Attitude Reloaded

[smjimmie1348]

Hey ok what match do u want me to so for them and I say Brie bella vs aj lol

[divalover95]

just winner is the first to strip her opponent naked what u want for your match

[smjimmie1348]

It's like a bra and panties match but loser is thrown in a dumpster lol

[MickGesitt]

Great job on the last match. And its nice to see the storyline progressing. You might want to limit your strip-elimination match at the Royal Rumble to a bra and panties type match. Having fourteen women stripped naked seems like it would be too much at once. Maybe have the winner strip the runner up naked but don't go too crazy. This story is still new and you'd need more build up for all those women to be stripped at once.

When the 'mystery woman' appeared, I never expected it to be Sable. But that's what's great about the universe your story is in, you never know who is going to show up. Classic WWF, ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN! Be sure to draw on Sable's old "relationship" with Mr. McMahon from back in fall 2003 if you want to take her to the next level as a heel.

However, I feel the need to point out that your Diva's Championship Match with Velvet and your Buck Naked Match with Sable ended the same way. With a third unannounced competitor winning the gold. Its starting to get a little old. You might want to have your next match have a decisive one-on-one finish for a change.

But for the record. You mentioned Stacy being Trish's "biggest rival" like five times in your match. And I know you were trying talk up your match. But Trish's biggest rival is, and always will be, Lita. Those two revolutionized women's wrestling. Lita and Trish had plenty of matches against each other before Stacy even showed up in the WWF with the Invasion storyline. And even after Stacy left, Trish and Lita still had another couple great matches against each other.

There's a reason why Trish and Lita are in the Hall of Fame and Stacy is struggling to keep herself relevant after her failed relationship with George Clooney. Stacy was never a good enough wrestler to be considered a legitimate threat to Trish. She was always just a pretty face with ridiculously long legs (that you didn't really pay all the much attention to in the Buck Naked Match).

For a moment I actually thought/hoped the 'mystery women' was Lita out for revenge on Stacy and Trish for stripping her topless on Raw. You mentioned her wearing cargo pants and that's always been Lita's thing. I doubt Sable has ever worn cargo pants a day in her life. And honestly, I think Lita would be a better heel champion than Sable since she can actually wrestle.

But that's just me. I'm still interested in seeing where your story goes. Keep it up.

[divalover95]

yeah i understand what your saying the 15 diva stripped elimination match was never intended to be stripped naked and i also understand about the trish lita thing but i was more trying to convey trish and stacy's rivalry in these type of matches as trish and lita only had one bra and panties match that i know of.

Lita was gonna be the masked stranger but i felt i wanted to go in a diffrent direction with her having a rivalry with a new face to the series

As for the same match ending i really wanted to add emphasis to the fact that eric bishcoff is a bastard and will screw over anyone that was a really big thing for me cause he is what ties it all together and i felt that it would be nice to reference the fact that the diva's and women's championship although contested by different people were really the same

Thanks for the advice and critique i just thought i'd clear it up so you did not feel like i had no meaning in the stories they all have a underlining story connecting them all together

[smjimmie1348]

Hey what is he talking about u haven't done no buck naked match between velvet sky and sable lol

[divalover95]

Smackdown starts in the general managers office with Eric Bischoff sitting opposite from the new WWF women's champion Sable.

" Well sable how you like your new office "

she stands up wearing a black pencil skirt and matching suit jacket a pink shirt underneath accenting her magnificent breasts " i love it Eric and as my first duty as general manager i wanna make tonight's divas championship the main event"

" great idea sable i knew i picked you for a reason just tell your new assistant to go tell them the change of plan and be ready at ringside to watch the first main event under your new era of smackdown "

Eric stands up and walks to the door " Miss sable would like you to go into her office " He vanishes behind the wall and a new figure appears at the door way " ah torrie so glad to see you can you come in and sit down ?"

