Thread: [Non Fiction Stories - First Time] Brother and sister complete their education with us!
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Old 09-19-2010, 02:30 PM
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I am sure this is a great story - but have you not heard of paragraphs? This is really difficult to read without paragraphs! Just a tip for future postings!
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