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Originally Posted by Alexandra80
I agree but then again fiction should make at least some sense and be believable. It is very hard to believe that an adult person who is not mentally disabled would agree with that such bet proposal straight away. Even the threat of violence from the bully towards rich woman would be better than nothing. It would still be very improbable but at least not impossible situation. Blackmail, for example evidence of adultery of a trophy wife who will lose everything in the case of divorce, would be even better.
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I agree.
The reason has to be believable... For example from my point of view is believable to make use her self-conceited in a kind of activity, where she feels herself very strong and invincible... Kick up her...
Back to the roots:-) What is most important? Stop this discusion and start to write a story:-)
I am very sorry. My limited English is not good enough to create an impressive piece of work... But...:-), reading your stories is improving my English:-)
Thanks to everybody who contributed in this forum.