Stephanie's pokemon strip war (johto)

[smjimmie1348]

hey guys I finally figured out how to post so here goes this is going to be a story like Nathaniel Keams because that is what inspired me so yeah since he is doing kanto I will start off with johto if u don't know the gyms are 1) flying 2) Bug 3) normal 4) ghost 5) fighting 6) steel 7) ice 8) dragon so lets start with her journey Stephanie wakes up out of her bed and realizes what time it is so she runs out of the house in her pajamas to professor elms house which is not that far away from her house so she goes in there and prof elm asks are u ready to choose what pokemon u will start your journey with and she said yes and professor elm looked at her and said really then Stephanie realized she was still in her pajamas oh that is so embarassing lucky she doesn't sleep in her underwear lol so he's like ok then I let u choose your starter u have 3 choices a water type totodile a grass type chikorita and a fire type cyndaquil so with a long hard thought she chose totodile so she thanks professor elm and goes home to show her mom then she changes into her outfit which is a blue jacket a pink shirt with black gloves red skirt with black knee high socks and white sneakers and then before she leaves on her journey prof elm says oh here I forgot to give u this it's 5 poke balls and a pokedex and then he looked at her outfit and said nice outfit u sure u wanna go with that u do know the only way to win a gym badge is to knock all your opponents pokemon and trying to strip them to their bra and panties but keep in mind they will do the same to u and if u lose u will have to wherever u are walk all the way back here in your bra and panties and u will not be able to train for a year so have fun and she goes off so that's my first story plz leave comments about how I did and what do I need to do in the future to make my story readable and awesome to all of u pokemon fans out there so until then smell ya later

[HoracetheSlug]

Punctuate first and foremost. Use periods and commas to pace yourself. A whole story shouldn't be a single sentence. Use quotation marks to separate speech from narrative. I like that she rushed out in her pajamas, that's a nice touch. There's potential for some great situations if she's prone to being forgetful or overexcited like that. As long as you get a hold on proper formatting, I look forward to more from you.

[smjimmie1348]

hey guys this is the first gym battle of Stephanie's johto region and its at the violet city gym so the referee for this gym battle says all right folks this gym battle is a one on one match between Stephanie and the violet city gym leader all the way from unova to replace Faulkner its skyla the crowd cheers and she is wearing a blue shirt with a small pair of blue shorts with some boots on and she said hope u don't have any embarassing panties on because I'm going to show then to the whole world and Stephanie all right lets strip war skyla sent out her first and only pokemon falkners spearow and Stephanie sent out her first and only pokemon her starter pokemon which was totodile so let the strip wars begin Stephanie made the first move and said totodile tackle and skyla said spearow dodge then skyla said spearow use growl and a utter sound came out of spearows mouth and Stephanie closed her eyes and ears because she was in pain then skyla nodded to spearow then skyla went Behind Stephanie and pulled her jacket off to reveal her pink shirt then she went for the shirt but Stephanie slapped her back and skyla fell on the ground then Stephanie pulled a boot off to reveal her blue sock then skyla tried to hop on one leg to get over there but Stephanie said totodile use tackle and went straight at skyla but spearow intervened but was thrown into the wall and knocked out then skyla was upset so she went and speared Stephanie since her and totodile were celebrating then pulled her shoes off to reveal her pink socks then pulled those off to reveal Stephanie barefooted then she went for her skirt but Stephanie pushed her off then ran at her and grabbed her by hair and threw her into the air then when she came down Stephanie super kicked her in the face and she was out cold then Stephanie pulled the other boot off to reveal her other blue sock then she pulled those off to reveal her bare feet then she pulled the top off to reveal her blue bra then after skyla was stirring a bit Stephanie finished it off by pulling her tight shorts off to reveal her blue bra and panties with daisies on them then skyla woke up and screamed and threw her the gym badge and ran out crying well that's gym 1 for Stephanie gym 2 is going to be a sticky situation lol

[smjimmie1348]

I try but I get focused on writing so I sometimes forget my grammar sry

[HoracetheSlug]

Originally Posted by smjimmie1348

I try but I get focused on writing so I sometimes forget my grammar sry

That's fine, there's nothing wrong with enjoying writing. Get the story you want out any way you like, but it's difficult to read when it's this raw. When you've written a chapter, take a break, then come back to it, look it over carefully and clean it up. Think about your ideas and the story you want when you're writing, but think about the readers before you post.

[smjimmie1348]

Ok I try I will post second gym on Sunday if not busy lol

[smjimmie1348]

