I'm not here to judge whether or not the o/p is full of shite (although I suspect you are right). Some of the best "true" stories on here seem fictional, merely because they are so well written and transport the reader to a place where they can imagine the exploits happening in front of them.
That is sadly not the case here. One short paragraph and then the question - "want more?"
Well no actually I don't.
If I'm outta line here then I'm sure I'll be smacked down but hey, if she's such a massive sl*t then slam her against the wall of the Motel and pull her panties to her knees, whip out your mobile and get her to say "cheese"!
Secondly, grab my interest, fill me with details, how did she smell? What colour was her underwear? Did she belch after swallowing?
Just try to stop it from merely being words -after all, this section isn't called "Erotic Single Paragraphs"
