The good news is that you got a girl to pose nude for you.
Her skin looks great against the leaves but, otherwise, it just can't seem decide what kind of picture it wants to be. The pose does make her look like she was dumped. She pretty much formless. Try something from a lower vantage point that captures some curves. Also, try taking more during sunrise or sunset when the light is coming in at a lower angle. Put her between you and the sun to experiment with backlight (frame out the sun itself of course.)
One last thing I would suggest is that you frame out her breasts/etc.. with the camera, and not with strategically placed leaves. Try it with the first few pics to make her comfortable.
She'll at least let you show her asscrack if she went this far.
Don't use any flash.
I dunno, that's what I'd do. What you have isn't very feminine, but maybe that's what you were going for.
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