I originally posted the story on Literotica and decided to post part 1 on OCC when the site opened a fiction thread. I did not get too many responces here so I refrained from posting the remaining parts as well. Not that I am an ego chaser, but I assumed the story was not that well received and don't want to clock up the precious space on OCC that we have to post beautiful girlies with my written drivel

. The full story is open and free to read at this link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions
Thanks for the interest.