General Drawn ENF

[elnemesis3]

Originally Posted by Mackie

Glad to hear your getting back to drawing elnemesis3, enjoyed that comic and looking forward to more

Thank you very much!! whatever ENF things I come up with , ill post here, suggestions are accepted!!!

[Gao]

Originally Posted by theoneandonly27

Hey Gao, if you don't mind my asking, what program do you use to draw? I'd love to give a go at it.

Just good ol' Photoshop. With lots and lots of layers.

I hear Manga Studio is good as well but I haven't tried it out.

[king_of_doom]

Unlike others, my comment will be more constructive criticism over your comic elnemesis3:

The situation and the dialogue it's a bit odd to be honest. She suppose to be on a TV show, right? kinda out of place saying "hell" and "ass" you could have fun with the dialogue more.

The reference on the comic it's just out of place, reminds me of the comic of Darkwing Duck where they add too much reference of different shows and it's not the point, if you like to add a reference you should just go for 1 or tiny ones also that make sense since the whole razor gloves coming from Elm Street could have come better. This is an example:

https://forum.oneclickchicks.com/show...postcount=1791

If you notice i added a few reference especially on Emmitt Nervend from Freakazoid, i did that because i have seen the character appearing everywhere without explanation. There's an upcoming work i will show soon involving a reference of Who Framed Roger Rabbit( it will mostly involve the first scenes of the movie)

Finally the facial expressions on her, the whole smiling thing gets tiring and could make her face more desperate and embarrassed, i do feel that's the most important part of a drawing since no matter how hard you put on drawing their bodies, if the face doesn't look right the drawing won't look right.

This is my personal opinion and hopefully you don't take it the wrong way and think i was insulting your works, only critique.

[splunge]

Jay042-- I enjoyed yours a lot, short though it was. Glad it didn't actually go in a violation direction, as it was threatening to do in panel #1... I didn't even know what L Bush looked like, but after Googling, yes that's her, but more of a younger her. That's just as well.... I want more, and would Laura as a bumbling, unsuccessful naked space heroine be all that bad an idea?

Mexi64-- Your stuff has a nice spirit to it. Well done. I was prepared for her to abandon the living suit of armor and go on her way naked.... If it were me I'd trim the body proportions down just a little, in a few panels, not all.... but you didn't ask for criticism, so why am I giving it? I guess because I'm always looking very hard at my own drawings for problems I've missed, and these days, I'm always sort of stuck in that picking-apart mode. Anyway, I like your drawing style, and hope you post more.

[dsp333]

Originally Posted by elnemesis3

Thank you!! yes lemme post the 5 parts, I originally made this for a prop contest for the Great Emperor comics prop comp, unfortunately I never got to do more entrys because of personal problems, but I think I´m ready to give it another try!!

Man, that was really good! Really hope you do more.

[Jay042]

Originally Posted by splunge

Jay042-- I enjoyed yours a lot, short though it was. Glad it didn't actually go in a violation direction, as it was threatening to do in panel #1... I didn't even know what L Bush looked like, but after Googling, yes that's her, but more of a younger her. That's just as well.... I want more, and would Laura as a bumbling, unsuccessful naked space heroine be all that bad an idea?

Well, that was a comic I did way back in 2003. There was really only one other strip featuring naked Laura Bush in space. The rest of the comics were just some silly political comics I did. I hadn't really thought about returning to it. But hearing some of the positve comments about here is kind of making me consider it

[splunge]

I'm sure it was a really good toaster though, Jay042... good one again! I personally feel she's better off naked and in space.

[elnemesis3]

Hello!! yeah!! its a real chaos, the object of the Prop Competition is to create an illustration or whatever wich included a Prop, in this case --garden tool-- and make an ENFish situation out of it, so I came up with the whole tv show idea and cameos from games and tv stuff

[philky033]

Hope it is not a repost.

[king_of_doom]

Not much ENF to be honest......