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Old 12-14-2015, 07:17 AM
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Default Pokemon Lemon Chiffon [Strip Pokemon]

Pokemon Lemon Chiffon
[Strip Pokemon 4th Version]


About the name Lemon Chiffon is a shade of yellow. My name is LemonySnippets, I like yellow and Pokemon Yellow is what I've sunk the most time into. Although that has no bearing on the story. Anyway enjoy the fourth version of a Strip Pokemon story. As a note this focuses a bit more on actual plot rather than just service, although I will write specials for canon characters.

Another note there will always be ENF but the beginning will be more plot focused in order to get things moving.

Expect updates over the weekends.

Other three Strip Pokemon stories. As a note smjimmie1348’s is hard to read due to its lack of grammar.

[ENF] Pokemon Gotta Strip em' All | By Feetlovingdog
Pokemon Battle Strip: The Ashley Chronicles | By Nathaniel Keam
Stephanie's pokemon strip war (johto) | By smjimmie1348

Episode 1 - Pilot

“Hello, my name is Professor Oak…”

Lilith looked around. Everything was black save for the figure of Professor Oak… Shaking her head Lilith decided that it must be a dream. While she was thinking Oak had been going on about Pokemon and what they were. Not that she needed to know what Pokemon was, it was a major part of her life after all.

Oak didn't seem to realise that Lilith was paying attention and just kept droning on and on. After a time his voice slowly morphed into a loud beeping. Almost as if he was an alarm… Then Lilith almost jumped as she realised it was an alarm. More specifically it was her alarm. Although she realised this as she fell out of bed.

Her head collided with the floor and she quietly thanked her past self for getting a carpet installed in her room. Climbing to her feet she looked at the time. Lilith swore as she saw the time. She was going to be late. Quickly throwing on her clothes she hurried out of her house, grabbing some toast on the way.

She arrived at Professor Oak’s out of breath. The other people her age were standing around waiting for her. Oak’s granddaughter, Lea smirked at her, “Lilith, late as always. You'd have been better off not coming here.”

The other person, a… Well, Lilith wasn't quite sure about their gender. Auru was a feminine name but Lilith couldn't remember a time when Auru’s gender was specified. Auru was either a loli or a shota, and they always dressed in an ambiguous blue vest over a black shirt and their pants were a gender-neutral style with a color pallet of dark brown to black. Auru occasionally wore a blue hat as well but for the most part they kept their long gray hair in a loose ponytail behind them.

Stepping forward Oak cleared his throat, “Now I'm sure you all want to get this over with as soon as possible. Since you already chose your Pokemon I took the liberty of preparing a package for you. It contains some pokeballs a few potions and most importantly a pokedex. It is my hope that you some day complete it.”

Finishing his speech he tossed everyone a package. As soon as Lea got her Pokemon she instantly turned to Lilith, “As your rival I challenge you to a duel!”

Lilith sighed, “Are you sure you want to do this right here? In public?”

Thinking for a moment Lea decided something, “Yeah, let's fight right here! I'll show you my strength and show everyone else your tits!”

Yawning, Lilith tossed out her pokeball, “Go, Vulpix… Let's do this or something… I need more sleep…”

Another pokeball arced through the air between the two. “Psyduck! Let's show this broad who's boss! With my type advantage I won't lose!”

The battle commenced with Lea commanding psyduck to attack with water spout.

“Hah! Your fire type is weak to water there's no way for you to win! Use Water Sport…” Lea trailed off as, instead of one-shoting vulpix the attack just splashed water on everything.

Lilith stared at her opponent, “Are you retarded? Type advantage isn't all that important at this level. Most type-moves of this caliber aren't offensive... I'm sorry but against a water-type I have to do this. Vulpix! Ember the girl with the red hair.”

Vulpix opened its mouth and fired a small amount of fire at Lea. She jumped back screaming about burning the opponent. Then she stopped. “Wait. It doesn't hurt…”

Lilith sighed internally, she didn't say it out loud but internally she was thankful that Lea had used Water Sport. It protected her body from the flame and allowed vulpix to attack with impunity. While it wouldn't hurt Lea the fire served another purpose…

A scream was heard from the other side of the field. It seemed Lea had noticed what was happening to her clothes. There was now a large hole burned in her shirt and her red bra was easy to see. Lilith decided to end the battle as fast as possible. In a few more embers Lea was down to her lacy red bra and panties.

“I'll give you one chance. Surrender or decide what you want to lose first.”

Lea flushed bright red before returning her psyduck, as she fled she yelled at Lilith, “I'll have my revenge!”

After she had gone Lilith turned to Oak, “Why did she run? You have spare clothes in your lab right?”

Oak nodded and looked down the path that his granddaughter had run, “Poor thing, she lives on the far side of town and her parents locked up the house… She was supposed to stay with my wife…”

“Well, what can you do… If she had just attacked I probably would have lost…” Lilith shrugged and walked away, “Well I'm off, see you Oak.”

“E-Excuse me…” Auru had followed Lilith. Turning she looked questioningly at them. Auru turned their head away in embarrassment, “C-Could I travel with you?”

Seeing no harm Lilith said they could. After all she was worried that if Auru was left on their own they might get ****d by someone. Plus a cute companion would be nice. Wait, was that cute as in “I’d tap that” cute or “Issofluffy! I jus wanna snuggle it!” Cute… And was it towards a boy or a girl? Lilith wasn't sure...

And so with Lilith facing a moral quandary our heros set forth on their journey. A journey of service, humiliation and legal lolis. Next time on Pokemon LemonChiffon, our heros catch Pokemon and get in a real battle!
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Old 12-14-2015, 10:17 PM
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Awesome I know its part 1 , but with the right time and effort this story can be really good .

And , thank you for the shout - out letting everyone know that I have a strip story , and I know it's bad because I was really bad at writing back then , but I have gotten better its just I don't know if everyone here wants me back if you do then I will post something in the near future .
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Default Extra - Info

Extra - Teach me Palki-tan!

This segment is an info segment comprising of extra information and is entirely skippable. None of the information is required to read the story.

While the first few Palki-tan segments might be a bit Info Dumpy the goal of this is to provide a bit of character trivia. If people don't like them I can always not post them.


This world bears many similarities to the one you're used to but there are also differences. My name is Palki-tan and I'll be your teacher.

This universe is a mixture of the old ones so characters from everything will show up.