Torrie walks over to the chair wearing a grey suit and yellow tie over her pink shirt " what can i do for you boss"

" i need you to tell velvet and eve that there match tonight will be the main event can you handle that "

" of course miss i'll go do it right away" she stands up and walks out the door heading down the hallway to the doorway of the diva's champion velvet sky "knock knock knock"

The door swings open and velvet sky stands there in a pair of white booty shorts with a matching white tank top.
" what the hell do you want torrie haven't you got sables ass to lick "

"fuck you velvet miss sable would like to inform you that your title match tonight is now the main event "

" oh great so i'm all ready now and iv'e got to wait another hour to kick that sl*t eve's ass fuck that i' ready now "

she pushes past torrie knocking her to the ground storming up towards eve's locker room before she gets there she see's the tanned diva standing next to a drinks machine wearing the same attire as velvet ready for her wet 'n' wild match tonight .

velvet wastes no time in going after eve she runs up behind her and slams her head into the vending machine knocking the former champion down to the ground she starts stomping down onto her downed opponent leaving her reeling and shocked at this suprise attack.

velvet grabs eve by the hair and top and pulls up stretching the flimsy material of her shirt she throws her against the machine and tares into the top ripping it from eve's body leaving her perky tits in just her green bra.

eve tries to cover up her breasts while velvet falls to her knees grabbing the bottom of eve's shorts trying to pull them from her body. eve is ready this time tho and shoots her hands down to protect her shorts a tug of war ensues with velvet finally winning and stripping eve of her shorts leaving the humiliated diva in her green bra and purple panties.

" Stop this now Velvet get up off the floor eve go wait in your locker room and get ready for your match tonight"

" fuck off sable i aint taken orders from you "

" oh really eve well ill guess i'll help velvety in her attempts to strip you then"

eve seeing there is no way to escape with both her rep and her clothes backs away and runs off to her locker room.
" As for you velvet what the fuck are you thinking go away and get ready for your match tonight before i strip you off your title and your clothes"

" you know what sable fuck you just cause your eric's latest hussie dont mean i take orders from you i am the diva's champion and i deserve respect"
A stare down develops and velvet eventually runs off to her locker to prepare for her match


the camera pans around the arena for the main event in the ring is water balloons, water guns, buckets and to very pissed off looking diva's

" introducing first the challenger Eve "

eve has regained her clothes from before and stands looking straight at her opponent a look of pure rage boils in her eyes

" And now she is the WWF diva's champion Velvet Sky "

Velvet jumps around her blonde hair swaying from side to side along with her medium sized tits hidden under her white t-shirt. She hands her title to Christy and the bell rings for the start of the match.velvet runs at eve and tackles her to the ground knocking the wind out of her opponent she picks her up and wastes no time in trying to tear the shirt right off the tanned and toned divas body she manages to get the shirt up and over eves head before the challanger kicks her in the pussy knocking her to the mat

she wastes no time in stomping down on the champion sending slaps to her face and kicks to her body leaving velvet dazed on the mat, eve walks over to a bucket of water and picks it up pouring it all over the downed velvet's body her body now drenched her hair socked and her clothes see threw. Her matching pink lingerie standing out more and more under her white attire.

Eve picks up and water gun and wait for velvet to stand before spraying the water into the champs face velvet takes it to her face and continues to advance on eve before jumping forward yanking down eve's shorts off her body her purple panties exposed again. She drops the gun and falls back as velvet pulls her legs from up under her.

As both women roll around on the floor a catfight breaks out with both women tumbling over each other getting wet in the process from all the water left from when eve poured the bucket onto velvet .


Part 2 tomorrow

[DoctorRipper]

Still have the following episode in your hands? You've started something great here.

[divalover95]

thanks man i was thinking of writing a new part to this story in the coming weeks i just got a lot on my plate as i'm starting college in september and i am getting everything sorted for then. But on the other hand i did enjoy this series and would like to start it again as i love eric bischoff as a villian and would like to continue him. if i am honest there are some things i wish i had done diffrent not so many changes and random people popping up so it may come down to me writing a new series where everything is a lot more simple and a time frame with that i am thinking a week to two weeks.