I'm so frequently (just) outside the loop...
Firstly I am writing to say that that was a very good story. Simple, colorable, and erotic. But dammit, I am routinely taken in by something that seems just realistic enough. . . and then I find out that it's fiction. But anyhow, great story, and the additions (as reported by Roxanne) really did flesh out the story a bit, so good job and thank you.
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