So there are four main differences in the rules governing Pokemon they are as follows:

First, Pokemon is not a lethal sport. Trainers are targets but the damage is restricted to their clothing.

Second, A battle is won in only two ways. When both sides agree on a truce or more commonly when one side is nude.

Third, The way in which clothing loss is handled is based on the amount of Pokemon a trainer has. Loss is handled primarily through sportsmanship although there is a way to report trainers not following the rules.

Comma separates each Pokemon. [Pokemon 1], [Pokemon 2], etc

Top - Waist Up.
Bottom - Waist Down.

(O) - Outerwear such as a shirt or pants.
(U) - Undergarments such as a bra or panties.
(E) - Extra clothing such as a jacket.

One Pokemon - Everything
Two Pokemon - Top & Bottom(O,E), Top & Bottom(U)
Three Pokemon - Top(O,E), Bottom(O,E), Top & Bottom(U)
Four Pokemon - Top(O,E), Bottom(O,E), Top(U), Bottom(U)
Five Pokemon - Top & Bottom(E), Top(O), Bottom(O), Top(U), Bottom(U)
Six Pokemon - Top(E), Bottom(E), Top(O), Bottom(O), Top(U), Bottom(U)

Fourth, All trainers are over eighteen. There are younger children that interact with Pokemon but they are not official trainers and therefore not going to show up as service. Pedophile is a crime.

There you have it everyone. The main differences between canon and this S***. Anyway our main character… Lilith…

Appearance - Lilith is an eighteen year old girl. She has a slender body, relatively small breasts… Okay, look, she's like a younger version of Archerko. She typically wears a plain black shirt, plain brown pants and a red jacket. Her choice in shoes is brown loafers or boots depending on the terrain. Her most notable traits are her long silver hair and golden eyes.

Personality - Calm and collected most of the time but she gets flustered easily. Essentially, she's strong but with one misstep everything goes downhill.

Physical Combat - Physically fairly weak. Focus on Ukemi.

Pokemon Battle Style - Tricky, usually focuses on destroying the other person’s clothing rather than their Pokemon.
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Default Episode 2 - Starter Team

I don't care about the geography of Pokemon. Half the time the places are arbitrarily named and the other half they're randomly positioned.

There's a bit of ENF but the main focus is on character development for at least the next few chapters.

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Haiaria Forest, a small forest between Lilith’s hometown and Rustboro City. Not very heavily forested but there were a lot of low bushes. A place used by underage children as a training ground as most of the time the Pokemon inhabiting the forest would briefly partner with anyone carrying food.

The bushes rustled. Slowly the predator approached its prey. Slowly, slowly then…

“Sei!” Lilith swung her arm forward driving it into the Pokemon. Releasing the ball in her hand as she made impact. The ball absorbed the Pokemon and rolled across the ground. After a few seconds it stopped and blinked a few times before shrinking.

Walking over to the miniaturized ball Lilith reached down and picked it up. She tapped it and watched it grow before tossing it onto the ground in front of herself. The ball bounced a few times before opening. A gray and green rat popped out and looked around quickly before running away. It didn't get very far before it was caught by a pair of hands. Auru walked over to Lilith and silently placing the Pokemon on the ground.

“Come here, it's alright. I won't hurt you any more,” Lilith held out a bit of food. The Rattata hesitantly nibbled the food then ate the whole piece. Lilith scratched its head, “Good Rattata, I'm going to call you Underling.”

Just as she was about to return Underling Lilith heard a noise behind her. Turning she locked eyes with a woman dressed in hunting garb. The woman grinned menacingly at her.

“What have we here? A little trainer that can barely catch a Rattata? As per the rules you must battle me! I'll enjoy this!” The woman pulled out a pokeball and tossed it at Lilith, a green Pokemon jumped out. Scyther if Lilith remembered correctly.

Not wanting to waste time Lilith decided to test out Underling. Pulling out her Pokedex she scanned its move list. Tail Whip, Roar, Quick Attack, Agility… Lilith paused, Agility wasn't an exceptionally rare move but for the Pokemon in this area it shouldn't be known. Ignoring the abnormality Lilith started the battle, telling Underling to use Agility.

Her opponent looked off put at first at the unorthodox move but quickly ordered her Scyther, its name was Jacques apparently, to attack. Jacques jumped forward and Cut at Underling but the rat was too fast. Jacques was fast but every move flowed, normally the flow would have been good as it would have kept up constant pressure, but for a Pokemon as fast as Underling it was was like a slow dance.

But Agility lasted only so long and when it did run out Underling was dead. Lilith planned for that so when Underling finally slowed she immediately recalled it. However her opponent hadn't planned on attacking Underling at all. In the second that Underling slowed, even before Lilith had returned it, her opponent ordered Jacques to use False Swipe on Lilith.

The attack made contact but thanks to her skill at martial arts Lilith was able to block the attack, although it sent her flying. Her opponent glared at her then commanded Jacques to attack again. This time Lilith was prepared.

“Ember.”

One word finished the battle. Vulpix’s fire slammed into Jacques’ back. Jacques collapsed onto his knees. Stabbing his sword into the ground. He tried to pull himself up but failed and collapsed. The woman looked on in shock. Her Pokemon had… Lost…

“So lady, summon your second Pokemon. Unless you don't have one, in that case show some skin,” Lilith smiled sweetly at the defeated woman.

Backing away the woman turned and was about to run when something slammed into her and knocked her down. It was Underling. Before the woman could recover Lilith had reached her. Squatting beside her Lilith took a closer look at her clothes. From what she could see the woman was wearing a dark green military jacket, dark green pants and brown boots.

Lilith reached down and pulled off the woman's jacket. She was wearing a plain black shirt. Lilith pulled that off as well. The woman squeaked in embarrassment and covered her chest as her beige sports bra was revealed. In the moment that she did Lilith tugged off her pants. The woman blushed even further, she enjoyed stripping others but she herself hated losing even her jacket.

When Lilith started pulling her bra off she realised the gravity of her situation. This upstart trainer was going to leave her naked out here. She would have to make her way home nude…

“No…” The woman said one word just as Lilith had almost pulled her bra over her nipples.

Lilith stopped and looked at the woman, “What? Can't deal with the consequences of your actions? Alright then, I'll make you a deal. Lend me your Scyther and I'll let you keep your jacket and panties.”

