[Cigar4u]

Hi Sceej:

I agree with Helen – I loved your story. It was well developed, well crafted and had most of the elements that we all like in a good CFNF fight story. I especially loved the lime green painted toenails to match the lime green bikini Debra was wearing!

But, did I misread something? Did you allow Double D Debra to keep her panties on? That’s a no-no on this thread. We like our losing women around here to be completely nekid! Remember, it’s CFNF not CFTF wrestling and fighting. Why would Joyce pass up the golden opportunity to thoroughly embarrass Deb by letting her keep her bottoms on?

I too have a foot fetish – especially for gals with big feet – so I absolutely loved the tickling of the size 10 feet. I didn’t think that would work in a fight story, but you managed to write it so that the tickling added to Debra’s shame and made Joyce so damn dominant. Bravo!

The only criticism I would have other than allowing Debra to keep her bottoms on – and mind you this is a small thing – I would have had Joyce hoist Debra out of the water by her nipples instead of having a bunch of men help her out and grope her boobs. What you wrote is just fine and just as erotic. I just prefer a woman to manipulate another woman’s sensitive nipples in a CFNF fight.

Please, if you can, post the rest of the Joyce vs. Debra matches when you get a chance. I’m sure they are all fantastic.

And, in honor of you posting your first story on this thread – and to salute boobs in general, especially big ones – here are some photos of women twisting other women’s nipples during CFNF fights: