New interactive ENF Story

[SergeantC]

There hasn't been much happening on this story lately. I just added a new thread. I hope you like it.

[okayterrific]

Originally Posted by jimmythehand

Looks like the destroyer of stories, mrwoodson, has discovered Camp Clearwater ENF and gone to town on it in a big way. Some of the 'chapters' he's added don't even seem to relate to the storyline they're supposed to be following! I realise we're not supposed to criticise other people's attempts but these additions are ridiculous. Not sure if he just wanted to fill up the recent chapters page with his name...

@jm6379: I enjoyed reading your additions; they were very well written, though they were much darker than I expected. Never worry about thread 'hijacking' - the only person who has any ownership of this story is Splotch so write what and where you please (as long as it's on topic, acceptably well written and a good length: i.e. not mrwoodson). I'm just glad I was able to add to the story in a small way.

@Derelict: I'm enjoying your Melony additions too. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

The other developing threads seem to be going well. Thanks again for this story Splotch!

I know what you mean. I hardly consider myself a great writer, but that guy is truly awful. He completely fucks up every story that he contributes to.

[Derelict]

Slowly but surely, additions are being made... It never seems like I can torment Melony and her hair pussy thoroughly or quickly enough! Thanks to all who have contributed so far!

[Z678Vash]

For those who are interested I have started a new interactive ENF story on Writing.com called Kingdom Hearts ENF. I haven't added any regular chapters yet, only the basic ones so feel free to look it over.

[jm6379]

I added a chapter to May, writing from her point of view.

I was hoping to write further into the story where May has her meltdown but all the research I did seems to show that a person's mind kinda goes blank during a meltdown and everything is just re-active.

It was very difficult chapter for me to write - active / passive grammar structure, I'm not female and I don't pad anything...

[jm6379]

How about a male councilor padding his crotch? I can try writing a chapter like that since the emotions involved would likely be the same...

[Derelict]

jm,

I think you're overthinking it, man.

[coolman1516]

I haven't used writing.com much, only to read stories, but Splotch can edit other people's contributions right? I haven't really read much of what mrwoodson contributed, but his grammar and stuff is AWFUL, especially when it comes to June's storyline. Can Splotch PLEASE edit mrwoodson's crappy contributions?

[MysteriousOne]

anyone know why the Camp Clearwater interactive story has been locked?

[jm6379]

Izzit?