[ENF] Precarious Predicaments- new Interactive Story

[Phantompen]

Just want to bring the community's attention to my newest interactive story. With six girls to choose from, and what are hopefully unique enough starting scenarios to give them all distinction, I hope this newest offering will be well received (and well supplemented by other writers?).

Sadly, I do not believe I can post links here quite yet.

[mdot]

Here's the link:
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...s-Predicaments

[Naivul]

Awww. I love interactive stories and check out all those posted here. And your really has lots of potential. But they never seen to develop enough. It's depressing really.

Anyway I hope yours take off. And yeah I know what you are saying. Contribute myself. Well from personal experience in almost over a year no one ever replied to my threads so I gave up.

[Phantompen]

Originally Posted by Naivul

Awww. I love interactive stories and check out all those posted here. And your really has lots of potential. But they never seen to develop enough. It's depressing really.

Anyway I hope yours take off. And yeah I know what you are saying. Contribute myself. Well from personal experience in almost over a year no one ever replied to my threads so I gave up.

Thanks for the vote of confidence. I don't intend to let this story die out, and if it seems to really need resuscitation I'll pump in new chapters as best I can. However, I'd rather work off the contributions of others, since two heads are better than one, as they say.

This reminds me, for anybody reading here: if there is something you'd like to see happen in one of the stories, be it an event or scenario, but don't feel confident writing it yourself, feel free to shoot me a message and I'll see what I can do to write it up for you.

[Naivul]

Well there is a thread that really piqued my interest. So if when I get some free time if it hasn't been developed yet I'll try to add a chapter.

[Z678Vash]

I tried looking at the story, but I can't because it says it's a private item.

[jm6379]

Can't see it mate. Says private item?
Not sure i can contribute. Still stuck on the other one...

[Phantompen]

Ah, sorry about that. The reason for this is actually in the Additional Reading thread.

Basically, in that thread, somebody made a rather good point that stories with as many wildly different paths to choose from results in a weakened item. Basically, all the options resulted in some stagnating completely, and the ones that didn't only managed an update every once in awhile. So, to counter this, the story was disbanded and two of the initial choices were made into stories of their own.

If interest is shown in the other initial choices, I'll gladly remake them as their own standalone stories. For those of you who haven't seen the story, I can go over them again here.

[BigMara]

Sure, lay 'em on us.

[Phantompen]

Alright then. There were three other choices, and the basic gist of them were as follows.

Alyssa (age 18)- An athletic brunette who learns the hard way that school showers are never safe.

Raven and Cheryl (ages 20 and 21)- Two college students who have a bit too much to drink at a party, waking up to find themselves naked in each other's arms. Unfortunately for them, they don't wake up in a bedroom...

Miki (age 24)- On a hot summer day, Miki discovers just how frail a bikini can be while at the water park.