[ENF] Will’s Mom Comes Undone

[Chasmo]

Thanks Alexandra80! First, I'm delighted that you enjoy the stories. It's nice to know that for a community of like minded readers they seem to be resonating. I'm also glad that you enjoyed a glimpse into the "day after" scenario of the epilogue. Hadn't tried that before and it was fun to write.

As for a sequel, I too think the "first time" humiliation of the Mrs. Parnell character is always the best so I remain resistant to the idea of a sequel but, hey, never say never.

On the unanswered question front I truly appreciate your curiosity. For me, part of the fun is thinking about the endless possibilities of consequences when a tale is left incomplete. Perhaps Danielle still has her powerful job but has learned a lesson in humility. Maybe she is planning revenge. What happens when she sees Emily or Rachel -- do they laugh at her? Is she humiliated? And what becomes of Will now that his mom has come undone? There are so many alternatives out there!

In any event, thanks again. If folks remain interested I'll do my best to keep on writing.

[amfanon]

Originally Posted by Chasmo

If folks remain interested I'll do my best to keep on writing.

Do you really have to ask? Each one is better than the last.

[chiefy2404]

First off, I commend you Chasmo on some magnificent work with each installment of this series, the 1st time aspect is truly unique and makes it that much more enjoyable.

My suggestion for a "spin off" puts out the idea of someone else in the Parnell family, daughter Anna, to become undone. She's played a tiny role with her only real presence coming in "Promotion Commotion" story of enjoying her's mom's commupence and attempting to cover her up with her gown. But, given how Anna is a teenager (we assume) that finds displeasure that boys fantasize about her mom but pay her no attention (like wise her mom pays more attention to Will), but possibly gains attention for the wrong reason in various events/activities?

[Chasmo]

Chiefy - thanks so much for your kind words. They're genuinely appreciated. Although I truly like the idea and the premise of a "spin-off," it would be difficult to do with Anna without dramatically pushing the time line of the stories ahead (she is only about 13 so your suggestion won't work for that reason). That's not to say that Danielle's niece Bella (who is of age) couldn't take on Anna's battle against Mrs. Parnell and find herself, along with her aunt, exposed. I'll see what I can do in that regard and thanks again.

Working on a slightly different tale for Danielle at present that I hope to have up by next weekend.

[chiefy2404]

Any update on a new chapter coming?

[Chasmo]

Apologies for the long absence but I've been stuck between an onslaught of work and a terrible case of writer's block, Regarding the latter, and in an effort to kick-start the next Mrs. Parnell story, below are the three ideas I've been kicking around in my head for a while (the first of which I've actually begun). To get the old pen moving again, I'd be delighted to see if you or others have a favorite . Please feel free to throw in any and all suggestions although I can't promise that they'll make the story whenever I finally get it written.

1. The Fall Ball (this is the one I've begun) -- Danielle has taken over the reins of Will's high school Fall Ball -- a fancy black tie affair for the school's faculty, students and parents. One of the items proposed for bid at the ball's silent auction is a hypnotist/magician to perform at a birthday party hosted by the winning bidder. Danielle has no time for this type of nonsense and insists on meeting the hypnotist who she both teases and demeans as a fraud. After she requires the hypnotist to make an appearance at the ball (with plans to make him look like a fool) she very reluctantly permits the act to be auctioned off. To both her surprise and dismay, when on the night of the big ball her son Will insists that she bid on it -- and her ego makes sure she wins - the results are anything but appropriate.

2. Whole Foods Nudes: Clothes 100 Percent Off in Aisle Nine -- I've been thinking about this one for a while although it would essentially be co-opting an idea by an author named Hal who maybe 5 or 10 years ago posted on a number of other boards what I would use here as the road map for it. In short, after a frustrating day in her powerful job -- and due to her nanny being sick -- Danielle is forced to pick up Will from school and stop at the grocery store on the way home. Dressed to the nines and as arrogant as ever, Mrs. Parnell ends up on the short end of the stick after teasing and then humiliating Callum Duncan and Billy Miras, two of Will's friends who also happen to work at the Whole Foods where she receives her comeuppance.

3. Palin in Comparison -- it cracked me up a few weeks back when someone posted a thread entitled Sarah Palin's Panties. I've been thinking about a story since this summer that would have Danielle and Sarah face-off somehow on stage after Mrs. Parnell learns that the former Alaska Governor has been invited to speak at Will's prestigious high school. What really sets Will's mom off is discovering on her son's computer an ongoing chat among him and his friends about how "hot" Sarah Palin looks in her power suits. With the thought of showing that country bumpkin "what hot really means," Danielle looks again like she may be in for some tough times.

In any event, sorry again for being away. Any thoughts on which of these stories (which will also of course feature many familiar characters and may introduce some new ones) you'd like to see next would be most appreciated. I'll do my best to get something new up soon.

[CobblerGuy]

I like the Fall Ball and the Whole Foods ideas, there's a lot of interesting situations that could happen in those settings.

[amfanon]

Originally Posted by chiefy2404

Any update on a new chapter coming?

I predict a new chapter will be posted....now. Now. Ok, now. Now? Damn.

OK, so maybe it's less a prediction, and more wishful thinking. Can you claim me?

Chasmo, all three sound equally awesome, so I opened the Calculator program and clicked randomly with my eyes closed. The first number between 1 and 3 I picked was 2, so I vote for Whole Foods.

[amfanon]

Originally Posted by amfanon

Can you claim me?

Dammit. Blame me. I have no idea how that happened.

[inboxme123]

Maybe the most into the Whole Foods idea overall, but a hypnotized orgasm or something at the Fall Ball might be fun (if that's not too overtly sexual for your style).

Whatever you end up going with, looking forward to it!

...or maybe more specifically, an orgasm triggered by something hypnotically suggested earlier in the story, so that it's a surprise to the otherwise un-hypnotized Mrs. Parnell when it occurs.