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Old 01-26-2015, 08:54 PM
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You said he set the camera up and then brought the girl in. You should be ok mate, unless it was a threesome lol
Threesome? Who cares if it's a thirtythreesome ? The more the better the show will be. I'll bring the beer. You bring the popcorn.
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Old 01-28-2015, 12:04 AM
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I think it is always important for me to tell the back story on any and all of my stories... It is always a better story when the information is explained versus just "Dick see Jane. Jane like Dick. Dick and Jane live happily ever after." For all those who may not like this, I ask you to just tell me... no back story, but I'm hoping there won't be anyone who does.

Back in the 90's when I was in college and becoming who I am today, I met a good friend in Dan. Dan and I would become quite the friends and end up deciding short of the beginning of our sophomore year, we would like to move off campus. So we stayed the entire sophomore year saving to move off campus. Near the end of our sophomore and graduation, we decided to find a decent place to live. Our goal of a house was very lofty, but we wanted a decent place versus a crummy apartment that we kept seeing on our friends get. It became immediate clear that if we would get our own place, we would need to need more money or additional help. After Dan suggested many guys we knew (all of which I managed to prove were not good housemates for one reason or another), I suggested Kate (not my wife) and Carrie who were also looking. In hindsight, they were great housemates, attractive, paid on time, and chipped in when they could. Conversely, they couldn't cook anything more than Ramon noodles/Kraft Mac and cheese, gullible and were just slobs when it came to the cleanliness of their rooms. We met up, decided upon what we wanted, and pooled our money. I think we settled upon $1000 ($250.00 each) for a place was as much as we could go. My confidence was high, but we kept trying. The search was not great the first week and then on the second night, we hit a gem.

Not far from school, but nestled in not quite the country and not quite the suburbs was a house I thought was too good to be true. A four bedroom, four bath house with a finished basement, detached garage, and wooden on both sides and huge backyard that a flat 120' by 200' stretch of grass.... Oh and it had a hot tub... well, it didn't work... yet.

The owner a Nancy, maybe 31 when we met her, had three small kids. She was very attractive although her dumbass rich husband had cheated on her and she was given the house the house in the divorce. However, soon after one of her parents passed and she moved home to live in her childhood home with the kids and take care of the other ailing parent. She I guess decided that she didn't want to sell this house too, so she offered it up for rent.

When Carrie, Kate, and I pulled up (Dan was working) we all agreed this place was awesome, but the chances of it becoming a reality were slim. You as the reader already know that we will get this house, but the story of how... is quite good.

When the door opens and Nancy greets us we are even more understanding the chances are slim. Nancy didn't apparently know we were college kids, but showed us around. We asked lots of 'adult questions' although at 20 we were already adults and she asked some even better ones back.

Kate was in a sorority and did share the same sorority that Nancy was in albeit at different schools. I wasn't sure what chance we would have, but it gave me a glimmer of hope. She ut one of her small kids down for a nap and then continued with our tour. We just loved the place and upon finishing told us she wanted first months rent and a security deposit. Then she dropped the bomb of $1200.00 a month.

My mouth probably dropped and I know she saw the look on our faces as our bubble had burst. Someone said, "I'm sorry, I don't think we can afford that" and "thank you for showing your fine home to us."

As we graciously left, we passed a small boy of maybe six on the front walk-way. His bike was beside him and was trying to fix something with the rear training wheel. As Carrie and Kate passed I looked down and just stopped. I squatted down to look and saw it was an easy fix. I put the wheel on fixed it and Trevor (the boy's name) just smiled and said, "WOW, Lookie Mom, he fixed it."

As I stood she said thank you and offered to pay. I said, it was not necessary and then she said, "Can you look at my garage door quick?" I agreed and went to the garage.

I don't recall the whole thing, but the husband had never hooked up the garage door properly and having worked with my Dad on our recently at home, saw the mistake and fixed it. Again Nancy offered to pay me, but it was nothing really. As we exited the garage, I heard these magical words from Nancy: "How much could you pay a month?"

I didn't respond, but Carried or Kate did and whoever it was did us all a favor and said, "800.00". It was $200.00 less than we probably could of, but she thought for a second.

She agreed!!! But there were stipulations of us taking care of the upkeep, snow remove, grass, cleaning, and doing a lot of work one or two days a month. On a make-shift legal agreement, Kate, Carrie, and I signed a lease and a Dan a day later. The house was ours!

We needed to figure out who got what rooms and drew straws, but the master bedroom was the biggest and had a private bathroom. In the end we all agreed upon the master bedroom owner would pay a higher amount. I opted out of this and so did Carrie, but Kate had to have this room and Dan did too. So they figured it out and we all ended up paying a lot less so that Kate could have the master. We found out Kate's parents would foot the bill and were a little disappointed, but the rent was low so who could really complain!

