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Old 09-07-2014, 12:16 PM
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Hey mate that was awesome thanks for the update and its official now at summerslam after stripping Brie bella which was a awesome idea thank you by the way as I love Brie bella almost as more as aj and winning the match Paige foolishly chooses a bra and panties match for ajs divas championship so now at summerslam Paige will lose her chance at ajs divas title as Paige will be stripped down to her blue bra and blue granny panties or even something more embarassing bra and panties like flowers or hearts or hello kitty but whatever u decide will be embarassing for Paige as she will walk out of summerslam stripped down to her bra and panties by the divas champion aj lee thnx mate for that and I would love to hear your reply on my bold statement can't wait to hear from u soon
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Old 09-07-2014, 02:24 PM
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Hey mate that was awesome thanks for the update and its official now at summerslam after stripping Brie bella which was a awesome idea thank you by the way as I love Brie bella almost as more as aj and winning the match Paige foolishly chooses a bra and panties match for ajs divas championship so now at summerslam Paige will lose her chance at ajs divas title as Paige will be stripped down to her blue bra and blue granny panties or even something more embarassing bra and panties like flowers or hearts or hello kitty but whatever u decide will be embaressing for Paige as she will walk out of summerslam stripped down to her bra and panties by the divas champion aj lee thnx mate for that and I would love to hear your reply on my bold statement can't wait to hear from u soon
I completely disagree. First of all, Brie is lame. I'll admit that she's the better Bella in the ring but that's like a dwarf among midgets. Its not saying much. The Stephanie-Bellas storyline just goes to show what horrible actresses the Bellas are. I've suffered through two episodes of Total Divas (one for each season) and I know that even their scripted 'reality' show isn't helping their acting much. Combine poor wrestling skills and bad acting and you get a lame wrestler. I have no interest in either of the Bellas. I'm upset that they forced Nikki into the Paige-AJ storyline because it forces the two that actually have wrestling ability and talent to abandon their hot rivalry so they can stoop down to the Bellas' level and become supporting actresses.

This is reason that I especially enjoyed Paige totally dominating both Bellas in this latest chapter.

Second, we already know from 'A Tale of Two Adversaries' chapter two that Paige wears a black thong. Paige was the one that picked the bra and panties match. Even if Paige is completely confident that she would beat AJ and win the championship, she wouldn't be so stupid as to wear embarrassing underwear in a match where the sole point is for the women to rip each other's clothes off. Having one of the girls wear childish underwear or granny panties would get a cheap laugh, so it might be something that the current, extremely corny WWE would do. But DoctorRipper Productions has better quality writing than that.

Also, on a side note, Paige's stipulation for her Beat the Clock Challenge makes a lot more sense than Ambrose's stupid Lumberjack Match that the WWE did. This once again shows that DoctorRipper Productions is doing better quality writing than the WWE nowadays. In this version, the two divas are already trying to rip each other's clothes off so a bra and panties match where they have to do just that makes perfect sense. The Lumberjack Match that WWE did made no sense and was just asking for Kane to interfere in it. They should've just made it a Falls Count Anywhere Match. I still think that the only reason the WWE actual did it was because they needed an excuse to get the mid/low card talent that they've been ignoring on a PPV.

Back to my main point in completely disagreeing with smjimmie1348, third, I think that Paige is actually going to WIN the match at SummerSlam. Being stripped to her bra and panties and losing her championship will be just the thing to make AJ go cuckoo for coco puffs. I could see the lovable psycho going nuts and retaliating by ripping Paige's bra off to make the story escalate to another level and bring it up into full-blown ENF territory. That'll be a SummerSlam moment to remember.


Now that that's done. Doctor Ohno, Jack the Ripper, great job on your latest installment. Once again you've outclassed the monkeys on typewriters that the WWE Employs. I'm really looking forward to your SummerSlam Bra and Panties Title Match between AJ Lee and Paige.