Hey guys sry for the delay at least it's Sunday lol so happy Mother's Day to all moms out there so anyway lets begin. So Stephanie woke up and changed into her clothes her blue jacket pink shirt red skirt white sneakers and black knee high socks so while she was walking into the city looking for the gym she bumped into somebody and she introduce her self as Alexa the sister of the azalea town gym and also a photographer for the johto newspaper gazette so Alexa said what's your name and she said my name is Stephanie and I'm looking to battle your sister and she laughed and said not like that u ain't especially not with that skirt on u lol so they go to the gym and said ready then viola stepped up and said ready to lose and viola was wearing a gray shirt and gray jeans so the ref was Alexa and she said this Is a one on one match for the bug badge and the only way to win is by knocking out your opponents pokemon and stripping your opponent down to her bra and panties so let the strip wars begin viola sent out scyther and Stephanie sent out totodile and viola laughed and said that little thing couldn't hurt me much less a fly then totodile got mad and started glowing and evolved into croconaw then viola was scared so they started viola said scyther slash but croconaw without orders dodged and used water gun but scyther dodged but viola wasn't so lucky she was drenched then croconaw started dancing then scyther went over there and used double team to make different copies of itself then used slash to slash Stephanie's red skirt off to reveal her white teddy bear panties omg I'm so embarassed I knew I shouldn't have wore these panties today then scyther was laughing along with Viola but that just made croconaw stop dancing and get super angry and ran at scyther and used take down then used water gun to knock it out then viola stopped laughing and tried to run but croconaw was running at her and hit take down then Stephanie went over there and without a fight stripped viola of her shirt to reveal her white bra then she pulled her jeans off to reveal her black panties with ladybugs on them she gave her the gym badge and ran screaming then Alexa said told u but nice panties I'm going to get those pictures to the newspaper and follow u to goldenrod city for your next gym battle so have fun and be a little prepared and don't wear embarassing panties like that but Stephanie said I know I would have wore my pink panties but I forgot to after I woke up because I wanted to sleep good in my panties ok chill

[DevilGrrl]

Originally Posted by HoracetheSlug

Punctuate first and foremost. Use periods and commas to pace yourself. A whole story shouldn't be a single sentence. Use quotation marks to separate speech from narrative. I like that she rushed out in her pajamas, that's a nice touch. There's potential for some great situations if she's prone to being forgetful or overexcited like that. As long as you get a hold on proper formatting, I look forward to more from you.

This is why before I started playing at writing erotica several years ago, I took advice from some others in the field.

The biggest suggestion they gave me was to write them before I post them. Do them up in word or wordpad or something else, and check and doublecheck and triplecheck them before I posted them. Read them as if I was reading them for the first time, and change them if something did not seem right.

Sometimes I admit I still do the 'stream of consciousness" type of postings, but when I am working on something specific for my own reading pleasure and that of others, I do it beforehand then do a copy and paste when I am sure I have it right.

[smjimmie1348]

Hey I know I realize that but if I write it then try to post it one part might take a month or longer because now I'm busy if I did this before I got a job I would have been done by now lol so I'm just trying to make all of u a good story not trying to rush it but not make u wait either

[smjimmie1348]

Stephanie's pokemon strip wars part 4 ( johto 3rd gym) this is part 4 of my series named Stephanie's pokemon strip wars and we are here in ilex forest waiting to go to goldenrod so I can face Whitney then all of a sudden my feet get tangled up by a branch and I fall on my face lucky I'm not wearing a skirt since it got sliced and diced last gym battle but I was upside down then a trainer came up to me and said I help u out of that and out of this forest and I was like ok but then he says u gotta do something for me and I was like what and he was like u gotta take that shirt off since I was just in a shirt and some blue jeans lol and I was like no and he was like I could just pull your shirt off and leave and I was like ok just let me out and he did and I was like take me to the end first and he did then I pulled my shirt off to reveal my white bra then he said thank u then he pushed me I fell out into the city with no shirt on so embarassing at least I wore a bra lol then officer Jenny came by and saw me with no shirt on and arrested me for public indecency then while I was handcuffed in my white bra she bent me over and unbuttoned and unzipped my jeans and pulled them off to reveal my white thong ewww so disgusted then she spanked me so hard I peed my panties which were white which made it worse then to make it worse a girl with pink hair a white shirt and pink skirt and shoes came in and saw me and said Jenny why do u keep doing this to my challengers and I heard that so she must be the gym leader here in goldenrod city and officer Jenny was like ok I let her go to face u on one condition u gotta wear your most embarassing panties u have and loser is tied up handcuffed and gagged with this white thong that she just took off of me to reveal my lower region then Whitney said ok If I win u have to stop doing this forever and I get to strip u down too lol and Jenny was like ok see u there and uncuffed me and I said thanks and Whitney was like let's go shopping for some new panties lol ok here we are at the new gym I'm fresh off of shopping at the mall with Whitney so we started it is a one on one match between militank and croconaw so we started and she said militank roll out lol and it rolled over croconaw and hit croconaw until it hit me and it was dazed but it was stuck on me then I tried to lift it but since I'm a girl I couldn't so then Whitney was like militank body slam and militank jumped up and body slammed me and croconaw then Whitney saw her chance and says thanx militank and goes over there and pulls my heels off to reveal my black knee high socks then she pull those off to reveal my bare feet then then she grabs my skirt and slowly pulls it down and off to reveal I don't know yet because croconaw is guarding it lol then croconaw got up and used water gun on Whitney and she went right at Miltank and they both fell down and I got up still in my pink Hannah Montana panties and ran at her and took her shirt off to reveal her blue bra then she screamed and tried to cover up but then she saw me and started laughing and said why u wearing those panties and I said didn't officer Jenny tell me to and Whitney said no she told me to lol and I was like omg I am so embarassed then Whitney ran at me and grabbed my shirt while Miltank was still trying to get up but then both our hands were on my shirt me trying to protect it from coming off and she was trying to get it off then all of a sudden croconaw pulled down her skirt to reveal her pink panties with small cows on them then Jenny said deals a deal and now after 5 minutes the mighty gym leader Whitney was tied up in a hogtie in her blue bra and pink panties with small Cows on them and my white thong gagged in her mouth and tape over it*