Pulling out a pokeball the woman tossed it at Lilith, “Here. Take it! Just let me go.”

Frowning Lilith handed the pokeball back to the woman. Pulling out her pokedex she glanced down at it then turned to the woman, “Let's do this officially. I've sent you a trade request. Accept it.”

Reluctantly the woman accepted the request. Smiling, Lilith pulled off the woman's bra. She screamed in surprise as her average breasts spilled out. Her pert nipples, soft flesh, pink areola, all of it was visible. Lilith tossed the woman her jacket. She pulled it, painfully aware of the coarse material on her breasts. She turned to leave but was interrupted by Lilith who grabbed her shoulder and pointed at her legs.

Blushing, the woman pulled off her pants. While the jacket covered most of her the bottoms of her panties were slightly visible. Blushing furiously the woman ran off into the forest a noticeable wobble in her unsupported chest. Lilith picked up Jacques’ pokeball and returned him.

“Are you sure you should have done that?” Auru questioned her.

“I have every intention of returning it it's just that a Pokemon with false swipe is incredibly useful this early on. Once I catch a few more Pokemon I'll trade it back.”

Nodding, Auru faded into the background as they usually did when not interacting with the world. Lilith wasn't sure why but Auru had very little presence and even she didn't notice them half the time.

Looking up at the darkening sky Lilith decided that they should set up camp. In no time at all they had set up their tents. As Lilith dozed off for the night she heard thunder in the distance. At some point in the night she was awoken by Auru.

“Lilith… C-Can I sleep with you? T-The lightning… I...”

Lilith clicked on her lantern. Auru was drenched in water and standing in the doorway of her tent. Lilith didn't see any problem with it. She trusted Auru. But…

“You can but I'd rather you not get my tent wet…”

Auru nodded, “Alright… Could you please turn off the light?”

Clicking off the light Lilith watched as the shadowy form of Auru removed her soaking pajamas, Illuminated by the flashing lightning. Pulling open her sleeping bag Lilith was thankful that her mom had bought her a large one and that Auru was small.

As Auru snuggled up against Lilith the question of Auru’s gender was finally answered. Lilith wrapped her arms around the younger girl. Her last thoughts were, “We need to buy her some bras,” and “Why does she have scars?”

And so our heros embrace Morpheus. Having fought an actual battle and after gaining new Pokemon they fall asleep in each other's arms. The Auru question is answered but more just spring up. Next time on Pokemon Lemon Chiffon, who is Auru really? Why does this girl dress so ambiguously and what's with her scarring? Find out in the next episode of Pokemon Lemon Chiffon!

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Again, sorry that there isn't too much ENF the groundwork has to be laid after all. Laid, you know like with a girl? It's funny because s*x. I'll be here all night folks!
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This is great so far. I like the changes you've made to the Canon to make the setting work better for an enf story, and you're not a bad writer, which definitely helps.

And on a personal note, I like that Lilith is small and petite. Small, petite girls are the best, especially if they're fit, and they don't show up often enough in these types of stories, so good show.
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Default Episode 3 - 4

Important - Character Change

So, I've altered Auru’s appearance because… Reasons.
Stands at almost five foot. A inches or so shorter than Lilith.
26A cup breasts.
Shoulder length dark blue hair.
Clothing remains the same, blue vest over black shirt, gray pants. Optional blue hat.

Due to there being a need to lighten up the story the scars have been removed.

Episode 3 - Memories of the Past

When Lilith had woken up she had waited in the sleeping bed. Not wanting to disturb Auru. When Auru finally woke up she had looked around and when she realised where she was she had asked Lilith if she wanted an explanation. Lilith had told her it her choice, if Auru didn't want to talk about it she wouldn't.

Auru had told her that it was fine. She went on to explain that her parents had been… Less than incredible. In the end there had been a fight and they had gotten a divorce. She had ended up in the care of her aunt and uncle. But the memories were still a bit fresh even though it happened years ago.

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“Aura...” Lilith hugged the smaller girl to her chest.

Auru fidgeted nervously, “I-It doesn't matter Lilith. I'm fine now. Thanks to my aunt and uncle. C-Can we just not dwell on it? Please?”

There was a time when you pressure friends and family to do things for their own good. Lilith decided this wasn't the time. Instead she turned the conversation in a different direction. Lightly brushing her hand around on Auru's small breast Lilith stated something.

“Auru, you need to buy some bras.”

Auru flinched, “I haven't needed any before…”

It was true. Even though she was a girl she hadn't needed anything for her chest. Not that she had cared much, she knew she was flat. Breast size was unimportant. If that was all someone cared about she didn't care about them.

But Lilith was insistent, “Auru. This is not debatable. You will come shopping with me. As soon as we reach Rustboro City.”

“A-Alright,” Auru nodded in resignation and went back to her own tent to get dressed.

Lilith both smiled and grimaced as she saw the panties the other girl was wearing. Animal print was cute but on an eighteen year old it was a bit…

Due to issues this episode has been cut. But don't worry our heros still have some shopping to do. In the next episode of Pokemon Lemon Chiffon.

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I had originally planned on uploading this earlier but, things happen. This episode was also longer but things happened and much of it was removed. Don't worry about the short episode, the next one is almost complete.

Episode 4 - Shopping

Rustboro City, a large metropolis with plenty of stores and there a gym leader as well. But our heroes were focused on the stores… Mostly.

“Come on Auru. You said you would.”

Auru swallowed, “I think I changed my mind…”

Any complaints Auru might have had were silenced as Lilith dragged her into the store. Once inside Auru looked around. More types of clothing that Auru had ever thought imaginable.

Lilith grinned at her, “First time in a store this big?”

“Yep… When I lived with my Aunt and Uncle most of the time everything was ordered off of Amaz*n.”

“Same here, although we traveled a bit. Anyway, first things first… You need some bras and new panties…” And with that Lilith dragged Auru away to the changing rooms.

Conveniently the part of the store with changing rooms had the underwear section right outside of the changing rooms. Actually that was probably intentional design.

Lilith pushed Auru inside one of the, actually quite large changing rooms, and handed a few bras in for her to try. After a minute Auru stuck her head out and motioned Lilith over. Lilith walked over when she reached the door Auru pulled her inside. The first thing Lilith noticed was a topless Auru clutching her shirt to her chest.

