[ENF] The Fantasy Wrestling Show

[JackNY51]

Originally Posted by funnydudeajg

Next week I will schedule a match between you and Kelly and the loser will be forced to go through a "process" I put together, a very humiliating process." Stephanie said "Oh, Maryse, I will be the special guest referee... get ready."

I cant wait to read this!!!

I'm happy you can't wait!! It will be up soon!

Originally Posted by hanskumoekk

Very nice chapter! That last match was grrreat!

Just an additional question: What's up with the use of the word "fat"?

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I loved the last match too!! Also, I guess I just have a thing for big butts, ill tone down on that word from now on.

Please continue with the comments and the second part will be up soon.

[cerindclvr]

'fat' butts are fine with me, and less and less seems to mean a "bad chunky cellulite ridden ass" but more of a "big and plump" ass. I could see how that phrasing might throw one off a bit... anyways, as for the stories, u know how I feel Jack, keep pumpin out this awesome business..! no new critiques or commentary yet...

[cerindclvr]

reread the most recent chapter, my comments are as such -- the description starts out very weak and seems to cut corners. Tops and panties are simply "ripped" off, not doing the scene much justice. Im not able to picture the scene very clearly.
The next part, however, picks it up quite nicely. You start laying on the description a bit thicker, and you actually give the girls' bodies more defining characteristics. My advice is to work on (and you've started to do this) describing how the clothing actually gets ripped off. If a top stretches to the point where holes start to rip in it before it pops off entirely, or if it just tears slowly up the middle, say so.

If people have issue with it, you might want to find a word to sub out for 'fat' every now and then, in particular with the word pussy i'm guessing... you can always mix it up with 'swollen' or 'plump' ::shrug::

[JackNY51]

Originally Posted by cerindclvr

'fat' butts are fine with me, and less and less seems to mean a "bad chunky cellulite ridden ass" but more of a "big and plump" ass. I could see how that phrasing might throw one off a bit... anyways, as for the stories, u know how I feel Jack, keep pumpin out this awesome business..! no new critiques or commentary yet...

Originally Posted by cerindclvr

reread the most recent chapter, my comments are as such -- the description starts out very weak and seems to cut corners. Tops and panties are simply "ripped" off, not doing the scene much justice. Im not able to picture the scene very clearly.
The next part, however, picks it up quite nicely. You start laying on the description a bit thicker, and you actually give the girls' bodies more defining characteristics. My advice is to work on (and you've started to do this) describing how the clothing actually gets ripped off. If a top stretches to the point where holes start to rip in it before it pops off entirely, or if it just tears slowly up the middle, say so.

If people have issue with it, you might want to find a word to sub out for 'fat' every now and then, in particular with the word pussy i'm guessing... you can always mix it up with 'swollen' or 'plump' ::shrug::

Thanks for he tips, I will use them to put towards the next session. I will start working on the second segment tonight, but I don't know if it will be finished tonight.

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.

[JackNY51]

Episode 2- Part 2
*****

Ashely Kristal Chyna

Ashley Massaro comes out to the arena, anticipating a rematch against Kristal Marshall. She walks down to the ring in a plaid skirt and a black tank top. She is smiling huge on her way to the ring, happy with her victory against Kristal against last week and with the great reception the crowed is giving her.

Kristal Marshal's music plays but Ashley and the fans get very confused when Kristal does not enter the arena. But rather, her face appears on the jumbotron and it's obvious she's on a live video chat.

"Hi Ashley!" she sarcastically states with a big smile on her face. "Last week you humiliated me, and my ass is still sore. I decided that it is time for you to take some payback... so tonight I got the approval for Chyna to sub in for me!"

Ashley's face turns into one of pure fear as the masculine Chyna slowly walks towards the ring occupied by Ashley.

Once Chyna makes it into the ring, she takes a scared Ashley by the hair and yanks her around the ring. Ashley is screaming as Chyna's face remains strait.

Chyna, without hesitation reaches to Ashley's black top. The top slowly started to rip as it steched further and further before finally ripping in half. Ashely screams, and the fans cannot even tell what type of bra she has as Chyna instantly rips it off, revealing Ashely's heavy tits.

Chyna literally sits on Ashely's face, lifts up her legs, and tugs down her plaid skirt. Ashley kicks her legs, both in embarrassment and for the fact she cant breathe. Chyna slaps Ashey's tits, and then reaches over to her red thong and tugs it down. Ashley kicks her feet, in an attempt to keep her thong on, but after a little bit of a struggle, it cleanly came off leaving Ashley nude in the ring. Chyna finally gets up off of her face and Ashley gasps for air, and then covers just her breast and moves into the corner.

