[ENF] Paranormal ENFestigators

[Stripperella]

Do you believe in the paranormal? Have you ever experienced things going bump in the night? Think you've seen Bigfoot or things mysteriously flying off the shelves? Have you ever seen a flying saucer? If any of your answers are yes, it sounds like you need to call some paranormal investigators. These are the adventures of the E.N.F. Paranormal Investigators. They get their name from the first letters of each of the members' names, Edith, Nina, and Felicity. They are the best- well, actually, they're not the best. The three ladies are actually pretty incompetent. Every time they investigate, they end up losing their clothes and getting humiliated, but that doesn't keep them from trying. These are their encounters

First off, let's better get to know the investigators. Edith is the leader of the group. She's 22 years-old, has brown hair, blue eyes, has white skin, is 5'6, and has small boobs (which she is super self conscious about). Edith also always wear a pink cap that she loves.

Nina is in charge of deciding which cases to look into and where they should travel to to investigate. She's 21 years-old, has black hair, green eyes, tan skin, is 5'7, and has big boobs.

Finally, there's Felicity. Felicity is the tech expert of the group. She knows how to work all the fancy equipment they use like EMF detectors, heat vision and night vision cameras, EVP, recorders, and all kinds of other equipment. She is 19, years-old, has red hair, blue eyes, white skin, is 5'4, and has medium sized boobs. I'll begin with telling the story of the ghosts in the old Enfville Manor.

The E.N.F. Mobile pulled up to the old big house. Edith, Nina, and Felicity got out and started loading up their equipment. "Okay, we're running late so now we only have two hours till midnight." Edith said. "That's when people claim the action starts, right at midnight." I'll set up cameras in all the rooms and hallways along with some EMF detectors that will set off an alarm when they spike." Felicity said. "Wait, are you also going to set up cameras in the bathrooms? Because we're gonna be here till noon tomorrow and I don't want cameras recording me pee." Nina complained. "Yes, I have to put cameras in the bathroom. I can edit any peeing out Nina." Felicity laughed. "But you two could still see me from the monitors." Nina complained. "No one wants to watch you pee Nina." Edith chuckled. "Now come on, let's set up." The three ladies got ready for their 12 hour investigation. Felicity set up her equipment, Edith set up the monitors on a table, and Nina got the handheld cameras ready and put their food and energy with tons of caffeine in coolers. Edith looked at the clock and it was midnight. "Okay girls. Here we go. Get ready."

The investigation was on. Edith and Nina split up and were wandering the house with flashlights since the power no longer worked at Enfville Manor. Edith was upstairs and Nina was in the basement. Felicity was on the main floor watching the monitors. Edith got on her walkie talkie. "Hey Felicity, anything yet?" She asked. "Negative. This place is a ghost town, haha." Felicity laughed. "Very funny." Nina said sarcastically. "Hey Felicity, could you not watch the monitors for a few minutes? I kinda have to pee." "How is that possible? We've only been here an hour." Felicity said. "It's cause she's been chugging the energy drinks all night." Edith laughed. "I get tired fast. Just stop watching the monitors Felicity." Nina said. "Okay. I will. Just let me know when you're done." Felicity said. Of course, she was lying. Felicity secretly was a lesbian, but didn't want the others to know or else they might get uncomfortable since they spend so much time together and on occasion, shower together and sleep close to each other. Felicity watched closely as Nina pulled her jeans and panties down to pee. Her pussy was completely bare and her butt was perfect. Felicity was getting turned on, especially since no one knew she was watching Nina. Felicity was about to put her hand down her pants, when she heard a noise in the kitchen.

Felicity got up and went into the kitchen with her flashlight. She saw a broken plate on the floor. "Hey girls, I think we may got something in the kitchen. One of the plates just- Ah!!!" Felicity screamed. Suddenly all the dishes car flying at her. Felicity hid under the table. She started screaming for Edith and Nina on her walkie talkie, but it was knocked out of her hand. The table was then flipped over no longer providing cover for Felicity. Suddenly, the silverware drawer mysteriously opens and the knives started flying towards Felicity. Felicity screamed and the knife slashed at her tank top. Her tank top fell right off in shreds exposing her firm boobs since she wasn't wearing a bra. Felicity screamed and covered her boobs with her hands. She tried to run out of the kitchen, but a chair was flung at her and hit her. Felicity fell to the ground and the knives slashed the rest of her clothing leaving her lying unconscious on the floor without a stitch of clothing on. Her naked butt and trimmed pussy were out in the open. Felicity woke up and couldn't move. Her vision was blurry but when it became clear, she saw that she was lying naked on the table and her wrists and ankles were tied with table cloth. She tried to scream, but her mouth was gagged with a napkin. She saw the cameras hovering over her and zooming in on her intimate parts. Felicity could hear what sounded like voices whispering all around her. Suddenly, she felt a strange vibrating sensation on her pussy. Felicity started to writhe around. "Oh my God! These ghosts are using their power to play with my pussy!!!" Felicity thought. The vibrating got faster and harder. Felicity started breathing heavily and started to get wet. Was she actually enjoying it? Felicity started moaning loudly. After a few minutes of non stop vibrating, Felicity was brought to a screaming orgasm and it was all caught on tape thanks to her many cameras.