Auru was the first to speak, holding up one of the bras Lilith had given her, “C-Could you help me with this?”

Talking the bra from Auru and moving behind her Lilith pulled it over her chest. As expected it didn't fit. Lilith sighed, she had wanted to see if Auru could wear a normal bra but given her breast size they would probably need to go with a sports bra. Well, she had grabbed one that should fit and had a nice color scheme.

She handed Auru the sports bra that she had picked out and turned around to give her friend a bit of privacy.

When she turned back around Auru had on the bra. It was black with blue highlights. Matching Auru's color scheme quite well. And it seemed to fit. Well, that was bras out of the way… Now then next would be…

“Panties,” Lilith voiced her thoughts.

Auru backed up slowly, “I'd rather not…”

Wordlessly, Lilith held out a pair of panties. An intent stare levelled at the other girl. Auru's resolve started to break. Lilith kept looking the girl in the eyes…

“A-Alright! You win… Just… Look away!” Auru surrendered to Lilith.

Again, Lilith turned away. The slight rustling as Auru removed her pants and panties. When she was done changing she tapped Lilith. Turning around Lilith saw a slightly red faced Auru with just her bra and the panties she had been given.

Auru fidgeted and placed one hand over the panties while the other one was held in front of her stomach.

“Uhm, Lilith… Aren't these a bit too… Revealing?” What Auru said was probably true. The type of undergarment that Auru was wearing. A lacy and skimpy black thong with ties on the sides.

“Probably, but I wanted to see that style on you. What do you want?” Lilith asked, while pulling out a tissue in case her nose started bleeding.

In response Auru picked up a pair of plain white boyshorts. Lilith instantly shook her head.

“You need something a bit sexier. To make up for the bra… Here,” Lilith tossed Auru a pair of cotton bikini panties. While not quite what Lilith had wanted but as good as she expected.

After she had put them on Auru was about to ask Lilith if they looked alright. But Lilith wasn't there. Then the door was pushed open and Lilith entered, a bundle of clothes in her arms. She shut the door before turning around and setting the clothes down. Auru flushed when she realized what Lilith had done.

“Lilith! What if someone had come in?” Auru flushed, wondering what she would have done if someone had caught her with her pants down, literally.

Lilith at least had the decency to look sheepish, “Sorry, sorry. At least I wasn't gone too long. Oh, and those panties look cute on you.”

Auru stuttered, unable to say anything. Why was she like this, just from being told something looked cute on her?

She decided to ask something, “L-Lilith… Am I cute?”

“Of course,” Lilith said as she unhooked her white lace bra… Wait, what?

Auru covered her flushed face, “Lilith! W-What are you doing?”

Lilith placed her bra to the side and pulled off her pants as well, her matching white lace panties coming into view, “I need clothes as well you know.”

“Yes, but…” Auru trailed off as Lilith wrapped her hands around the only article of clothing she had left.

Lilith pulled off her panties and stood up. Auru blushed as everything from Lilith’s breasts to her hairless vagina. Lilith's breasts were fairly small but they were perky and…

Turning around Auru blushed heavily. What was she thinking? Lilith was a friend, nothing more…

The voice of her “friend” interrupted her thoughts, “So how does this look?”

Turning around Auru saw Lilith with a white lace softcup bra, not that Auru knew the name. Auru nodded, it looked very nice on her, however her attention was drawn a bit more to Lilith's legs. More specifically the area between said legs. Lilith did have a bra on but she still didn't have any panties. Lilith grabbed a pair of white lace bikini panties and very slowly slid them on. The slow climb of lace up her creamy leg...

“Ahh, it looks like we'll have to buy those,” Auru blinked as Lilith pointed at the panties she was wearing. Why would she…

Auru blushed deeply as she realized what had happened. Even though it was barely noticeable there was a small wet spot on the panties. Auru’s lip quivered. How would Lilith react? Would she be…

“Don't worry, it's my fault for teasing you like that. Anyway, let's get you cleaned up. We can always buy clothes some other time. It's not like we have much room for them anyway.”

And so after dropping off the clothes they weren't buying Lilith and Auru walked to the register and were about to pay when they heard a familiar voice…

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What will happen to our heros? Who is this mysterious voice? And are our heros straight or just goofing off? Find out answers to the first two in the next episode of Pokemon Lemon Chiffon.

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Wrapped two episodes together. Much filler. More action in the next episode.
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Rustboro City's department store, a large place with everything anyone could want, there even space for Pokemon battle on the roof.

“Lilith! I challenge you to a battle!”

Behind our heroes was a redheaded girl with a tomboyish vibe. In her hand was a pokeball. It was expected to find her here after all this was the closest gym. But… Lilith wasn't really prepared, her combat team was resting back at the Pokemon Center. Still she didn't want to run. Loath as she was to admit it Lea never shied from a fight, although she did tend to surrender when it became obvious she couldn't win.

“Alright then, let's battle,” Lilith pulled out a pokeball.

The battle was briefly interrupted when the they were asked to relocate. After moving to the roof, and drawing a crowd, they begun.

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!”

Both pokeballs arched through the air Lea’s first Pokemon was a fairly strong looking Pidgey whereas Lilith had summoned a Beedrill. Both flying Pokemon flew back and watched each other. Pidgey was technically weaker but Beedrill had been a rushed Pokemon, that is to say Lilith had only used it to get it to its evolved state. If Pidgey was actually one of Lea's main Pokemon the fight was actually in her favor, despite appearances.

Lilith decided to start it out carefully. Ordering Beedrill to stay at a range and attack with Twineedle. However, Pidgeotto just dodged and on Lea's command knocked Beedrill out with a Gust.

This was the first time that Lilith had lost to Lea. It actually felt almost good to have an actual fight. Almost. Lilith kept a confidant exterior as she pulled off her white jacket, shoes and socks and tossed them on the ground but inside she was panicking. While it had never happened before what if she lost? She had been fine exposing herself in front of Auru and she wouldn't mind too much if it was just Lea, that was a lie, she would be embarrassed beyond belief but at least she would have been in good company.

Pulling out her next Pokemon Lilith tossed it out. It was an oddly colored Rattata. Lea scoffed at it, “What? A Rattata against a bird? Lilith have you lost your mind?”

Lilith's only response was to have Underling use agility and rush Lea. She did as well. Intending on stripping Lea and forcing an end to the battle. However, while her strategy might have worked against another opponent Lea was an old friend, she knew how Lilith fought. So, when Lilith was closing on Lea she was stopped by a sandstorm whirling into existence around her.

