Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Jinxed - Chapter 1
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Old 12-29-2009, 06:04 AM
cerindclvr cerindclvr is offline
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I've been struggling with the concept of proper commentary since I saw this story a couple weeks ago. Words continue to fail me, but it is suffices to say that this is one of the best enf stories I have ever read. And there have been quite a few..!
Something about the characters, the lovely description, the excellent pacing... it all comes together quite perfectly. To understate it, I can't wait to see more.
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