Hi,
How you think that amarican babes would reacting in this situation?? Tell what they would do when loosing bikinis like us.
I think that you could not image our embarrasment when we walked through hotel lobby, only high heels on foot.
We are not so brave what you think... I think that we covered "all" just like americans.
At least we have to get to our room, guys doesn't want to give bikinis back to us and we did not have any towels
And thanks for tips to grammar.
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Originally Posted by Cigar4u
That was a good story in English by a person who obviously doesn't speak English as a first language.
I understood exactly what she was trying to say.
And I found her accent quite sexy. She sounds almost Russian or Eastern European, lke Bulgarian or Romanian. Regardless it was exotic and erotic.
To help you out here a few tips in English for future stories:
-- You are 175 cm "tall," not 175 cm long.
-- You were playing "in" string bikinis not by string bikinis.
-- The male pronoun is "he" not hi.
-- You bought white swimsuits "instead" of bikinis, not instate.
There were other errors too, but overall it was a fine story in broken English. I was able to form an image in my mind about what you were explaining and it was hot, especially the part where you had to walk through the hotel lobby nude. American girls are far too modest to do that. You European babes though are obviously a lot bolder when faced with ENF situations.
You keep on writing Julia. Your English will get much better as you practice it.
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