Sandstorm wasn't a move that Pidgeotto could use but whipping up sand was possible. Lilith however didn't stop and closed on Lea. In close quarters Lea was stronger but Lilith was faster. Grabbing onto Lea's shirt she was able to tear it off before the other girl could react. Lea made a cute noise and blushed as her lacy red bra was revealed. Although it was different from the previous time that she had lost her shirt.

Without thinking Lea caught Lilith and tossed her away, unfortunately for Lea, Lilith had grabbed her bra first and as she pushed Lilith away her bra went with the smaller girl. As she felt her bra come off Lea screamed and covered her chest. Lilith rolled a few times before recovering and rolling into a standing position. It was then that Lea reacted.

“Thief!”

Pidgeotto shot past Lilith and at first nothing happened then Lilith eeped and covered her chest and crotch. Even though they still had clothes over them something felt wrong. Looking up Lilith saw Pidgeotto with her bra and panties in its claws. Her distraction cost her and Lea took the time to take out Underling.

Time seemed to stop for Lilith. She had to remove her shirt and her bra was gone. She was going to have to show her breasts. Lilith swallowed and grabbed her shirt slowly and with a burning face she pulled it off.

Lilith's breasts were small but only in comparison to the larger sizes. On a smaller girl like her 32B was a fine size. The fact that she looked good didn't make her position any less embarrassing. Blushing red and covering her breasts Lilith looked at Lea.

“I surrender…” It was just one loss to an old friend, it would be more of a loss to show her vagina in public.

But Lea wasn't thinking clearly, probably because of her actually having the upper hand for once. Unfortunately she did something she probably shouldn't and in her rashness she ordered Pidgeotto to use Gust.

Now, Lilith didn't always wear a skirt but it was a shopping trip so she had decided to. Gust blew up her skirt, revealing everything. Almost. Fortunately for Lilith, Gust had a slight charge up time and as soon as Lilith heard Lea give the command she removed her hands from her breasts and covered her vagina. Gust tore her skirt away from her body. Leaving her completely naked. Lilith was able to keep anyone from seeing her vagina directly but it was obvious to anyone watching that she shaved.

Lilith was a bit angry at this point and reacted a bit rashly.

“Jacques! False Swipe everything!”

A pokeball that had gone unnoticed until now flashed open and Lea realized the scope of her error. Screaming in embarrassment as what remained of her clothes was cut from her body. However, she wasn't able to cover herself like Lilith for, seconds before she lost her clothes, and the battle, Lilith returned Jacques and summoned a Bellsprout, ordering it to use Stun Spore on Lea. Leaving Lea’s red bush completely visible to everyone. Lea felt her cheeks turn red in embarrassment and humiliation. And it would have been worse if not for Auru.

Auru ran over to Lea wrapped a towel around her. Covering the essentials. Then Auru walked over to Lea and handed her a robe. Before Lilith could react Auru grabbed both girls and dragged them to the changing rooms. Opening one and pushing the girls inside she locked the door. Before turning around.

“Both of you are at fault you know,” forceful Auru was actually quite scary and both Lea and Lilith cowered.

Lilith started to speak but was shut down, “Yes, Lea started it but you overreacted, especially with the Stun Spore.”

“And you too Lea, Lilith surrendered, attacking like that is cruel.”

Shaking her head and stretching to shake out the aftereffects of paralysis Lea looked at Auru, “I just wonder, why do you care?”

Auru slumped onto her knees, “I don't have many friends and most of the time I'm not even noticeable. I-I don't want you two to drift apart because of something like this…” There were tears forming at the sides of Auru’s eyes.

It was like looking a small depressed animal. Lilith knelt and pulled Auru into a hug, “Don't worry, a little thing like losing a battle wouldn't drive us apart. Right?” Lilith stared pointedly at Lea.

Lea nodded, Auru was her friend as well, while she hadn't been necessarily close Auru it wasn't like she wanted to hurt the… Lea paused and looked at the scene in front of her.

With their height difference and positioning it looked like Lilith was holding Auru to her, nude, chest, the robe having fallen off. Lea hadn't been as close to Auru so she had a question.

“Lilith… Is Auru a guy or a girl?”

Standing up and giving Lea a completely unobstructed view of her perky round b-cup breasts, smooth shaven pussy and small tight ass, Lilith then grabbed Auru's arms and pulled her to her feet and then, in a flash, she tugged off her pants and panties.

Yelping in embarrassment Auru tried to cover her hairless pussy, but with Lilith holding her arms she couldn't and instead just squirmed as Lilith leaned over and whispered in her ear.

“You saw all of Lea, isn't it fair if she sees at least this?”

However, instead of pulling back Lilith blew lightly in Auru's ear and then nibbled her earlobe. Auru's lip trembled and she crossed her legs, a small moan escaping her lips.

Blushing furiously Lea turned and quickly pulled on a shirt and skirt, her normal shorts having been destroyed. She quickly apologised to Lilith and left before Lilith was able to apologise in return. As she left Lilith made a passing shot at her about mastrabation, Lea didn't deny it but that wasn't necessarily because it was true, she could have just not heard Lilith. Although her blush had deepened as Lilith made the joke.

Lilith stuck her head out after her, “Have fun, don't ruin the sheets.”

She felt someone pulling her arm. It was Auru, “Lilith, not that you're not very pretty but you know everyone can see your breasts…”

Looking around the store Lilith noticed everyone staring at her, more specifically at her small chest. She squeaked and her cheeks turned deep red. Quickly retreating into the changing room. Something was there to alleviate her embarrassment. The underwear Lea had chosen. That meant… She was walking back to her room in just a shirt and skirt.

But the amusement of Lea's mistake was quickly lost as Auru tossed Lilith a shirt and skirt, no underwear. Auru then led her out of the changing room and back to their room. Lilith received a lot of stares but fortunately their room was close.

When they got back the first thing Auru did was pull off her pants and black and blue panties she removed her vest and shirt, leaving nothing but her black and blue sports bra covering her body.

Lilith looked at the girl and tapped her, getting her attention. Auru blushed, she had been a bit caught up in the moment. Auru explained to Lilith that she needed a release because it had been about a week so… Lilith acknowledged her need and left to take a shower and give the other girl some privacy. While she was in the shower she tried to ignore her friends noises, especially when she heard her name.

