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Old 03-11-2018, 04:11 AM
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Default Stripping

Good story and great build to it , but the stripping was not there , and her eating hay is different , but you probably could do better

What I am saying is how you said two minutes after she lost Sasha was naked .

You should have let Emma strip Sasha of her top or shorts during the match , then strip the other half after the match .

But , I did like how Sasha tapped to her own finisher that was good that has rarely been done , in real life or in stories .

What would part 2 be if you don’t mind me asking ?

Maybe Bayley tries to save her friend .

Maybe Emma gets a interview with a certain Renee Young , and things get heated .

Maybe Emma can try and become absolute .

Maybe Emma can prove she’s the wicked witch of the wwe .

Or , maybe Emma can prove that there is someone ready for asuka
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