[Request] idea for a story

[crazy Vlad]

hey there i am kind off new here so i thought i would try my hand at a story but my skill is maybe lacking a little so i thought i would ask the people what they think i am from England and i used to live in Essex until about 10 years ago i moved up next to Newcastle i have just tonight watched the series opener of the only way is Essex as i am a fan and it got me thinking all they ever do is argue and made me think a story involving these women would be amazing as there are so many beautiful women and a endless amount off opportunities for catfights and i am surprised we have not already seen one so if i have aroused any ones suspicions who thinks maybe ill try this is more than welcome to message me if they need any details about the girls etc if not i might give it a go but i think it would be better for all of us if someone with talent write it

[rojoa]

Why not give it a shot yourself and maybe people will add to it.

[crazy Vlad]

i will deffo give it a shot my friend

[crazy Vlad]

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Once upon a time in a land called Essex there lived two women who where getting ready for a fancy dress party. These two women used to be friends but like so many women before them a man got in the way it was the villain of our little tail who slept with our heroins boyfriend for the sole purpose of hurting our heroin she was the sort of women every man wants but she only wants the men she could not have.

The first of our lady we visit is our heroine she is a beautiful blonde named Samantha Faiers she was stunning she was getting ready for the party she was to go dressed as Cinderella and had a beautiful blue gown ready to change into. She did her blonde hair up and held it there with a blue ribbon then she put on the dress she looked stunning and she knew it her slim figure hugged the beautiful blue dress she was showing a lot of cleavage as the dress pushed her breasts up to make them look fuller she tied a blue ribbon around her neck and headed out the door ready for the party.

The second of our her ladies is our villain is Jessica Wright She is a stunning brunette who is just as pretty as Samantha but she is a evil women who enjoys hurting other people she was going to the party as the evil queen from snow white her brown hair was tied back in a clip and she wore a red dress with gold trims she had not used her fake tan so her skin was white which in contrast to her dress made her look even more stunning her tits were a sight for the ages as the were pushed up by the corset she wore she took her car keys and left for the party.

The first to arrive was Samantha the party was at a big stately home with a pool round the back in the lovely garden the main party was around the back next to the pool Samantha walked around the back her blue dress swaying she began talking to a few friends when she heard a familiar voice behind her " well well well look what the cat dragged in a wh*r*" " shut the fuck up Jess you silly b*tch can't get a man so steal everybody else's how sad you life must be"
"your lucky i don't kick you arse you little sl*t" "Jess if you honestly think that you could take me on then be my guest but i know you won't you will just stand and b*tch and moan then go home and wonder why you cant get a man"

Before Samantha could even get the end of her sentence out Jessica slapped her in the face knocking Samantha down to the floor " you stupid b*tch Sam i've been waiting for this day for a long time" Sam tried to stand up but Jess punched her in the face keeping the blonde beauty on the floor Jess started stomping down on Sams back causing her to recoil in pain stomp after stomp to Sams back caused Sam to cry out in pain by now a crowd had gathered to watch the fight they circled around them making sure there was no escape for the two ladies of our story.

Sam was still on the floor trying to pull herself up when Jessica kicked her in the ribs causing her to flip onto her back Jess then reached down and started tearing at the bottom of Sams dress the Blue fabric began to tear away exposing our heroins tanned legs more and more of her legs became visible first her when her thighs became visible everyone could see the front and sides of her lace baby blue thong Jess kept tearing away at the bottom of the dress until there was only the top half remaining and her thong was now clear for everyone to see. Sam tired to stand up when she felt a cold breeze on her legs and plump ass she now realised her exposier and began to scream Jessica could only burst out laughing at the site of Sam spinning round trying to cover herself as she spun around she noticed Jess laughing and became livid.

" you stupid b*tch i'm gonna make sure you pay for that" " well Sam i must give you credit where credit is due you do a an amazing ass " This was all Sam could take she lunged at jess taking the brunette by surprise knocking her down Sam began to tear at Jess's dress ripping at the top pulling down causing people to see more and more of Jess's breasts Sam was pulling hard Jess was trying to combat this by pulling at the top of sam's dress Causeing sam to become more and more cautious as jess was tearing at Sams Cinderella dress sam knew her situation and she knew she was in trouble so with everything she had she pulled at jess's dress ripping the dress all the way down the middle showing that jess had gone braless her big breasts showing that she had not tanned any of her body she was wearing a thong with a heart on the front with pink lace at the back and side jess jumped off of sam and tried to run for it but could not get past the crowd who were all cheering on the fight cheering for sam to teach this stuck up b*tch a lesson she had stolen many womens boyfriends and they all wanted to see her get what she deserved.