It did however give her something to think about in the future… Did she want to date Auru? Yes. Would she want to marry Auru? Yes… Lilith sighed and glanced down at herself, she was actually fairly aroused herself. Reaching down…

Cut! That's enough of our heros journey for now, they need time for themselves after all. Will we get a detailed description of our heros mastrabation processes? Will they ever fight the gym leader? Will they have a sexual, platonic or actually emotionally close and loving relationship? Find out in the next episode of Pokemon Yellow Chiffon!

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I feel like the girls are moving too fast… Anyway, it's erotica, why do I care about plot again?

Also, yes Lilith caught Pokemon offscreen.

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“So, Lilith, how are you going to beat the gym? You're at a distinct type disadvantage.”

Our heros and Lea were sitting at a small restaurant eating breakfast. Since they were in Rustboro City it made sense to challenge the gym leader. The problem was that Lilith had no Pokemon that were all that effective. With most of her Pokemon having an attack or defence weakness to rock-types.

Shrugging, Lilith casually flicked a coin, “I guess I'll just attack directly. I have more speed than rock-types.”

“And if that doesn't work?” Auru grabbed the coin from the air.

A slight blush formed on Lilith's face. While she was fine with her body it was still embarrassing to undress in public.

Grinning wryly at her friends Lilith sheepishly rubbed her head, “If it doesn't work I'll make sure to wear underwear I look good in…”

The other girls sighed, out of the three of them Lilith cared the least about stripping, at least until her panties were in danger. Lea hated being stripped but was used to it. Auru… Auru had a full team with though three of the Pokemon being noncombat tokens simply to avoid losing anything important for as long as possible.

Before they could criticize Lilith any more she changed the topic, “So, how do you two plan on winning?”

“I don't have anything strong or weak to ground so I'll just try my best.”

“Secret,” Lilith had noticed that as they got closer Auru stuttered less and used shorter sentences.

Lea stood up suddenly, “Anyway, we aren't getting anywhere talking. Let's do this!”

The other girls pulled Lea back into her seat, “We're waiting for the bill remember?”

Shortly the bill was brought out, the waitress flushed as she handed the bill over, “Um, I should mention, we have a special offer right now…” The waitress took a deep breath, “If you defeat a waitress in a duel then you can eat for free…”

“Well, let's go!”

The waitress bowed and led them outside. Once outside the waitress turned and pulled out a pokeball, “One Pokemon each. Loss restricted to outer garments. Accept?”

Without hesitation Lea tossed out a pokeball, “Accept! Einz! Go!”

The waitress, a young woman in her early twenties fumbled with her pokeball before tossing it, “Fluffy… Go!”

Everyone stopped and stared at “Fluffy” the Pokemon in question being a Growlith. Everyone then looked at Einz, Lea's Psyduck. Then at the waitress, she fidgeted. Deciding to give the waitress another chance Lea spoke to her.

“Umm, wanna use something else?”

The waitress shook her head, “This is my first Pokemon! With the power of friendship I won't lose…?”

While she was talking Einz had Water Gunned Fluffy. Staring in shock the girl knelt in front of her unconscious Pokemon as if another outcome was expected.

“Fluffy… How could we lose? Roxanne said that the most important thing in training was friendship,” then the waitress looked closer at her Pokemon, “Urk… I lost that means…”

Slowly the waitress stood and started to pull off her shirt. As the bottom of her braless breasts came into view Auru pouted and covered Lilith's eyes. Lea kept watching as the luscious mounds with large pink cherries atop them came into view. The waitress blushed harder and pulled off her skirt. The girl wasn't wearing any panties either. Her thick red bush sat mostly untrimmed between her legs. She had a firm butt and wide childbearing hips.

“Uhh, you can also keep one article of clothing if you want… Please don't…”

Looking the hapless waitress up and down Lea shook her head to clear it, reminding herself that she, probably, liked men, “So, if I don't take a piece of your clothes what do I get?”

“N-Nothing but I have to work like this so… I begging you…”

It was a tough call but in the end Lea just walked away, it didn't benefit her but there was no reason to make that girl walk around with her breasts or butt showing. After the girls left, the waitress pulled out her phone, “They seem nice enough. To nice for their own good. The plan should work… What? Punishment? Nude? But… Work… I understand,” the girl shut her phone and slowly walked back to the restaurant. Giving a long wistful look at the clothes that had prevented her humiliation.

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Our heros started their journey to the gym. The gym was a large rocky building. Upon entering the building they were greeted by an old man.

“The Rustboro Gym is a maze. If you go the correct way then you can reach the gym leader without fighting. I should also mention the gym leader isn't in right now.”

Although most gym leaders stayed in their gyms it was acknowledged that gym leaders were people as well and had the freedom to leave. It was a bit of an inconvenience but they could appoint proxies so it wasn't that much of a problem. Since the proxies were usually weaker it was actually a benefit for trainers.

The girls entered the maze. Apparently they chose the correct paths because no one challenged them. When they reached the end they were greeted by a pair of quarreling girls.

They seemed to be in dispute about who should handle battles. One girl, large breasts, hourglass figure, was arguing that she was the sexier one and that therefore she should represent the gym. The other girl, average in every way, short brown hair, was countering that she was the best at battling so she should fight.

It seemed almost as if it was going to devolve into a catfight but Lilith stepped in. Watching the girls fight was funny but it was a waste of time. Her suggestion was something rarer in this region as it required not insignificant trust in another person.

“What about a double battle?” The girls turned to look at the smaller girl. She looked like newbie trainer. Her friends did as well, the redhead being the only one that looked even remotely like a challenge.

Looking at one another the girls nodded. This would be easy. Humiliate two newbie trainers hopefully scare off the other one. If not she didn't look all that strong.

The shapely girl stepped forward, “Sure, a double battle is fine. You do realise what that means?”

Stuttering Auru made her return, it seemed the girl wasn't as confident in front of other people as she was with her friends, “I-In a double battle… A-Anything that one person l-loses their partner loses as well…”

“Do you still want to accept knowing this?” Lilith and Auru both nodded.

Grinning the shapely girl looked at the average girl and nodded towards Auru, the weaker looking of the two, while the white haired girl looked like she could easily be knocked over the flat chested boy-girl barely had any presence, probably because she was so weak.

