Doctor Who Fanfiction

[JakeKim]

Hi. I wrote this in honor of the Doctor Who 50th anniversary. Its my 1st fiction story so suggestions would be helpful. I hope you guys like it.

It was an average day for the 10th Doctor and his companion Martha Jones. They had just finished having dinner with Winston Churchill in 1944 and were back in the TARDIS, ready for their next great adventure. "So where do you feel like going next?" asked The Doctor. Martha replied, "How about we go to the 45th moon of Jupiter?" "Ok, Jupited it is!" he replied. He set the TARDIS for the correct coordinate and pressed the launch button. But nothing was happening! "Doctor, is there a problem?" Martha inquired, with a hint of concern in her voice. "I don't know whats happening, I think there might be some sort of disturbance, interfering with the TARDIS" No sooner did those words leave his mouth, light erupted from the center of the room and the entire place began to shake violently. "Martha hold on!" yelled the doctor. Unfortunately, the tremor was too great and both found themselves knocked unconscious.

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When the Doctor came to, the TARDIS was completely trashed. Their was smoke coming from the control panel and debris was scattered around everywhere. He immediately got up and went to check up on Martha, who was laying underneath the staircase which had collapsed during the accident. "Martha, Martha! Are you alright?" the Doctor asked, concerned, shaking her body in an effort to bring back her consciousness. She slowly opened her eye and saw the Doctor standing over her. "What happened Doctor?" Martha inquired. Doctor replied "I don't know exactly, but it appears that the TARDIS malfunctioned somehow and now we seem to be trapped inside." Their was smoke coming from everywhere and even the door of the vehicle had broken down in the explosion. For a few seconds they were both quiet while they attempted to absorb everything that had just happened. Suddenly, a groan broke the silence. "uuhh, I feel like I was hit over the head with a brick, where am I" said a voice coming from somewhere in the room. The Doctor and Martha both begin looking around, attempting to figure out where the voice had come from. Then a head covered in bright blonde hair popped out of a pile of debris.

"Rose? How and when did you get into the TARDIS?" shouted Doctor in surprise. "I'm not sure exactly. One minute I was sitting around in my house. Next thing I know where was a bright light and I found myself here." "Martha, this is Rose, the one that I told you about. Rose, this is Martha, my new traveling companion." said the Doctor, introducing the two to each other. "Well all three of us seem to be trapped in the TARDIS. Its currently fixing itself but its gonna take a while. Anyone got any ideas to pass the time?" Rose replied, "do you have a deck of cards lying around?" The Doctor went to the living room to look and came back with an ancient looking deck of cards. "Found one, it was a gift from George Washington, I helped him out a little with an incident a while back and he gave it to me as a thank you present." Martha inquired, "What game did you have in mind?" "How about strip poker?" suggested Rose.

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"You can't seriously be suggesting we play strip poker?" said the Doctor, nervously. "Why not, unless you, a Time Lord who has lived hundreds of years and gone toe to toe against filthiest of vermins in all of world, don't think you can beat two little girls in a game of poker?" replied Rose, with enough tease in her voice to push the Doctor's buttons. "I'm not too sure about this either" said Martha, on the fence about actually playing strip poker. Rose took Martha to the side and whispered, "Come on Martha, haven't you ever fantasized about what the Doctor looks like under his trademark trouser and blazer?" This was enough to push Martha over the fence, "I'm in"

They spent the next 15 minutes agreeing on the rules. Everyone will start out with the same number of clothes. Shoes and socks count as one item. The person with the lowest hand of the three strips. No covering is allowed. First person to lose has to serve as waiter while the other two finish the game; when not obeying orders they must be standing up, displaying everything for the other two

Doctor
-Shoes+socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Tie
-Pants
-underwear

Rose
-Shoes+Socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Pants
-Bra
-Panties

Martha
-Shoes+Socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Pants
-Bra
-Panties

With great tension in the air, Martha dealt the cards for round 1

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Round 1
Cards were dealt for the 1st round. Doctor found himself sweating, partially because of his horrible hand of nothing, and partially because of the situation. He always fancied Rose and Martha was definitely attractive. While he could end up winner, with the girls naked, bare in front of him, other scenario was he could find himself naked and embarrassed. He discarded his four lowest cards, hoping for a pair. Unfortunately, he found himself with nothing yet again. Martha discarded 3 of her cards while Rose discarded 4 like the Doctor. After last card was dealt to Rose, everyone put their cards on the table. Martha won the 1st round with three 2s and Doctor found himself last, beaten by Rose's pair of kings against his nothing. He took of his shoes and socks