For three years (two in college and one when I finished school) the four of us lived there until I moved out in late 1999. It was filled with lots of good times, a few sad ones, and yet we threw some great parties all while keeping this place looking great.

I told the backstory, and will continue as soon as I can with this place, and video which was shot in Dan's bedroom.
I hope you will enjoy it.
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Old 01-28-2015, 01:26 AM
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For quick porn jerk-offing, no back story is required.

For real-life... and the how and why things are... the build up, a back story is always welcomed.

PS: Good deal on the house and the story on how you got it.
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Old 01-28-2015, 02:57 PM
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I'd always go for the back story option. It grounds a story in reality and helps you picture the scene . Besides, people can always skip straight to the pictures if they can't be bothered to read.
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Back story is great. It sets the scene. Nothing more boring than stories that are just catalogs of sexual positions..

I well remember the dump my daughter and her friends rented off campus their last 2 years. It should have been condemned...

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Well, I finally had time to post and will share 'my findings' on here. For fun, I'll tell you the length of each scene, info on the girl, back story on the girl (if any), and a rating system to help you judge if it is a worthy read or not. The smiley faces that you can add to your post will I think provided the best possible way to convey my feelings of the video and hopefully keep the creepy factor down. So here we go...

So as you recall, the scene starts with Dan walking backwards and the female walking towards him, but they are close enough to kiss.

Dan's 6'04" so he pretty much is bent over a little to kiss this girl who is named Jennie. Jennie's 5'5" maybe 120lbs. We used to be study partners in college and we used to flirt a lot and I do mean a lot. I spent a ton of time hanging out with her too. Then one weekend I went home and when I came back... They were dating. Anyway, Jennie had a pretty hot body. I know she was probably a 32C or D cup and dark brown shoulder length hair with really beautiful blue eyes. I included a photo which may or may not do her justice, but I thought she was pretty cute.

Dan has a on t-shirt and jeans and Jennie has on a t-shirt and jeans as well. I'm thinking early fall or late spring for the photo, but I guess it could've been summer as we stayed up there in the summer too for work. You can tell two things by the kissing and action going on.

1- Something sexual is going to happen. Jennie has a look in her eye that she wants him or focused on him.

2- She has no idea she is being filmed.

The kissing goes on while both alternate taking off their clothes until they get to their underwear. Dan gets down to his boxers and white socks and Jennie down to her bra and bikini bottoms. Then they close the gap and really start to kiss. There is some light petting going on as well as Dan's hands slide up and down Jennie's sides and Jennie puts her arms behind Dan's head and tries to bring him farther down to kiss.

This kissing and light petting goes on for about three minutes and then Dan slyly slides his hand into the waist area at the side of her bikini's and lightly rubs. Within about two minutes his hand has slid to the front and he is touching her. The kissing resumes, but her hands slide down off Dan and she basically goes limp in the arm as Dan fingers and touches her as they kiss.

About midway through the kissing, Jennie takes a break from kissing but Dan is kissing her neck and still fingering her. You can hear her breathing heavy now and she starts to moan occasionally as he touches her. Her hips either begin to gyrate because she likes it or Dan is being a little rough. Maybe it is a combination of the two, but then her arms magically come alive and slip behind her back and undo her bra. She maneuvers out of it like Houdini while not missing a beat of being fingered and kissed on the neck.

Dan uses the next few minutes to continue working over her vagina and then let's his free hand help slide down her bikini bottoms. Jennie helps him with a quiet, "Wait" and he steps back so she shrug them off. Dan steps back to let her and when she is done, she steps forward and looks up at him as his arms go to her upper arms.

Jennie slowly crotches down and puts her right hand through the fly of Dan's boxers. She retrieves his mildly erect cock and begins to gently stroke it. Jennie takes a serious look at as she strokes it and then looks up at Dan with a smile and whispers something that I cannot make out. I actually replayed the video three times trying to listen, but the background noise and her quiet voice cannot be made out. Oh well... Jennie then smiles looking up at Dan as she tugs very gently on his penis. Her smile fades and she lowers her gaze to his penis and then opens wide and wraps her lips around his cock and closes her eyes.

Jennie give a solid four minute blowjob to Dan who basically just stands there as she sensually goes back and forth on his penis. She never slows or speeds up, but she is steady. Her eyes also never open during the process and at times she looks like she is concentrating. Jennnie goes up to the tip and then back down on his probably 6 inch penis. At the end she stops and gives the tip a flick of her tongue and looks up at Dan with a smile and a "Did you like it?" Dan responds with a yeah and then he helps her get to her feet.

They walk around to the other side of the bed and Dan takes a condom out of his nightstand and slides it on. So now we can see the two horny college students (I so wanted to use that phrase) from the side view as he positions them both on the bed so that they will be doing it missionary style. I do admit to enjoying watching her boobs jiggle as she gets on the bed. Dan then places himself it between her legs, but he has not penetrated her. She whispers something into his ear and then he slowly guides himself into her. She has a nervous look on her face as she bites her bottom lip and with her eyes closed. Then there is a moment where he is in and her mouth opens a good bit as do her eyes in the look of enjoyment.