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jess was trying to escape Sam stood up less concerned about her own exposier she became fixated on humiliating jess she stood up to an applause and a few wolf whistles but she did not care she was a women on a mission to destroy the b*tch who destroyed her relashonship "let me past please anyone let me past" "knowbody is going to let you past skank they all want to see what is about to happen and i see you really are looking for love tonight how fitting that a heart covers you pussy because that is the only part of you that has ever seen some love well maybe your tits aswell they real? " " shut up you skank how dare you do this to me " " oh honey this is nothing wait about 5 minutes and you'll really see how bad i can be "

Jess tried to run at sam but she moved out of the way causing jess to fall flat on her face her ass up in the air sam see her oppertunity to strip the dress of of jess she walks over to her downed enemy and pulls the dress straight off her body causing jess to scream in embaressment at having her arch rival strip her to her underware sam flips jess over allowing everyone to see jess in her full glory showing jess had taken her love theme to the extreme with heart shaped pasties over her nipples her full breasts the main attraction still in her ruby red heels having trouble to stand up.

Sam sees jess trying to stand herself up so she runs over to her and shoves her back to the ground " i knew you loved me but to wear this underware just for me is a real compliment but i have to take it off now so get ready " " please don't ill do anything i don't deserve this " this gets a strip the wh*r* chant started from the crowd of party goers which makes sams mind up " sorry jess " sam reaches over to jess and starts to peel the left pastie off by this time jess is just on the floor crying like a baby sam manages to get the pastie off allowing the crowd to see her pink nipples on her velumtious breasts they begin to stand up to attention as the cold night time air causes her nipples to stiffen. sam then grabs the other pastie and rips it from jess's body allowing her tits to be fully seen for the fist time.

Jess tries to crawl away from her attacker but sam runs after her and grabs her by the back of her thong causing jess to stop in her tracks " please sam not this anything but this" but sam ignored her cries and started pulling down more and more of jess's ass became viasble untill her whole ass is seen her plump ass gets all the attention now making jess's pale face go a bright shade of red sam is still pulling untill the thong is at jess's ankles lucky for her she is able to lay face down and cover her sn*tch at the back sam then takes off jess's heels and throws them over the crowd pulling the thong off of jess leaving it laying on the ground " well jess it's showtime everyone wants to see that famous pussy off yours " "no Sam don't ill do anything ill do anything you want ill fuck you ill fuck ill lick your pussy ill do anything" " you dyke b*tch i knew you was a lesbien i would never want you to do anything to me im not a dyke you dumb b*tch" that was the last straw for sam she was done fucking around she went over to jess and grabbed her pulling her to her feet she called into the crowd for help she asked for someone to go into jess's car and see if they could find anything to tie her hands with her bff ferne mcann came back with a pair of pink furry handcuffs " i found these in the car sam " " you kinky b*tch jess i bet you was looking for a women to do this with were'nt you"

she grabbed jess's hands and tied them behind her back allowing the crowd to see jess's pussy covered by her pubic hair shaped into a heart " hahahaha i cant belive you have shaped your pubes into a heart haha. jess was now crying her eyes out she had been humiliated by a woman she hated and now she feared what would happen next.
sam was now done with this wh*r* exxept for one more thing she dragged jess over to her car she pushed her into the back seat and took a glitter pen from the front dashboard and on jessicas ass she wrote love hurts then draw a heart next to it and kissed it leaving a lipstick mark on her ass then she pushed her into the car slamming the door behind her. walking away sam wondered why she enjoyed it so much she had a tingeling feeling between her legs when she stripped Jess she left the party on the way home wondering about maybe humiliating more women and taking down snobs like jess a few pegs. As for jess she was stuck naked in her car ass up against the window many pictures were taken of her most intimate areas and she has to deal with the humiliation of having this happening to her she was finally freed when her mum carol found out about the insodent and came to save her at 4 in the morning.

so this is the end of our story for now but i get the feeling we'll see our heroine again because as we all know there are no such things as happily ever afters.

[rojoa]

Nice catfight story

[crazy Vlad]

thankyou very much for the feedback