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Old 05-01-2014, 08:03 AM
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hello sorry for the fucking delay but what a torrid time ive had i wont go into details anyway i have had to make a new account and will try my best to get a story out asap sorry for the delay
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Old 05-10-2014, 09:16 AM
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Hey it's ok we all are busy we understand I love this story do u want/need any suggestions and maybe u can help me with mine lol cause I haven't posted since who knows when lol
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yeah thankyou so much i am kind of having a hard time thinking of ideas i dont know if i want to do a series or not or just one off stories so any help is so appreciated as i am trying to understand how i would like to move forward with my writing
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Ok then here's my suggestion instead of trying to figure out ideas watch other matches that have that don't copy them but add a little flavor like me I would have my part 3 and maybe 4 and 5 if u all didn't tell me to put periods and work on my grammar lol
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Well, since you asked for suggestions, here's mine.

Based on your set-up, I think this has the potential to be a great series. Start slowly with your match between Trish Stratus and Stacy Keibler and have Velvet Sky defend the Divas Championship in another sexy match. Maybe Eve wins the Wet and Wild match to earn a title shot? Or maybe Ivory attacks them both and wants some revenge?

There are two really great things that you have going for you in this story. The first, is your talent pool. You've blended together different generations of divas. So that means that when your Trish/Stacy Rivalry runs its course, you have an enormous pool of sexy female talent that you can use for the Women's Champion's next rivalry.

The other thing you have going for you, is Eric Bischoff as the main authority/villain. As you've already established, Bischoff will screw over any of the divas is it means getting a boost of ratings. Keep doing that and show that he doesn't play favorites. You can have some of the divas try to kiss up to him to try and get an advantage but at the end of the day Bischoff is a deceitful bastard that is known for pushing the envelop and will stop at nothing to take over the WWE. And if exposing and humiliating a couple dozen sexy women will help him accomplish that, then you can bet he'll put on the sexiest matches ever conceived.

As for storyline, since Armageddon is traditionally the December Pay-Per-View, that means the Royal Rumble is next. Maybe have the Women's Champion and Diva's Champion in action in a sexy tag team match against two challengers. But after that, have a Battle Royal to determine a new number one contender. Who, like the Royal Rumble winner can decide which title she wants to chase after.

Another storyline suggestions, since you've got Velvet Sky as the Diva's Champion. The Beautiful People should be a contributing factor in her storyline. But here's the fun part. With your talent pool, the other members don't have to be Angelina Love or Madison Rayne. You could have Velvet team with some WWE divas to form 'the New Beautiful People". But then the "old Beautiful People" Angelina, Madison and Lacy Von Erich could take offense and you could start a fun multi-diva feud.

Anyway, those are my suggestions, hope they help. I won't lie that doing a series will take a lot of work but if you do it right, then it should also be a lot of fun.

Good luck!
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