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Old 07-05-2014, 07:45 PM
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Great - not only is that Woodson guy ruining our stories, now this amsis guy is spamming chapters in broken English. Ungh *rubs eyes in frustration*
Which one?
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Old 07-06-2014, 01:12 AM
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Great - not only is that Woodson guy ruining our stories, now this amsis guy is spamming chapters in broken English. Ungh *rubs eyes in frustration*
Yes, he's been writing a lot of bad chapters in the Isabel story. I've tried to contact him and asked him to please tighten up his language (and stop using "HIS" and "HIM" about females!), but all he's replying is "I must finish them!" It seems he just wants to finish branches off as quickly as possible.

I've decided to delete all of them because they were unreadable. Things should be back to normal, and if he continues to write bad chapters, I'll continue to delete.

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Old 07-06-2014, 02:28 AM
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On the subject of Kindle, has anyone ever tried one of the ENF stories on Amazon? I bought "The Only One Naked" as the preview seemed promising but in the end it was a bit of a bland exhibitionist story that didn't really go anywhere. Considering it is a premium story it was nowhere near the quality we produce on writing.com. Since getting burned on that I've been reading only the free samples, but by and large they seem pretty uninspiring.
Yes I have bought about 20 ENF books/stories from both Amazon and Smashwords. None of them have been to the level I expect from a premium story. They are usually too short, or they quickly drop the ENF theme for typical romance novel sex.

I think the writers publishing there are limiting themselves to the patterns of romance novels. Maybe they are afraid to appear too out of norms for print media.

It's not just the ENF genre either. I tried a couple of BDSM stories that seemed to have an ENF theme and those were as lackluster. They definitely don't want to appear too far from what would be acceptable in print media. Hint: there aren't really any ENF stories in print media.
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Old 07-06-2014, 08:25 AM
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Yes, he's been writing a lot of bad chapters in the Isabel story. I've tried to contact him and asked him to please tighten up his language (and stop using "HIS" and "HIM" about females!), but all he's replying is "I must finish them!" It seems he just wants to finish branches off as quickly as possible.

I've decided to delete all of them because they were unreadable. Things should be back to normal, and if he continues to write bad chapters, I'll continue to delete.
Nice one; good to see he's being nipped in the bud.
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Old 07-15-2014, 04:40 PM
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I'm considering adding a new story to writing.com starring Mackenzie. Basically, this would allow for new settings for an ENF story with her rather than just her neighborhood and the surrounding areas. Before I do this, however, I'd be quite interested in hearing some ideas for the options for starting locations for the story.
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Old 07-15-2014, 11:42 PM
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I'm considering adding a new story to writing.com starring Mackenzie. Basically, this would allow for new settings for an ENF story with her rather than just her neighborhood and the surrounding areas. Before I do this, however, I'd be quite interested in hearing some ideas for the options for starting locations for the story.
Ah, yes. That's one of the stories I don't have in my favorites due to how limited it is. She's naked in her neighborhood, and that forces everyone through a bottle-neck and it somewhat limits the further chapters.

Areas I usually enjoy are work, school, public venues, or public transit. With her naked just outside her house, it'd be somewhat of a stretch to get her to any of these places without disregarding reality more than we already do.

Something I'd be excited to see is an employee who is forced to work naked and a situation where she finds herself on either a city bus or a Greyhound bus.
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Old 07-16-2014, 12:15 AM
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Alright, I'm getting started on adding the story, but an unfortunate side effect is that I can only have 5 interactive stories with basic membership. I've deleted my largely dead or unsuccessful stories, but am now narrowed down to 5, and all are difficult choices to make.

The original Mackenzie's Big Mistake as well as Yuki's Horrible Day are definitely going to stay, as they're both original works (and Yuki's story is my very first interactive). So that leaves me with a choice between the Final Fantasy, Persona 3, and Sailor Moon stories. It's a difficult choice to make, as all have a fairly strong number of contributions and still see fairly regular updates.
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Old 07-16-2014, 02:18 PM
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Alright, I'm getting started on adding the story, but an unfortunate side effect is that I can only have 5 interactive stories with basic membership. I've deleted my largely dead or unsuccessful stories, but am now narrowed down to 5, and all are difficult choices to make.

The original Mackenzie's Big Mistake as well as Yuki's Horrible Day are definitely going to stay, as they're both original works (and Yuki's story is my very first interactive). So that leaves me with a choice between the Final Fantasy, Persona 3, and Sailor Moon stories. It's a difficult choice to make, as all have a fairly strong number of contributions and still see fairly regular updates.
Always loved the Yuki story
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Old 07-16-2014, 05:40 PM
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Alright, the story is now live. Here's a link for any interested in reading/contributing. (Not too much of a read at the moment, of course.)

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-Misadventures
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Old 07-18-2014, 09:51 AM
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Welp, hiya, I'm a big user of this site, as well as writing.com but I decided today it might to use an account so I thought I'd introduce myself.

I plan on adding a lot to both Mackenzie's Misadventures as I have a branch here:
writing(dot)com/main/interact/item_id/2000666-Mackenzies-Misadventures/map/131111121

I also hope to add to Ditzy Miss Lizzie as I recently discovered it and fell in love with the idea, after seeing it hadn't been added to recently, and then it was by the dreaded mrwoodson I think I might start a story in it as I am a massive ENF lover:
writing(dot)com/main/interact/item_id/1933148-Ditzy-Miss-Lizzie/map/1251211

So yeah, nice to finally be in this site and hopefully I can find a spot in the ENF writing.com community to fit me well

(Sorry about the weird links, the site won't let me post proper urls so early on)
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