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07-01-2016, 02:15 PM
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Love the descriptions of humiliation. Other writers could learn from you. "Screaming in humiliation" damn good stuff.
I'd like to see more from you 
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#12
07-02-2016, 09:03 AM
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Oopsie
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#13
07-03-2016, 08:00 PM
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I don't really post a lot but this is a awesome story.
Keep up the good work dude 
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08-06-2016, 06:00 AM
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Thank you for the story
I really enjoyed this one, it was a a fun read.
Something bugs me a little though: in chapter 4 we got Amy getting away from the bug barebottomed, and the moth change targets without finishing her, but when we see her again in chapter 5 she's fully naked hidding in the bushes. Did we miss a cretor/creature confrontation here? 
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