The countdown started. On zero the girls all threw forth their pokeballs. Four flashes of light and four Pokemon entered the field. Lilith's borrowed Scyther, Jacquese, a Graveler from the shapely girl, an Onix from the plain girl and a Pikachu named Anduin from Auru.

Both the gym proxies ordered their Pokemon to attack the smaller girl. But just as their Pokemon closed on Auru, intent on winning the battle in one move, Anduin jumped in front of its master and used flash.

Blinding light filled the gym but the voice of the shapely girl cut through the blindness, “You do realise that trick won't work on rock-type Pokemon, right?”

Auru's small squeak was the only response. As everyone's vision cleared Auru was being held from behind by the Graveler. The Onix was tugging her shirt upwards, luckily for Auru it hadn't removed her vest and was struggling to reveal even her bra.

The shapely girl smiled mockingly at Auru, “Why are you struggling so much? Do you want to prevent your nonexistent titties for being seen that much? Well to bad! You're going to be naked…?”

The reason for the girl’s change in tone was simple. Lilith was standing behind her. The shapely girl’s lacy black lingerie set in her hands. The shapely girl stood still for a few seconds before screaming and covering her big, bouncy, slightly tanned breasts, large areola and pussy with a small triangle of platinum blonde hair.

The plain girl blushed as she realised what she had to do. Slowly and with a glowing red face she pulled off her top underneath was a relatively conservative white bra with a bit of lace. When she dropped her pants a matching pair of panties was revealed. Standing there in nothing but her underwear the girl fidgeted before quickly undoing her bra and pulling down her panties. She turned and ran before the camera could get a good view of her.

Camera… Oh yes, Lilith had forgotten about that. All gym battles were recorded and streamed live. Most of the time the camera was automated but sometimes there was a news crew.

Anyway, the plain girl had almost made it out when she tripped and fell forward rolling onto her back. She lay there clutching her head for a few seconds before she realised that her small pale breasts were on display but most embarrassingly was that her legs were splayed apart giving the camera a great view of her intimate parts. Blushing furiously the girl stood up and ran out the door.

The shapely girl didn't take her loss that well and with flushed cheeks she turned and yelled at Lilith before turning and ordering Graveler to give the camera a show. Graveler seemed reluctant but started to tug Auru's clothes of. Tears welled up in the other girl’s eyes and she started crying.

“What the actual fuck is going on here?!?” A new voice echoed through the gym.

Graveler dropped Auru and hastily curled up into a ball and rolled away into a corner of the gym. Blending into the terrain. Lea ran over to the crying girl and hugged her comfortingly. Meanwhile, Lilith and the owner of the voice were confronting the shapely girl, her name was apparently Gwen.

After a lot of yelling it was revealed that the newcomer was the actual gym leader, Roxanne. Apparently, she wasn't all that happy with her replacement gym leader. Attacking a trainer after the battle was in fact a crime, so the police were brought in.

They weren't all that sympathetic to Gwen’s plight and she was taken outside and handcuffed to the police car, still nude. The police took their sweet time concluding their investigation.

After the police had come and taken the shapely girl away Roxanne walked over to Auru and knelt in front of the girl.

“I'm sorry for what my student tried to do to you. I should have known better…”

Auru sniffled and wiped her eyes, “I-It's fine… N-No one c-can see the future…”

After the apologies had been worked out Roxanne gave Lilith and Auru their badges. She asked Lea if she would like to battle now or wait a bit. Lea said now was as good as ever.

Both trainers tossed out their Pokemon of choice. Roxanne’s first Pokemon was a simple Nosepass whereas Lea had summoned her Pidgey, Redtail.

Flying-type Pokemon were technically at a disadvantage against Rock-types but it was the first battle and Lea had wanted to use a quick Pokemon to scout Roxanne's capabilities.

Lea decided to use her Pokemon’s superior speed and force the slow moving Rock-type into an unwinnable battle. At first it seemed to work, with Redtail playing hit-and-run and slowly whittling down Nosepass’s health.

Unable to do anything Roxanne just watched helplessly as her Pokemon was battered into submission one hit point at a time. However Roxanne seemed too calm for someone in her situation. Unfortunately for her modesty Lea didn't notice it until too late.

Redtail swooped in close and in that moment Roxanne acted. No words just a signal and electricity flooded through the gym, most of it into Redtail. With weaknesses as they were Redtail instantly dropped. Spiralling into the ground, unconscious.

Smirking at Lea, Roxanne motioned her opponent, “Good move, while flying is weak to ground you took advantage of the mobility difference, however always remember that the most glaring weakness is usually guarded against.

Lea only said two words in response, “Brick Break.”

Before Roxanne could even react her Nosepass fell to the fighting type move. A victorious Pikachu standing in front of its downed foe.

Even though it was a surprise a gym leader is supposed to be good at adapting and while her Pokemon weren't the strongest Roxanne made up for it with tactics. Since Lea seemed to have made this into a battle of speed she would have to respond in kind.

But first, “Lea, you lost a Pokemon. As did I. How many Pokemon do you have?”

“How many do you have? I'm carrying six but I want to fight evenly.”

Roxanne shrugged, “Your loss if you want to handicap yourself on purpose. Anyway, I have three. Also, remember you lost a Pokemon, out of three since you want to handicap yourself. So that means...”

Before Roxanne could finish Lea cut her off, “Yeah I know, don't say it out loud. It's a bit…”

Lea blushed slightly but quickly shook it off. She couldn't be embarrassed at just talking about stripping… After all... She pulled off her top, her red lace bra once more visible. She had to strip herself.

Across from her Roxanne had also stripped, for a girl her size her clothes hid very sizeable breasts. Although the breasts themselves were hidden by a childish bra with a flowery pattern. Roxanne blushed a little when she noticed Lea's gaze but without hesitation she brought out her next Pokemon.

Onix towered above the Pikachu. The unfortunate electric mouse dodged its best but since it was unable to hit Onix with Brick Break due to its range limitations it lost in the end.

Lea was starting to wonder if this had been a bad choice, to fight with equal numbers of Pokemon. Well, no turning back now. One more loss and she was nude. Not that it wasn't bad enough to stand there in only a lace bra and matching thong.

But even though she was at a disadvantage she still had a plan. Her last Pokemon…

“Einz! Water Gun!”