The rhythmic thrusting from Dan slowly builds as he pushes into her. Both of Jennie's arms wrap around his neck as the kissing resumes. Jennie is craning her neck up to kiss Dan as he thrusts into her with a very slow gaining speed. He is using his arms to hold himself over her as he pushes into her. This goes on for about six minutes and about two from the end, she puts her legs around him and he really starts to lean in and give it to her. At this point she also starts to moan and say the word "yes". She ends up saying the "Yes" word about 15 times.

After about six and a half minutes Dan pulls out and she rolls over to take it Doggy-style, but there is a problem. Dan does not like positioning on the bed and moves her so her face is facing where the camera is hidden. Jennie is unaware of the camera as she smiles with slightly flushed cheeks then goes around behing her pushes himself in. The same face of "oh...." is made and she grabs the edge of the bed as Dan begins rather quickly to pound her from behind.

In about a minute Jennie is enjoying it and buries her head face down into the sheets and makes a muffled sound of pleasure and then flips her head up as she rest on the sheet. She peeks her head up a few minutes into it and I swear looks directly at the camera, but either doesn't see it or has no clue it is on.

Dan then starts to build some real heavy thrusts and Jennie starts to moan again but much louder. There is either no one home or we are all sound asleep because she gets very vocal until the end. Dan gives it to her doggy style for another three minutes until he starts to go, "oh...oh.. oh... shit here it comes"

Dan pulls out and Jennie rolls over underneath his straddled legs so she is on her back. She immediately cups her boobs like a shelf bra and gently plays with them. Dan latches onto his cock and rips off the condom, tossing it on the floor and begins to masturbate. He gives a few solid pumps until you hear him go "Ahhh....ahhh.... ahhh...." in direct connection to the shots of cum that shoot out land on her stomach and boobs. One shot in the early going must come close to her face as Jennie shoots her head back to hopefully let it miss her or hit the bottom of her chin.

He pumps some more slowing to an almost dead stop and she giggles and says, "you done?" Dan nods and then slowly leans down and kisses her pretty passionately. Then Dan slides himself forward and does this move to get off the bed that looks rather uncomfortable, but then I see why he does it. He drags his penis up her body as it still looks to be oozing cum. His penis comes to smack against Jennies cheek as she moves so it doesn't land on her lips or nose. Dan has her arms tied up with his and pauses right on her cheek. Jennie looks annoyed and he then jumps off the bed and walks off camera to the right. Jennie sits up sideways looking in his direction and says, "ASS!!!"

Dan says something about turning on the shower and he is gone. Jennie sits there looking in his direction for a bit not saying anything and then looks down on her boobs and stomach to inspect his work. You cannot see, but cum must be trickling down her boobs and she takes a finger to scoop some of it up. Then without even thinking she puts her finger in mouth and sucks on it. That part alone was damn hot! After about another minute she sits all the way up and gets out of bed exiting the scene.

The camera rolls for another minute and then cut off (he must've edited it there to stop) and a new scene starts.

Overall, it was a pretty good scene. As I watched it with my wife, I would look over and see her touching herself and I must say it helped add to the spice factor of having sex after it.

Here is what I give it on a scale of 1-10

Overall: 6
Girl: 7
Blowjob: 5, but it was pretty sensual
Sex: 4, okay
Uniqueness: 5, nothing great, nothing horrible
Money Shot: 7 (average until that lick part that Dan didn't see until he watched the scene)
Total length of scene 22 minutes and change.

Hope you enjoyed it. Feedback encouraged and welcome. I will get the next scene soon!
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Thanks for the great and detailed post. As for back stories I feel they are important most often. I always feel badly because I add back story details repeatedly to many of my posts and am afraid others get bored. I add mostly because many readers haven't read older posts of mine and many are new so what they are reading is a first about us. Yes better than writing "see Dollie play."
I also feel if others don't care for the facts they are not forced to read any back story info.
As for us, our crappy internet means we can't watch videos so your explaining the video was almost as good as watching. Aren't you glad you and you wife watched?
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Thanks for the great and detailed post. As for back stories I feel they are important most often. I always feel badly because I add back story details repeatedly to many of my posts and am afraid others get bored. I add mostly because many readers haven't read older posts of mine and many are new so what they are reading is a first about us. Yes better than writing "see Dollie play."
I also feel if others don't care for the facts they are not forced to read any back story info.
As for us, our crappy internet means we can't watch videos so your explaining the video was almost as good as watching. Aren't you glad you and you wife watched?
You have no idea how glad I am!!! But I bet you can guess!
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I will get the next scene soon!
or just post the vids?
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Don't have a way to get the vids on here... yet.
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