[Cigar4u]

Hi Hans:

Good start to the story.

Had you kept the fight in the office, as I initially thought you would, I would have written in a wonderful scene involving the office's high-powered shreading machine and Diane's clothing and undergarments, assuring that not only would she be stripped in the fight but also she would have to go home naked!

Oh well. You can't have everything.

But there are plenty of neat implements of torture for a defeated nude woman at a gym -- exercise equipment to which Diane can be bound and spread, the co-ed pool or whirlpool bath for repeated head dunking and the communal showers that could be used as a gauntlet of scalding hot water for a raw Diane to be forced to run through!

This story has great possibilities.

But I think Helen should write the next part, given her excellent skills at really developing the characters.

Or maybe some first-time contributors can put a good slant on this. You only have to add three or four paragraphs and someone else can take it from there.

I'll join in and write for the fourth or fifth segment of the fight. I want to see more people participate in this thread on a more frequent basis. This is a good way to do that.

Let's all work together and make Hans' story come to life!