We now see Kristal Marshall in a white crop-top and black skirt make her way down to the ring, laughing. She pushes Chyna out of the way, and goes to the corner where a naked Ashley is. Kristal givers her a kick to the gut and whispers "revenge has come"

Kristal flips Ashley so that her legs and ass are touching the mat and her torso and up is hanging over the ropes. Kristal licks her hand and starts beating the ass as it quickly reddens.

But this is cut short as Chyna, who does not care about anyone, grabs Kristals hair from behind and yanks her down to the ground. Kristal's skirt is yanked downwards as she screams! She was not expected to be stripped so she is wearing a pair of over sized grey granny panties! She screams in humiliation and Chyna chuckles. Chyna then hold onto her crop top and rips it strait down the middle, revealing an unmatching purple bra.

Kristal is more embarrassed of her ugly undergarments then she is from actually being disrobed in the middle of the ring. Chyna starts teasing Kristal by slowly yanking down her granny panties. This went on for at least 30 seconds as Kristal was flat on her back and chyna was standing up. Chyna would yank them down a little, but then pull them back up. Finally, Chyna yanked them down and a loud scream came from Kristal as she instantly put her manicured hands over her vagina.

To finish the stripping, Chyna would shove Kristal's granny panties in her mouth, to stop the screaming and then yank off her bra in one swift movement.

Chyna leaves the ring and then comes back with a long piece of rope. She grabs both Kristal and Ashley by the hair, and ties them together, boob-to-boob, vagina-to-vagina. The girls scream as they are noe humiliated and up close with their enemies. They roll around together , trying to get free but to no avail.

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Carmella DeCesare Vs. Melina Perez- Nude Submission Match
***

Carmella comes out in a light blue robe and walks to the ring with an attitude...she was shaking her hips and had an "I'm the hottest" face. She gets to the ring and waits impatiently for Melina.

Melina comes out in a red robe. and struts down to the ring. She stares at Carmella inside the ring and is anxious to make her tap out and win this match.

Once the bell rings, Melina is the first to expose her body. She drops the robe and shows off her very large tits, clean-shaven pussy and chubby, tanned ass.

Carmella looks at Melina's body in disgust and then drops her light blue robe, happily displaying her very skinny body, round uptight tits, clean-shaven pussy, and a very "cute" ass.

The match starts and the two woman lock up. Melina quickly gets Carmella to the ground, and wraps her legs around Carmella's tiny midsection. Then Melina wraps her hands around her face, and pulls back. This position is quite painful for Carmella but also quite sexy for the viewers. The ref continuously asks Carmella if she gives up, but she frantically shakes her head "no".

To get out, Carmella headbutt's Melina. Melina hols her jaw in pain as Carmella gets free. Carmella delivers a few punches to Melina, and has her down on the floor, lying with her black on the matt. Carmella squats over Melina, and squeezes her tits. This is a cheap and humiliating tactic, but Carmella will take what ever it will to win.

Melina cringes in pain as Carmella continues to squeeze her big tits harder and hard. Luckily, since Melina's feet are free, and Carmella is squatting over her, Melina manages a low blow kick that releases Carmella's grip and has her fall to her knees. Looking for revenge, Melina performs the same tactic on Carmella and squeezes her smaller, but still hot, tits. Carmella's beautiful faceturns into one of pure torture. She is trying her best not to tap, but she might have to. Luckily for Carmella, she manages to break free and the match continues, but she is hurt in pain.

Carmella attacks Melina with no mercy and gets her lying down on her back on the mat. Carmella stands over her, lifts Melina's legs, and starts engaging in a childish act...pinching. Carmella is holding up Melina's leg and is pinching her ass with her long nails! Melina jerks with every pinch as they get harder and harder!

Melina see's only one way out of this position. She pulls down on Carmella, so Carmella's ass falls onto her face. Melina bites it and will not let go. Carmella trys to get up, but Melina is holding her down, as her teeth get deeper and deeper into Carmella's right ass cheek.

Carmella's face is once again showing a great deal of pain. She screams and screams. Finallly..

"I GIVE UP I GIVE UP I GIVE UP!!!" Carmella screams, but Melina will not release her position. Carmella is now in tears and her face is red. It takes 3 woman referee's to get Carmella free, who instantly falls to her knees and rubs her bloodied ass cheek.

