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This is part one of the story I've been working on is my first attempt at writing. I look forward to some constructive feedback or comments.


Diane and Sarah were in the women's changing room at the local water park. Sera had purchased two new swimming suits for her and her friend, they were a new kind of strapless and backless bathing suit. The suits held on with a type of glue, and were guaranteed to never slip off and provide a perfect Tan. Sera was 5' 8'' with blond hair and a very slender figure so slender in fact she was barely a B cup. This was the one part of her body she was embarrassed of. In order to Compensate for this all of her bra and tops were patted in order to give her a fuller look. She had been doing this so long in fact, that all of her friends except for Diana think she is a natural 36C.

Sera often called Diana "D" not only was it her first initial, but it matched Diana's cup size which sera was very jealous of. Diana was a little shorter with bright curly red hair. Standing at 5'6'' she is only a few inches shorter than sera and "D" had a true woman's body. She not only had the incredible chest but the ass and hips to match and with them being tone and fit she is the object of many men's affection. However because she had always had this unwanted attention she was very shy and rarely showed off her assets.

Sarah had an ingenious plan to change that today. As the girls were getting ready to improve their Tans and enjoy a cool swim on this hot summer day. Sarah failed to mention to "D" that the glue that holds the tanning suit on only works when it's dry...

P.S. this tanning suit really does exist, I think that's my favorite part of the story.