Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] The dream flute
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Old 01-28-2011, 05:41 AM
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Interesting start. A quick spell check would have made it a bit easier to read, but other than that, I really liked it. The story has some interesting potential, and the chapter was short, sweet, and to the point. Keep it up ^_^.
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