Round 2
Next round begin. Rose couldn't believe that it was so easy to convince the Doctor and Martha into the game. She was an experienced poker player, even won a few games of strip poker in her younger high school and college days. And lost once, she added to the end of her thoughts. Her mind still goes red remembering that game of strip poker in college between her, mickey, and 2 other girls and 4 other guys. The three girls found themselves butt naked, masturbating for the boys. But it won't happen this time! Rose also wanted to embarrass Martha, who she was as a rival for Doctor's affection. Rose was dealt a pair of 4s right off the bat. Excellent! She discarded her other three cards and found herself with two pair, pair of 4s and pair of 8s. Martha discarded one of her cards, which made her a little nervous. Everyone showed their hands. Surprisingly, Martha beat Rose's two pair with a full house, Aces over 5s. Doctor was clearly hoping his pair of Queen would save him from last this time. Unfortunately, he lost the round and his jacket.

Round 3
Martha had never played any kind of stripping game before, but the chance to see the Doctor naked and to embarrass Rose was too great to pass up. Besides, despite no strip poker experience, she had played poker plenty of times. She was dealt no matches, but 3 clubs. Martha decided to take the risk and discarded her two non-clubs. Her bold action was rewarded with a flush! When it came time to show hands, Martha won yet again and Doctor lost yet again, having nothing while Rose had 3 Aces. With increased sense of nervousness, Doctor removed his tie.

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"How about we make this more interesting?" said Rose. "Not only does first person to lose have to be maid for the rest of the game, both losers have to be slaves until the TARDIS repairs itself" Doctor and Martha were both nervous, Doctor especially considering the rotten losing streak he was on. But both were too proud to back down and agreed. Despite agreeing to it, Doctor found himself thinking, how did i get myself into this situation? He was down to three pieces of clothing while both girls were fully dressed and he just agreed that the losers have to be slaves until the TARDIS is fixed. And who knows how long that is gonna take?

Round 4
Doctor dealt this round of cards. He once again found himself with absolutely nothing and decided to go for a hail marry, discarding all 5 cards. Rose discarded 3 cards while Martha discarded 4. When he got his new hand, his eyes widened! He couldn't believe his luck, he was just dealt two pairs, Kings and Aces. Rose had only a pair of 3s. Fortunately, Martha had nothing. Martha took off her shoes and socks. Doctors losing streak was finally over!

Round 5
Next round of cards were dealt. Rose found herself with a pair of three yet again and discarded her other three cards. Unfortunately, she got nothing. Doctor showed his pair of 8s and Martha flashed her pair of Jack, with a smirk on her face, happy that her rival for Doctor's affection finally lost. Rose took off her shoes and socks

At the end of round 5, Rose and Martha both have 5 pieces of clothes left while Doctor only has his shirt, pants, and boxers.

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Round 6
Martha was not too confident with the pair of Kings she was dealt, but she was certain someone had to have lower. However, its seemed Lady Luck was determined to go against Martha. Doctor showed his three 5s. Then Rose flipped her hand, displaying an identical pair of Kings. Everyone momentarily froze. "well the rule was the person with the lowest hand has to strip" the Doctor pointed out "and as both of your hands are the lowest, its only fair both of you strip." Martha and Rose agreed and both took off their jackets

Round 7
Doctor was feeling lot better about his chances. He could feel himself getting aroused at the possibility of having both Rose and Martha as slaves. With the pair of Aces he was just dealt, he was pretty confident that he's win streak would not end here. Unfortunately, Rose's losing streak continued as she found herself for the 3rd time in a row, at the bottom with her hand of nothing. Martha came in second with a pair of 6s. With a deep breathe, Rose stood up and took off her shirt, displaying a flat stomach and a cute pink frilly bra like the one here
http://weheartit.com/entry/33571545

Round 8
Rose was determined to win this time. She had already lost her shirt and she wasn't going to lose her pants. Unfortunately, Lady Luck had other plans. Despite getting 2 pairs, 3s and 10s, it wasn't enough to beat Martha's three 2s and the Doctor's flush. Rose could feel her face getting warm and red as she stood up and slowly pulled her pants down, displaying a matching pink panties. Her face still blushing, she sat down and prepared herself for the next round

At the end of 8 rounds, Martha was winning, still having both her pants and shirt as well as her underwear. The Doctor had 3 pieces of clothing, his pants shirt and underwear. Rose was in last place in her pink bra and panties

[JakeKim]

what do people think so far, should i continue? Any pointers?

[draconis]

Well...

[Uberwald]

I like it! You've got at least one avid reader here, my friend

[bfambro]

So far so good, I would like to see where this story goes.