Her Pokemon launched out of its pokeball water streaming into the Onix. Both rock and ground fell to water and Onix collapsed. Leaving Roxanne to strip down to her animal print underwear.

Without hesitation Roxanne summoned her final Pokemon Cradily. Unfortunately for Lea Cradily was resistant to and strong against water. And thus the final battle began with Einz and Lea quickly forced on the defensive. Einz was quickly loosing steam and it looked like Cradily was going to win when Lea smiled. In a flash Roxanne ordered her Pokemon back but it was to late psychic power slammed into Cradily and it colapsed, unconscious.

The gym leader flushed as her last Pokemon fell. She returned her Pokemon and pointed to the table.

“The badge is there… Could you let me keep my underwear? Please?”

The poor gym leader looked so sad as she fiddled with the string of her B cup bra. Lea once again decided to be merciful to her opponent. A mistake. As soon as Lea had turned her back she heard a cry and in a flash her bra was torn off her, her panties were pulled down as well but she caught them at the last second.

It was almost comical, a small half naked girl pulling on the panties of a larger even more undressed girl. Except that Roxanne had tears in her eyes and she was apologising profusely, as if she couldn't control her body. She probably couldn't given the fact that there was a weird possessiony darkness hanging over her. Lea’s face was red, both from the embarrassment of her breasts and butt being revealed on camera and the exertion of keeping the most important part of her modesty.

As the struggle continued Lea could feel her panties start to give way. Quickly she decided to do something drastic. Dropping to the ground she rolled backwards, wrenching her clothes out of her opponents hands, ignoring the pain as her panties dug into her butt. As she rolled behind Roxanne she grabbed the girls bra and panties, the bra easily snapped, barring the gym leaders pert breasts to the world, but the girl fought for her panties. The previous scene was now reversed, however, Lea was much stronger than Roxanne and in seconds the girls panties were on the ground. Her pink hairless pussy revealed to the uncaring eye of the camera.

As her last article of clothing was removed a shadowy spirit melted out of the girl and shot off into the sky. Lea wasn't taking any chances though and grabbed the smaller girl’s arms and held them behind her back. Roxanne’s head drooped momentarily but in a flash she opened her eyes and groggily looked around. She saw the camera first, then her bra, then she felt air against her pussy. Slowly she kept looking around then she saw her frilly pink panties on the ground.

It took a few seconds for the realisation of her situation to set in but as soon as it did she started flailing around. Begging whoever was holding her to release her. It was a little known fact but in all her time as a gym leader she had never lost her panties. The only time she had lost them as a trainer was against the psychic gym leader.

Lea leaned in and whispered in her ear. Roxanne blushed furiously but nodded nonetheless. Lea dropped the girl to the ground where she quickly curled up, covering her pussy and breasts.

Walking over to the table Lea grabbed a badge. Looking back at the gym leader she shrugged, “I'm sorry about that, no chances you know?”

Sitting up, hands still over her important parts, Roxanne nodded her head, “I understand…”

Before Lea could answer she was stopped by Lilith with a towel, Lilith covered her friend and, nodding thanks to Roxanne, walked out with Auru and Lea.

After they had left Roxanne looked up at the camera, “Well? The fight’s over… Now… Shut down!”

The camera blinked almost sheepishly and shut off. Roxanne stood up and quickly scurried off to her room. Secretly she had enjoyed how Lea had so quickly suppressed and dominated her and she had… “Things” she needed to do…

-

Our heroes left Rustboro City, the day was still young and there were plenty more gyms along the way. But many questions remained. What came over Roxanne? What Pokemon does Auru use? And why is there a sinister plot evolving behind the scenes? Find out down the line in Pokemon Lemon Chiffon!

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Giving Gwen a name is totally not foreshadowing. She will obviously never show up again.

I think I unconsciously added Lea to the party...

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Short - Roxanne’s Punishment

Roxanne walked in front of her class, looking around she blushed but began her lecture anyway, “The human body is a complex thing. For now we will be focusing on the female body. It's a bit embarrassing but as punishment for my actions during that fight even though I was possessed… I have to teach this. Also I'm supposed to get closer with my students after Gwen… So from now on I'll always be in the coed baths at bath time… Yes, I'll be naked… But that's not important now. The lesson is. So here we go…”

The class leaned forward. Roxanne blushed and reached behind her neck. After fiddling around for a few seconds she dropped her hands, with her hands her sun dress dropped, revealing her naked body in its full glory. Smooth silky white skin. Pert B cup breasts with small pink nipples atop like tasty ripe cherries. Her hairless pussy…

Blushing intensively Roxanne reached down, “The first thing we will cover is the female reproductive system…”
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Hey I have some really difficult time reading this , and I will tell you why so hopefully you can try your best to make it better these are just suggestions , but it's your story anyways here are my complaints/suggestions

1) too much ENF

I don't mind ENF in general , but sometimes it's not right all the time like say you had one scenario w/ the main character or a side character stripped naked in one chapter that's fine , but you have it in all chapters .

2) pokemon

Pokemon also known as pocket monsters are your friends so you can catch more and train them to be their very best , and obtain a special bond so they were not supposed to be clawing or biting or whatever clothing off the other trainer .

3) battle style

Battle style is ok , but you rush into the ENF too quickly if you want people to read your story then slow it down , and have the trainer try to take off the opponents clothing until they are in their underwear not only to take away most of the ENF as I said earlier , but it will also stay in touch w/ pokemon .

4) underwear

Underwear also known as undergarments are supposed to be hidden from others so when they are exposed they are humiliated , so what better way to more humiliate them is to wear embarassing underwear ( ex like you did animal print , but it was so rushed like I said earlier that it just turned me and probably everyone else from this story . )

But , like I said this is your story so these are my ideas and suggestions to try and help you plz don't be mad

PS : you never said anything to me about me continuingly writing a new series now that I have gotten better so if you want to see me write something else just say something .
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A response to issues with the story.

General audience - I feel that the more recent chapters suffered a drop in quality and will probably take some time to rewrite them. Update rate will suffer as a result.



smjimmie1348 - Yeah the issues you had were also things I noticed. I think the quality slid a bit. I'm actually probably going to rewrite Episodes 5 and 6. I kinda dedicated to a plot path I now regret. It accelerated the story too much. The update rate of this story will probably decrease but I'm going to take some time to slow down the whole story and rewrite parts I dislike.

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