Carmella is too busy rubbing her ass, that she does not realize Melina come up behind her with a jug of boiling water. Melina dumps it over hear head and Carmella screams as she is now sexy, naked, and wet, and hot...literally.

Melina walks after Carmella as she succumbs to crawling down the ramps and into the backstage area.











Alicia Fox
Candice Michelle
Christy Hemme
Dawn Marie
Gail Kim
Jackie Gayda
Kelly Kelly (Barbie Blank)
Kristal
Layla El
Maria Kanellis
Maryse
Mickie James

[JackNY51]

Hope you enjoyed that last update... I'm gunna do something new:

Send me a PM with a match request. You pick everything (or some parts, and I'll come up with the rest) from wresters involved (I'm open to doing celebrities or something too) match-type, winner/loser, punishments...EVERYTHING. Shoot me a PM and it will be done asap. Thanks!

[JackNY51]

To everyone who sent me a request for the other thread: I'm working on it, I just wanna do an update here. Thanks for the patience!
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GAIL ALICIA

Alicia Fox walks out to the ring with a very angry face. She takes no time to wave hi to the fans, but just storms to the ring with a strait face. She was wearing leather pants and a white shirt. She finally made her down to the ring.

"Last week I was stripped of my clothing, and my pride. I'm one of the few real woman in the league that has dignity and respects my body and I was stripped of my dignity last week. This will never happen again. I want Gail Kim to come out now and apologize"

Gail Kim emerges through the ramp, with a smirk on her face. She is wearing tight-fitting white booty shorts with a white tank top. She obviously is wearing a pushup bra and black boots.

"Don't forget you pissed yourself, too" Gail said.

The fans started to crack up along with Gail. They liked Alicia more then Gail, but they still thought it was a little funny that she pissed herself on TV.

"Gail, you asian wh*r*, come down here and get revenge!"

The fans cheered as Gail charged down the ramp and her and Alicia locked up and began throwing punches and kicks.

Unlike last week, Alicia is fighting the strongest. She's using the screaming crowd as her inspiration as she attacks Gail, wailing punches on the poor lady.

Alicia wraps her skinny arms around Alicia's neck and puts her in a head lock. Gail is gasping for air as Alicia ferociously chokes her. Alicia uses her free hand and grabs the bottom of Gail's shirt. Alicia struggles and pulls it up with just one hand. Gail struggles as she can barely breathe and is fighting to keep the shirt on her body. Eventually, Alicia manages to pull the shirt over Gail's head and releases the head lock.

Gail falls to the mat and gasps for air, completely ignoring that her white, super pushed up bra was no exposed. Alicia, showing no mercy, jumps on top of Gails back. She puts her hand on the waistband of Gail's white booty shorts and tugs down on her booty shorts. Gail's white booty shorts slide of like butter and she was no in the middle of the ring in a tiny white thin thong and a white pushup bra.

Gail is now humiliated and pouts on the mat. Alicia, again, showing no mercy, delivers a gut-busting kick to Gails side. Gail curls up in pain and Alicia uses her strength to snap Gail's thong from the waistband. As soon as Gail stand up, her thing white thong falls strait down.

Gail pushes her thighs together and puts her hand over her pussy, making a humiliated face. Gail gets frustrated when she sees Alicia's big smile, and Gail vows to herself that she will not let her big round boobs be exposed.

Gail rolls out of the ring, looks under the ring and takes out a steel chair. A fully clothed Alicia begs Gail not to hit her, but a bottomless Gail gives Alicia a vicious hit with the steel chair. Alicia falls and is knocked out cold.

Gail, slowly and sexily stepped over Alicia's knocked out body, and took out a pair of scissors. She cut a strait line down Alicia's shirt and then took it off. Alicia was wearing a light green bra. Then, Gail took the scissors and cut her bra and easily took that off too! A poor KO'ed Alicia's big round boobs were exposed...again!!!

Gail then started to cut at Alicia's white leather pants. It took time as she cut the pants down and took them right off. Alicia began to regain consciousnesses but simply screamed when she saw what had happened. Gail, seeing that Alicia was getting back up, quickly grabbed her light green panties and pulled. The flexible underpants of Alicia steched about a foot and a half over Alicia's body before they snapped off.

Much like last week, Alicia screamed in humiliation. Unlike last week however, she was completely nude. Her sexy ass jiggled as she made her way to her feet and she cupped her breast with her hands.

