New interactive ENF Story

[jimmythehand]

Just added a couple of chapters, one in the June thread and another unrelated one in one of May's threads. My 'D' key clearly wasn't working properly at the start of the latter chapter - probably should have proof read. Splotch, if you could change those instances of 'like' to 'liked' I'd appreciate it. It's this chapter: http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ENF/map/121122

[jm6379]

Love your writing Jimmy. My idea now is to get June exposed at the pool. The 3 girls already know her secret. Doesn't matter if she get another suit or not.

[jm6379]

Finished! I'm gonna keep quiet for awhile now.

I was using June to finish up on May, but it looks like I hijacked June's thread instead. Sorry Jimmy!

Splotch - the mental breakdown thing ended up being pretty heavy and serious. I tried to make it funny and light hearted but didn't know how to. All the stuff I saw on youtube and wikipedia regarding mental breakdowns were pretty serious stuff so I decided to write to reflect the gravity of the situation.

I hope to see yours and Jimmy's version of May's exposure now.

[Derelict]

No rest for the wicked, jm.

But, seriously, you guys have blazed quite a path through the story! I'm still puttering around with Melony's section. I've got a couple small additions that I'm working on.

Glad to see that the community is active!

[jimmythehand]

Looks like the destroyer of stories, mrwoodson, has discovered Camp Clearwater ENF and gone to town on it in a big way. Some of the 'chapters' he's added don't even seem to relate to the storyline they're supposed to be following! I realise we're not supposed to criticise other people's attempts but these additions are ridiculous. Not sure if he just wanted to fill up the recent chapters page with his name...

@jm6379: I enjoyed reading your additions; they were very well written, though they were much darker than I expected. Never worry about thread 'hijacking' - the only person who has any ownership of this story is Splotch so write what and where you please (as long as it's on topic, acceptably well written and a good length: i.e. not mrwoodson). I'm just glad I was able to add to the story in a small way.

@Derelict: I'm enjoying your Melony additions too. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

The other developing threads seem to be going well. Thanks again for this story Splotch!

[worlddominator]

I'm starting to think mrwoodson is a lurker on this site. He also recently found my story invisible enf too. He just does it in spurts. Anyhow I'm thinking of adding to the story soon

[Derelict]

Thanks, jimmy!

Yes, I hate to admit it, but I was disappointed after reading a boatload of one-sentence additions. Splotch does have the power to edit or delete, so we'll see what happens.

[jm6379]

Thanks guys.

Hope Splotch comes back soon. All that junk by mrwoodson is still up there...

[Derelict]

It appears that the story has been rewound, so to speak. It's a shame that it needed to be done, but it's for the best. Thanks for keeping an eye out, splotch!

[havick]

That's some pretty good writing, folks. Splotch, I think you missed your real calling in life.