn't see what you did to build up to it.

I think if you just broke your stories into shorter segments you would get a lot more comments.
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Old 10-01-2017, 11:33 PM
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I would also love to see Vicki and her sister do a costume party for October.

I believe you could make it quite suspenseful, have a skimpy and reviewing Halloween costume slowly unravels throughout the night eventually exposing all of the girls secrets.
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I like your stories. Thanks for sharing)
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Old 06-05-2018, 06:52 PM
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I find it shocking that my original blog post on here Cavs resurface! Thank you Shane and everybody else for your comments and while I do take them into consideration and draw inspiration from people who do submit ideas, I sadly will not be changing my posting Style just so I can appease people with short attention spans. If that was the case than my stories would be shorter.

In any event I am currently working on A Tale of Two Sisters 8 which will be the final story in this series. The following series which is yet to be determined will be named sister and it will be from a third-person standpoint so that way all characters will have an equal chance to develop and the story will not be constructed by the singular view of Samantha.

I am about halfway through the story and the moment it is published on my blog I will let you all know here! I look forward to your continued and I apologize for the delay but I did get into chyoa.com where you will find more talesabout Victoria as well as guest appearances and Other Stories such as Lauren's Little Secret.
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Old 07-03-2018, 02:09 PM
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Check out my blog! Vickisnovellas.blogspot.com!

Brand new post, VERY sure to please!

Check it out!

-Victoria
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