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Old 02-02-2010, 01:00 AM
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I'm really enjoying your story (or re-colletion)!!
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Old 02-02-2010, 08:36 PM
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Linda led us out once more along our well trodden path from the sauna towards the showers, with what I thought was slightly more of a skip in her step. It was lovely to see her like this, vibrant and glowing with health, but I did hope that the modest, shy little sparrow had not entirely vanished.

I watched Linda's tiny feet and freckled calves as she stepped across the tiled floor, entranced at their delicate beauty. Once again though, she made an abrupt stop that almost made me bump into her. I looked up sharply and over her head to where I could see the cause of her concern. For the first time this evening the showers were not lying redundant. In the central one, the elderly lady I had seen earlier was washing her hair, while her husband occupied the one to her right. In the remaining one, the couple we had met in the sauna were calmly showering together, sharing the spray of the single head as best they could. We stood awaiting our turn, feeling slightly uncomfortable at watching the four naked bodies right in front of us. I, of course was not going to pass over the opportunity to examine the form of our female sauna companion. I was pleased to see that her rear was just as attractive as the rest of her, kissed by the midday sun and almost as high.

It was the elderly gentleman who saw us first.

'There you go..' he said, reaching blindly for his towel. 'You can have this one'

'Er..thank you' said Linda, before I had a chance to respond.

She turned and raised her eyebrows comically before beckoning me on with a quirky nod of her head.

This was of course yet more new ground for her. It was one thing to come here at all, another to let me see her without her clothes, and yet another to allow a stranger to see her in the nude for a few seconds. To shower with me? In full view of two other couples? I wondered if it would prove to be a bridge too far.

'We can wait a bit if you like' I whispered into her hair as she stepped forward. 'You don't have to if..'

'No.. I'm fine' she replied crisply. 'Come on..'

Linda smiled her thanks as the man moved aside, beginning to dry himself. Hardly stopping at the entrance to the cubicle, she whipped off her towel in a twirl of white, before hanging it on the hook. The unveiling of that rounded, reddened bottom, even for the third or fourth time tonight, was still providing me with untold pleasure. I followed her in quickly, partly hiding her nakedness from our newly evicted friend. He began a conversation with his wife, wandering across the floor towards her as the icy water cascaded onto our bodies.

It was heaven just to be close to her. Our bodies bumped frequently as we fought for room in the cramped space, and she thought it hilarious to elbow me in the ribs when she thought I had more than my fair share. My eyes, blurred and stinging from the force of the water, still managed to focus well enough to marvel at the sight of her. Our confinement meant I could not see the whole length of her body, but the view was hardly spoiled. Her breasts in particular were even more magnificent from this range, rubbing against me like a kiss from an angel. She cupped them gently several times as she washed, and the pink nipples became small and erect as the water bounced against her chest. Dipping her head under the spray frequently, Linda closed her eyes as the water streamed over her face, along those breasts, and down over her hips before being washed away forever.

After a few minutes the elderly lady finished her shower, and collected her patient husband. The pair wandered past us, silently nodding their goodbyes. Linda nodded hers too, her hand falling casually between her legs as she did so. She made no effort to cover her breasts though, and seemed unconcerned that another pair of male eyes had now witnessed her charms. Not long afterwards, our friends from the sauna returned there, and we were alone again.
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Old 02-15-2010, 08:00 AM
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Great story, fascinating to hear about someone struggling to admit she has a secret exhibitionist streak! Great to hear your thoughts too, quite nicely written. Please continue.
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Old 02-15-2010, 07:36 PM
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Old 02-28-2010, 01:35 AM
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This is excellent. I hope there is more....much more. Please!
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Old 03-15-2010, 04:53 AM
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Best story I have read in a long while....... the suspense is killing me
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Old 03-16-2010, 08:02 PM
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It was easy to see Linda relax once we were alone again. Her shoulders visibly dropped, free of the tension that clearly gripped her when she was naked in the company of the others. She exhaled loudly, for perhaps the hundredth time tonight.

'Oh thank goodness for that' she whispered under her breath, 'I thought they'd never go!'

'You've surprised me so much Linda. I'd never have thought you could manage any of this'

'Neither did I! It's not easy being all nudie in front of everyone I can tell you!' she smiled. 'That old chap made sure he saw every inch of me before he went.. and I've never seen so many..you know..willies!' she giggled, pointing her finger mockingly at mine.

I suppose I could have offered to move into one of the now empty showers, but I would have been a fool to do so. Instead, we continued in our shared quarters, stooping and circling to get under the water. After a minute or so of our little waltz, I did what any man in his right mind would do. I can't recall how I began exactly, but it just seemed natural to soap her pale shoulders in big rounded motions. Linda offered no word of complaint, as I thought she perhaps might, and at one delightful moment lifted her small ponytail to allow me to wash the back of her slender neck. I took this as her consent to continue, and I needed no further encouragement to cover her entire back in creamy suds. Her bottom, so fresh and baby pink, continued to taunt me as I neared the small of her back.
I gave in rapidly to temptation, and took the decision to wash further downwards. My mind raced, but I always knew that she would call a halt if this was too much. My circular motions edged gradually below her waist, until they reached the slope of her yielding rear. Most of the soapy water ran freely over the surface and away, while the luckier drops disappeared down between her full cheeks. I would of course have been happy to spend the next two hours concentrating on this spot alone, but instead finished her bottom swiftly, trying to make it appear that I washed beautiful female bottoms on a daily basis.

She made no protest or attempt to make me cease my chores, so I decided to continue onward and downward.

I had always loved looking at Linda's legs, even though I had only really seen her calves and the occasional glimpse of pale thigh as she sat awkwardly on the grass at lunchtime. It seemed quite surreal to be here washing them now, as she stood quite still in front of me without a stitch on. I dwelt on the pleasure of it for a moment, and then began washing from just under her bottom into the crease of her knees. As soon as she felt my touch on her legs, Linda brought her feet smartly together, and I wondered if she had finally realised that she had exposed so much to me earlier in the evening. My hands smoothed the soap gently over those lovely calves, and down to her dainty ankles and feet, which she lifted for me in turn like a spring foal.

My duties sadly completed, I raised myself again to meet Linda's beaming, flushed face. She turned her back to the spray, and the soap I had so carefully placed there washed away in seconds. The view of her fabulous breasts once again helped to make up for the disappointment.

'That was just lovely.. thank you' she whispered.

It was so sincerely said, I wondered if her husband had ever done anything similar for her, or even appreciated the beauty that lay beside him each night.

She began again, before I had a chance to finish wondering.

'Do you mind if I do my front myself? It's just..you know... It's not that I dont trust you or anything, really its not. It's just you know..it might feel a bit awkward if you do my..er.. boobs and everything.. I mean I'm not quite ready to..but it's not that I dont..'

'Of course Linda' I interrupted, before she dug the hole any deeper. 'You carry on'

I smiled at the return of that shy beauty that had first walked in. She had been, like the poem says, merely in another room.
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