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Old 11-27-2014, 11:41 PM
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This is my first one so it's shit

It's about a hit-women who isn't hired to kill, she's hired to strip

Her nickname: StripHit
Strip Hit was a large strong woman in her mid thirties. You can tell she worked out with her skilled strength.

Story one: Stripping Nora one by one

It was the morning, StripHit was in her room waiting for any business calls. *Ring Ring* She picked up the phone.
"HEY IS THIS STRIPHIT?" A loud female annoying voice screamed. "Yes, what is this about." "I've heard about you Striphit, I need you to go after my daughter Nora! She's at the mall about to get off her shift, I need you confront her and tell her to mate with a male already!"
Striphit was confused, "So you want me to strip her?" "Yes, but see Striphit, I want you to force her to ask out guys, for every time my failure of a daughter gets rejected, I want you to strip an article of clothing off of her. See Nora is a grown ass woman in her 20s and I want some fucking grand kids. Nora's a miserable shy lonely loser who cries in her room for hours because she has no friends. I want to give her a push." Striphit was shocked by this mother's cruelty but she cared more about money than compassion. The mother offered five grand for this hit of stripping. "Freak Petes Mall, right?" "Yes" "Where does she work at?" "She works at the McDonalds there at the food court. She should be off in about one hour, make your hit there." requested the mother. The mother sent a picture onto Striphit's phone, the picture was Nora.
She looked cute with her straight mildly long straight orange hair with cute subtle freckles on her face. She looked healthy and thin.
Striphit wondered why she didn't have a boyfriend. "Alright, it's a deal, I'll give a Nora what you want." "Good"

StripHit jumped into her car and drove all the way to the Freak Petes Mall. The mall was an average mall, there was a lot of people there. Oh Nora is going to be miserable, she thought.

to be continued

....Will continue if people are interested

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Old 11-28-2014, 12:04 AM
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I think the idea of a hitman who strips his victims is quite original but it may need a stronger premise than a mother wanting to push her daughter.
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Old 11-28-2014, 01:18 AM
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It's ok but I agree but it does sound fun so I would like to see how it goes so you have my vote
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Old 11-30-2014, 09:36 PM
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Here's my shitty story alrighty

Striphit was walking in the mall's food court and founded her target, Nora. She looked just like she did in the picture. A cute redhead with a cute amount of freckles and a pretty slim body with cute c cups and a cute butt. She was however a very nervous and clumsy woman, she looked to have extreme bad luck. Her manager yelled to her "DON'T FUCK UP THE FRIES NEXT TIME YOU KLUTZY FUCK" as she walked away ready to get off her shift.
The way she walked looked really nervous and lonely. Her pretty green eyes kept looking at the floor in social isolation.
StripHit started to follow Nora, the big strong woman who was much bigger than Nora tapped Nora on the shoulder. "uh, uh....Hello?"
"Hun, I make a living to this, so don't question me, I need you to go over to that guy in the blue shirt at the table and ask him to go out."
"W-w-what?" sweated the cute young lady. "Do it, or else I will rip off every single article of your clothing. Including your panties. Nora felt a sense of major fear, the woman who's threatening to strip her in massively big and powerful looking with shades. The two looked at each other for thirty seconds. "Oh god.....fine" Nora said with a unsubtle sigh.
Nora's nervous lonely body walked over to the boy in blue. Her face was pouring with sweaty redness. The boy in blue took off his headphones. "W-would y-you like to be m-m-my b-boyfriend?" The boy's face grinned as Nora was going crazy with fear and rejection. "Ah...ahahah....nope, sorry, I already have a girlfriend." Nora turned and walked out fast, she couldn't believe what's she did. StripHit approached her again, "Nora, take off your shoes, losers get rejected, losers lose shoes and socks." "NO I DON'T KNOW YOU! HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME!" StripHit grabbed Nora by her neck and slowly said "Listen geek, for every time you get rejected, you're going to take off an article, we're starting with shoes because i'm kind, but because you back talked to me, take off your socks."
After StripHit dropped Nora onto the floor, Nora tried to make a run for it. StripHit chased her for three seconds due to StripHit's skills. StripHit grabbed Nora again, this time by legs and ripped off her shoes and socks before throwing her onto the ground AGAIN! "Looks like I can't trust you, looks like I'll be doing the stripping right now."
As Nora's scared body got up from the floor, StripHit pointed to another guy, this time a blond guy in red. He looked a macho big guy who would get tons of women in a second. "Now go ask him out." Nora walked over to the guy, she ultimately ran again. "I'm too easy on this hit" said StripHit to herself. Nora ran all the way to the escalators, she couldn't escape from StripHit though as StripHit did back flips from the usual stairs and quickly sprinted to the upper floor escalators. A relieved Nora met with shock when you found the big bulky woman with shades.
"I TREATED YOU WITH MERCY AND THIS IS HOW YOU REPAY ME!" StripHit grabbed Nora and chucked her onto a bench, she grabbed her again and tore off her long purple sweater off of her neck. Nora screamed in horror as a crowd of shoppers saw her white cotton bra. "NO NO NO NO! OH GOD DON'T DO THIS! PLEASE DON'T! PLEASE!" Nora kept begging for StripHit to leave her alone but StripHit wants to give Nora's mom want she wants. "The sweater was for you not talking to him, the pants is for running." "T-t-The pants...."

To be continued if people actually enjoyed this shit
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Old 12-05-2014, 05:47 PM
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yes give us more please
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