I usually like ENF stories but God damnit that was badly written. There is no way that could ever happen to anyone in the history of ever. x.x And I don't mind a bit of weird or unlikely stories but in order to enjoy something you need to be able to believe it could happen, at the very least in the context and world it is happening in. And that story does NOT sell it.
There's another ENF series about a girl called "Erica" who keeps ending up naked, I like them because they actually tell a story that makes you think it could happen, in those Erica has to follow along with the idea that she's a little girl because if they realized she was a grownup they'd be very harsh on her and she'd be in trouble. In this story it's just a poor reason to get the story going.
Sorry but this wasn't good stuff.
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