Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion

[ThinkTank]

Have you considered working with DoctorRipper on something? They just finished their first story and I feel like you three can dominate as a trio. From what I've seen, they are also high on your work but not sure if you feel the same way. It would surely be cool to see.

[DrVillian]

wow what an epic last chapter, loved the twist at the end as Steph said a Mcmahon all ways gets what they want. Can't wait to see what your next story will be after this amazing effort.

[MickGesitt]

So that's why you've been so vague about the 'Ultimate Humiliation' Event. Didn't see that coming.

But since we're getting technical about the contract. I'm curious about a couple of things. How could Paige agree to the 'no shoes' stipulation to the match without knowing all the details? Was that something that was just agreed upon separately? And also, why is everyone still wearing a thong? If you're in a match where your opponent is trying to rip your clothes off wouldn't you want to wear something more conservative? I get that Paige's thong allowed for the scene where Stephanie clawed at her ass. But even if she was completely confident that she was going to win wouldn't she want to wear underwear that protected her modesty? I'm not talking boxer shorts or anything but maybe just some regular panties instead of a skimpy thong.

Also, you said underwear is harder to get off than upper clothing when Paige removed Stephanie bra. I respectfully disagree. Yes, the opponent will fight harder to keep it from being removed. But shirts have to go over the arms. A strapless bra is nothing compared to that. Also, pants and shorts have always proven to be tricky to remove in bra and panties match. When an opponent is thrashing around and kicking her legs its extremely difficult to remove her bottoms. A skimpy thong can easily be ripped off. Just putting that out there.

Now that that's out the way. That was a fantastic match to end the series on.

Stephanie played the villain perfectly. She orchestrated the attack backstage, she exploited the injury throughout the match, she attacked Paige right away with the cheap shot, she stomped on Paige's crotch, the clawed at her ass and she brought her over to the commentary table for some extra humiliation that ended up backfiring.

And on that matter, I was amused that you brought back the old, perverted Jerry 'the King' Lawler. But I'm a little disappointed that he never shouted his "PUPPIES" catchphrase when Stephanie pulled Paige's top off. I get that he was caught off guard by the situation and that scene was still great but it would have been absolutely perfect if Jerry had shouted "PUPPIES!" in there somewhere.

Once again, my Pale Princess Paige proves that she's unstoppable. She can't be beaten. Since this story started she's won every match she's been in. It reminds me of that old quote from the Heath Ledger movie
'A Knight's Tale'. Adhemar: "How would you beat him?" Fence: "With a stick. While he slept. But on a horse, with a lance? That man is unbeatable." That's the same case with Paige. In matches like this, Paige is unbeatable. Stephanie's 'stick' is her crooked contract that finally gave her the upper hand over Paige. But we'll get to that later...

Anyway, Paige was great in the match as well. Loved the fan interaction bit where she took drinks from the crowd and made Stephanie an unwilling participant in a wet t-shirt contest. That's what she gets for wearing a white shirt. I also enjoyed the bit where Paige poured soda in Stephanie's pants. It just showed how Paige was attacking Stephanie on two fronts. Physically and mentally. All the humiliation that Paige heaped on Stephanie during the match caused the Billion Dollar Princess' mind to practically break and that's how Paige won. That, and by getting Stephanie so worked up that she ended up fingering herself in the middle of the ring for everyone to see.

You had a great villain Stephanie and a great hero Paige to go up against her. They both pulled out all the stops in the match and that resulted in it being absolutely incredible.

Now we've got ultimate humiliation. Stephanie finally has the upper hand on Paige and now I'm wondering how she's going to get out of it. Reminding Stephanie of her own humiliation at Extreme Rules will only make things worse. Paige could get angry instead of embarrassed when she's stripped naked but I doubt that would work out well either. Maybe as Stephanie starts to 'play' with Paige, she can turn the tables and draw McMahon so she gets embarrassed alongside her. If Paige is going down (I could make a dirty pun there but I won't) hopefully she can bring Stephanie down (or off... could help myself) with her. Either way, I guess I'll be seeing my pale princess in all her glory in the final chapter of this legendary series.

[Dayjib]

How's the final chapter going? Is it going to be ready Sunday or just when it's finished (as you said you were aiming for this Sunday)

[1993wwe]

I was running around all weekend and unfortunately didn't get a chance to work on it. I'm hoping to have it done this Sunday (or maybe a day or two beforehand) but I'll keep everyone in the loop either way.

[smjimmie1348]

That's cool take your time we all have busy schedules and lose track of time but just think after this chapter thos awesome story will be over and we will all be sad , but happ that we witnessed a truly great story here on this forum so we wanted to let you know that you will be awesome in the future with whatever you decide to do after this story is officially over

[Dayjib]

This still on for tomorrow or has it been another too hectic a week to finish it?

[1993wwe]

I'm working on it right now. Don't know if it'll be finished by tomorrow or not, being honest.

[Dayjib]

Originally Posted by 1993wwe

I'm working on it right now. Don't know if it'll be finished by tomorrow or not, being honest.

Cool for letting us know anyway, I'm sure you'll let us know if you can or not

[1993wwe]

For some behind the scenes perspective: My long last couple of chapters have been around 16 pages each when I've copy/pasted them in a word document. With this final chapter, I'm already on page 12 and have much more things planned to happen. Granted, since there is more dialogue, that takes up more space but I still take that as a sign that this is going to be a very packed conclusion.

So I'll be continuing to work on it through the week and plan on posting the final product when its done but that's my basic explanation for why it isn't completed just yet.