However, in one of your last lines you said "Paige and AJ have engaged in perhaps the most personal and cold Diva rivalry of all time." Maybe its because the recent women storylines have been lackluster but your AJ-Paige storyline has only been going on for three weeks. I don't think that it qualities for one of the most personal and cold rivalries of all time... YET. The AJ-Kaitlyn story from last year was probably the best RECENT women's storyline, Trish Stratus and Lita had countless matches that spanned the years in their rivalry, and my favorite WWE Women's Rivalry of all time, is and probably always will be, the Trish Status/Mickie James storyline going into WrestleMania 22. BUT, I fully believe that if you keep this story going through SummerSlam (and maybe even through Night of Champions) and have things escalate properly with AJ and Paige constantly trying to one-up each other while they're waging an all-out-Rated-R WAR, this rivalry COULD be one of the greatest of all time. Its all up to you guys to write it that way. Keep up the great work.
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Old 09-07-2014, 02:39 PM
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Yeah I agree with MickGesitt I Think that WWE now days is shocking. As for your latest update loved the stripping of Brie,really loved the description made me think I was watching the WWE of old fantastically poised for Summerslam.
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Old 09-07-2014, 02:52 PM
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In reply to mickmegesitt I agree on what u said about everything except just because she wears it once doesn't mean she's gonna wear it again so you saying aj is going to wear a pink bra but anyway I also disagree with u that the fact yeah it might seem like Paige will strip aj but aj is the better diva and I think even paul heyman knows that so after summerslam I see paul heyman walking out with his new client who happens to be the wife of his best ever client cm punk with the divas title around her waist but anyways good story and I think everybody here will agree u are doing a awesome job and we all came wait to hear more from you in the future
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Old 09-07-2014, 03:45 PM
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I fully agree wwith Mike on all his points; on the state of the WWE writting, to have two brilliant girls like Paige and AJ, who have great in ring work, are good and fantastic respectively on the mic, who both have unique but still highly beautiful looks, and in the case of Paige, all this at the age of 22, so only going to get better, and WWE has them playing second fiddle to the Bella's who can't wrestle, can't act, have a shit feud, and in general are not liked by the crowd at large, is ludicris.

On your idea for the next chapter, again I agree; Paige should stick to her expected clothing of bra and thong, and not anything for a cheap laugh. And Paige should be the winner of the next chapter; for starters I fully expect that DoctorRipper has more chapters beyond Summerslam planned and this allows them, I also agree that it allows AJ to go off the rails, and finally, what is the point of having Heyman in Paige's corner if he isn't going to pull every trick out the book to get his client to win; in an ideal world it will be Paige almost stripped (as in shorts about to be pulled from her feet) with Heyman distracting to let her win, or Paige being fully stripped, but Heyman distracting the ref at the time so he doesn't call it, Paige puts the last piece of clothing removed back on, and strips AJ for the win, of course I like your idea of AJ taking Paiges bra off as well. But we'll have to wait for DoctorRipper, I am certain he has a better plan for the outcome than all of us combined.
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Old 09-07-2014, 03:58 PM
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Hey in reply to dayjib I agree on everything u said but I love aj and I wanna see her win not lose you know and I'm pretty sure he has like u said a outcome that is way better than all of us and all we have to do is wait and see
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Old 09-07-2014, 04:03 PM
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Hey in reply to dayjib I agree on everything u said but I love aj and I wanna see her win not lose you know and I'm pretty sure he has like u said a outcome that is way better than all of us and all we have to do is wait and see
Oh I expect her to win in the end, but I think this is merely the middle of the story, with NOC being the end. DR did say they have an endgame in mind though, they seem like they've planned this out and know what every chapter is going to entail; I just know this is going to be one of the best if not THE best story on this site (and that's sayng something considering the quality of Power Hungry GM, speaking of which, I wonder if pweien is going to be updating it again soon)

Anyway, carry on the outstanding work DoctorRipper.
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Old 09-07-2014, 04:11 PM
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Ok thanx and yeah I agree this is one of the best if not the best already lets keep cheering them on
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Old 09-08-2014, 02:45 AM
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I agree with those saying Paige would wear a thong. Of course, I also think that nobody would mind if you altered the colour for this specific match so we don't get the same underwear all the time. The same with AJ's underwear.

Also, have you thought about potentially having one or both of the divas wearing street clothes? It would be the sort of thing I'd expect Paige to do because her ring gear isn't really that secure. Paul Heyman would be the type of guy telling Paige to wear something harder to rip off, such as those really tight jeans she wore in the second episodes. A loose pair of shorts seems quite an oversight for a team of Paige and Heyman. AJ, on the other hand, I'm not sure what she would do as she suffers with the same problem; her clothes are really easy to remove, especially the shirt.
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