Alicia, although dying of humiliation, would not be humiliated like last week. She grabbed Gail by the hair and cleanly ripped off Gail's bra. Gail's round, ample tits fell down as the bra was removed as she yelped in humiliation.

Gail quickly smacked Alicia's ass. alicia jumped up in pain and held her ass.

"Not today, b*tch" Alicia said as she grabbed Gail by the hair and put her over the knee.

Alicia started the spanks very soft, but humiliating, and progressivly got harder as Gail cried and kicked her short legs with every smack.

Alicia, ready to let Gail go, decided she was going to get the ultimate revenge. She was going to make Gail piss herself like she did last week. Gail had already lost control of her emotions as she was kicking and crying. So Alicia, in boots, delivered a big kick to the vagina of Gail. Gail doubled over in pain as her eyes widened. She put her hand over her injured pussy. And much to alicia's ammusment, she lots control and pissed herself. Just like that, butt naked standing in the middle of the ring, all over her own hands.

Gail yelled and ran out. Alicia, although humiliated still, smiled and left the arena
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MARIA
LAYLA


Maria Kanellis, the TFWL Champion, make her way down to the ring wearing a black mini skirt and a red top. She jumps up and down and waves to the fans, but hold onto the back of her skirt so the fans cannot get a peak of what she has on underneath.

"Last week, I defeated Layla in a bra and panties match and I retained my championship!!!!" the ditsy brunette says "I think that this proves that I am the best diva here!!!"

With that, Layla's music hits, and she comes out wearing a pair of denim shorts and a red tank top.

"Maria, you are so pathetic! You lucked out, and next week, I will win the championship. But for now, I want to teach you a lesson!"

Layla runs to the ring and grabs Maria by the hair and throws her into the corner. Layla puts her hands on Maria's red top and fights it off of her. Maria is left in sexy, lacey cheetah print bra. LAyla then reaches down to her skirt, and slips it off, revealing a cheetah print pair of undies, that still reveals a lot of her plump ass and has a black lace trim.

Maria covers up and gets upset.

"Maria. I know you couldn't keep your hand off my ass last week, so I have a little present"

With that, Layla strips down into black and red striped bra and thong set. Layla pushes her big ass towards Maria as Maria starts to kick and panic. Once Layla's big juicy ass gets close to Maria, she starts to slap it in an attempt to get it away from her, but no no avail, as Layla shoves her crack in Maria's nose and shakes her big butt all around.

Maria's whole body is kicking and trying to fight it off as Layla keeps this up for about 30 seconds.


Layla finally finished and Maria trys to wipe her face clean.

"You know, Maria, it would not relaly be all that fair if we both left here in our bra and panties, let's uneven the score"

Then Layla slaps Maria across the face. She grabs her bra and tugs it right off. Then, like last week, she tugs on Maria's panties to make them into wedges and then pulls them down.

Maria is stomping in the middle of the mat, nude as Layla shakes her booty and leaves.



Candice Michelle
Christy Hemme
Dawn Marie
Jackie Gayda
Kelly Kelly (Barbie Blank)
Maryse
Mickie James

[Xtra123]

Let me first say I love your stuff. Can you please write a match where a really arrogant and snotty Stacy Keibler gets completely humiliated by Torrie Wilson? Like she gets pinned in a really embarrassed position , stripped, and then after some trash talking, she gets stripped a second time and then spanked. That would be awesome

[red101867]

I'm a big wrestling fan, especially the Divas. So I love all your stories and I hope you'll keep at it. I can't wait to read about the match with Maryse and Kelly. It should be HOT!!!

[JackNY51]

Originally Posted by Xtra123

Let me first say I love your stuff. Can you please write a match where a really arrogant and snotty Stacy Keibler gets completely humiliated by Torrie Wilson? Like she gets pinned in a really embarrassed position , stripped, and then after some trash talking, she gets stripped a second time and then spanked. That would be awesome

Wow! That sounds like an awesome idea!! I think I will make a new thread. Since I am going to go with a new storyline and a new style of writing. Sorry I've been out a while, lot's of work right now, but I will be working on it!

Originally Posted by red101867

I'm a big wrestling fan, especially the Divas. So I love all your stories and I hope you'll keep at it. I can't wait to read about the match with Maryse and Kelly. It should be HOT!!!

Thanks! I'll be sure to keep that storyline alive when I remake this