I like the idea of both. How about a mix of the two scenarios? And do you, Helen, want to write part two of the story?
That goes in for the next point you mention, the combination of two situations in one story of one sided catfights. Great idea! Want to post an example of it?
As you can see in my last post, I obviously have a thing for watching cheerleaders get humiliated in catfights. Why? Because everyone's watching! Except for that, I also like beach fights, because both sides are so vulnerable, but one of them is smarter than the other!
The fight's ending in a story is also important, I think. What does the humiliated girl have to do after the fight? Does she have to run stark naked home, or is she (for example) tied up in front of everyone to see?
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, by the way!