Meanwhile, Nina was in the bathroom peeing when she heard the commotion in the kitchen. "Oh shit Felicity!" She thought. She finished peeing and was about to stand up, when something pulled on her ankles and she fell on her back. Nina was them pulled by her ankles out of the bathroom and down the hall with her pussy and butt exposed. Her butt was getting sc****d on the floor and she screamed both out of fear and pain. Nina was pulled up the stairs into the attic, her butt getting smacked against each step. The attic door locked and Nina was trapped up there. Her pants, panties, and shoes were flung across the room and out the tiny window. Nina screamed and covered her pussy by wrapping her jacket around her waist. That didn't last long because the jacket was pulled off. Nina started crying and screaming. She tried to open the attic door, but it was locked. Suddenly, Nina was thrown across the room and pinned against the wall. Her shirt was ripped open and her bra was torn right off. Nina's big boobs were exposed. Nina screamed some more, but her bra was stuffed in her mouth muzzling her screams. Then, what seemed like invisible hands started squeezing and playing with Nina's boobs. The ghosts played with Nina's boobs for fifteen minutes before they got bored and let her go. Nina found a heavy truck and pushed it down the stairs and it broke the door down. Nina ran out of the attic naked and screaming.

Meanwhile, Edith was running down the hall trying to follow the screams of both Nina and Felicity. As she was running down the hall, Edith's hat was blown off. As she stopped to pick it up, her skirt was lifted up exposing her pink thong. Edith pushed her skirt down and tried to run while forcing her skirt down. Then her shirt was pulled up exposing her bra. Edith used one hand to keep her shirt down and the other to keep her skirt down. Then she got an idea. "The ghosts can't pull my clothes up if I don't have any." Edith though cleverly. She took off her shirt and shirt and was left just in her bra and thong. She started running again, but was grabbed by her thong and was given a major wedgie that lifted her into the air. Edith screamed in pain and then in embarrassment as her bra was ripped off and her tiny boobies were exposed. She covered them with her hands. She then felt her thong start to rip and it broke exposing her shaved pussy and butt. Edith fell to the ground on her stomach. She tried to get up, but was pinned down. Suddenly, something smacked her butt. Edith screamed. Then she started getting spammed really hard by a ghostly force. Edith screamed in pain again. After what felt like a hundred spanks, Edith was pushed and slid across the floor down the hallway and fell down the stairs. She got up and ran into the kitchen where she found Felicity. She grabbed a knife and cut her loose. Nina came running in as well. "Let's get the hell out of here!" Edith screamed. The three naked girls ran out of the house, and got to the van. "Start the damn car!" Felicity shouted. "I can't! The keys were in my pocket!" Nina yelled. "Well we can't just stay here all night with a bunch of horny perverted ghosts! Let's just run into town and call someone to help us!" Edith screamed. The three girls ran naked away from Enfville Manor. They called Barry, a TV producer who aired their findings on TV. He sent someone to pick them up and collect their cameras in the house.

Later that day, Edith, Nina, and Felicity were sleeping in their motel room when they got a text. Edith read it and it said that Barry was going to show their footage of Enfville Manor uncut and unedited on TV. "That's great!" Nina said. "We have great proof of ghosts on those cameras." "You did of course edit out our humiliating nudity right Felicity?" Edith asked. "Oh, no I never got to take a look at the footage before Barry's guys got it." Felicity said. She then thought about what she just said and all three girls turned pale. The whole country was about to see the three naked girls getting spanked, groped, and practically ****d by ghosts. "Oh no..." The three girls said in unison.

So this was my first ENF story I've ever written. Let me know what you think and by all means, if you have any suggestions for future stories in this series, I'd love to hear them.

[Stripperella]

If you don't mind, I'd like some feedback (good or bad) so I know whether to continue this series or move onto something else

[DrVillian]

I like this story but I think it needs more details in certain parts, like colour of there clothes underwear etc. You did mention Edith's pink thong but apart from that I don't remember any mention of colour aside from there hair. Also I think you should maybe think of slowing the stripping down, it all seemed a little rushed and I couldn't really get into it because by the time I thought okay this is interesting it was all ready over. Maybe some smaller paragraphs might help also but maybe that's just be being a little picky. But yeah nice first story I'd like to see more as I can see room for improvement.

[HoracetheSlug]

You describe the action well, but, as the good doctor said, other descriptions are lacking. You need more aesthetic detail and dialogue to complement it.
A lot of potential here, I look forward to more.